RiKara: The Trial Honeymoon || Note: Page 127 - Page 14

Originally posted by: sh_aarohi

This was lovely

Awesome chapter

The Pace of the story is nice and interesting

Originally posted by: ArVi-licious

Hi Savina... First things first... It's a wonderful start to the story..

I wouldn't say it's too fast it too slow.. plus u have updated daily!! and I a lso understand the need to take the first few chapters to set the pace n introduce the characters..

Having said that.. I think we the readers atleast me.. are too eager to know how things are going to unfold btwn these two..

So keep going the way you want.. it's great the way it is :))

Originally posted by: mailanchi

Gauri is such a naughty chirraiya😆 while reading I thought that she was actually snoring and talking in her sleep. I love the scoreboard at the end of each chapter... let's see who is gonna win😕

Originally posted by: sreekailas

This is sooo good to read!! ❤️

Originally posted by: Minalt

Wow so now scores equals.

Yes it's too much interesting.

Feels bad for Omkara. So this is reason behind his khadoosgiri.

Gauri is such a kiddo watching cartoon. I loved this mischievous doll.

Waiting for next update.

Originally posted by: minamma

Haha

Such cute gauri...

Awww

Loved her

Originally posted by: sirimiri

Wow that was another rocking update loved it so much.
Superb continue soon.

Originally posted by: AhamyTed

It's goin really well..!!..👍🏼

this intrigues me even more now...how will they end up trialing ?🤔😆

P.S. U manage to give updates everyday inspite of constant negativities pushing u into a writer's block ...HATS OFF !!👏

Originally posted by: Elation

Loved the story. Poor Gauri😆 caught twice!! Your way of narration is impeccable⭐️⭐️

After the prologue I have mixed opinion. But wasn't expecting what followed. Its fun. At this point, it is really interesting to see how things between them change. Coz, Om seems to be zero interested in her!!

Waiting for the next!!