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Kuki715

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1371

Originally posted by: selvi1275

>>>>>WHAT?...😲...Lashy coming...HMMM 😈

>>>>>>>>Lashy...Dr has asked me to have the above items on URGENT BASIS...
You've kept them for yourself, right?...Bring them NOW...

You rock di😎...too good 🤣🤣🤣

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Kuki715

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1372

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Yes...

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Originally posted by: lashy

No no no... my dear crowns... I can't loose you... my dear dear crowns... I can't I won't

My tummy 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣🤣 🤣

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Shinning_Stuti

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#1373

😲Wooo!!! At last I got to read it!!

First of all a biiiggg sorry for being disappeared for such a long long time. 😔 I missed a lot! I will be regular from now on. 😆

Coming to the chapter... It was quite a long chapter! And truly an intriguing one. The arrangement itself is so composed; the chapter starts with a dark shadow, ends with another dark shade... and in between you have drawn the beautiful picture of the content and happy household of Heera and Akbar in your perfect style... literally this chapter describes how content is Heera with her Khan Sahib amidst of all the signals of a dangerous storm going to break on Parnagarh...

The starting of the chapter was really chilling. While reading about Sayyid's discovery at Parnagarh a chilling current flows through the nerves itself. It was shocking! Whole Adiabad is finished?! Really a matter to be scared now. Sayyid is caught in danger. I worry for him. I think a very interesting read is waiting for all of us. 😃

The next part is quite relishing. Heera is back in her old and happy schedule in her happy Parnagarh. Conversation between her and Mohan Banna was sensible and yet so hearty. I especially loved this part:

'I did agonise over the hard facts... agonised over why our Mansabdar was a part of the enemy camp... till I realised a truth, baisa - Khan Sahib and I follow the same principles... he serves his master... I have been serving mine... I will destroy anyone who is a threat to you - evil or otherwise... he has been doing the same... of course...'

Something very sensible which shows the heart of two very loyal and honest persons... again reminding us that the virtue of loyalty does not have any particular colour.

but, from having known Khan Sahib, I've also come to realise that he must have a good reason for being so loyal to the Shehzaade - not mere greed or prejudice...

Interesting point! 😲

It seems from Mohan and Heera's conversation that something very big will be taking place soon.

Heera and Akbar are enjoying the 'honeymoon period' of their relationship. [LOL] Romantic Khan Sahib is so sweet. 😃 However, I was loving their "falling in love for 2nd time moment" a lot and had wished to get a bit more longer. 😆 Though, it seems this phase of their relationship was needed for the development of the story this time...

While enjoying their sweet romance, I liked the bond of trust and companionship between them. Akbar's dialogue- 'I promised I will tell you... which means I WILL, my love' is very powerful one!

The description of Chaupar game is really energetic and colourful. I remembered the horse-race description all of a sudden!😃 Really cheerful one.😳 So elegantly it showed the lovely married life of our lovely couples 😃

Apart from romancing and enjoying together, our dear couples stand by each other in front of any hazard in life together like perfect life-partners. Loved when Akbar discussed about Khalil and Mahindar with Heera... So Heera wants to involve Kunwar Tejraj... Interesting!😲

She understood. And chose not to ask him more.

Instead, she joined him with a pensive smile of her own - aware that on that day, she'd sacrificed a small part of her innocence to the cruel ways of fate.

❤️

And the most thrilling part- the last part with Mahindar! Nowadays this man is giving me goosebumps. My my! He is such a horrendous and vicious person and in the first chapters I had thought he is just a show-piece kind of character 🤣

Feel sorry for Durga even now! 😔 I often try to imagine what would happen if Durga were alive now?

And IF his plans worked out as hoped, he would be meeting the famed Mughal prince in person, for the first time. With a very interesting proposition to offer. 'The Shehzaade!'

😲 😲 😲 O God!!

You ended at a crucial point! UPDATE SOON!!😆

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Kuki715

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1374

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A
There were explosions and massive thuds in London we were told
By Her Majesty of Hotness parading in a splendid purple and gold
A scamper to taste masterchef ManuRaj's delicacies hot and cold
And big surprises from cousins and admirers all secret and untold.

Whistle podu🥳

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Kuki715

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1375

Originally posted by: lashy
Girls... I am actually in quite a solemn mood. I just read Stuti's One Shot called 'The Sky was Scarlet' and it's darn good sobering read.
It's only short - (shorter than HBAS chapters go 🤣) and after having read it, it's content has made me feel inadequate as a writer now.😊 It's BRILLIANT.

One more thing, it's based on the post-independence era - an unusual era for stories and OSes/FFs/Stories in this forum. 😊 the cigar and the hat

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/jodha-akbar/4966354/new-os-the-sky-was-scarlet

I generally let readers pick whichever works suits them, fancies them etc... but this particular one deserves to be advertised!😊

Thanks di...🤗 Just read it. One of a kind 👏

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Shraddha

@lashy

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#1376

Am off to watch Black Panther😎

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karkuzhali

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1377

Good Morning!

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binduprasad41

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1378

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Good Morning!

Good Morning Sachu Patti and everyone .😳

Happy Saturday 🤗

Good Evening Lana di and Vathsy di 🤗🤗

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binduprasad41

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1379

Originally posted by: lashy

No no no... my dear crowns... I can't loose you... my dear dear crowns... I can't I won't

Aww 😆

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binduprasad41

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1380

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A
There were explosions and massive thuds in London we were told
By Her Majesty of Hotness parading in a splendid purple and gold
A scamper to taste masterchef ManuRaj's delicacies hot and cold
And big surprises from cousins and admirers all secret and untold.

Lovely Sandhya di 👏