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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

u are in LOVE😲
ayse situations me kya bolte hai yaar

umm i miss my cantu bantu here wo situation sambhal lete😕

umm congratulations mabybe😕😆
i dont know

updating bythe way


yup I am in love.. par yaha pe bhi twist hai, just like ur story😉

I was in love with the sory Hazaaro khwaishen aisi by commelina..
but now my new found love is this writer ardentfitzcy & her story master mashai..
& I am hell confused, that how can I be in love with two people at a time??
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5


yup I am in love.. par yaha pe bhi twist hai, just like ur story😉

I was in love with the sory Hazaaro khwaishen aisi by commelina..
but now my new found love is this writer ardentfitzcy & her story master mashai..
& I am hell confused, that how can I be in love with two people at a time??



🤣

Edit -- @LovelyUmang and Spoorhi..
You both are having an interesting conversation..could not help myself but put this emoticon 🤣
You made my day.

Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part #4

For the next half an hour or so the whole place was in panic people having dinners left hurriedly, tables were being cleared the manager was on a verge of getting a panic attack. He kept apologizing coming to them every five minutes and kept requesting them to complete their dinner the bills would be taken care of. In between the whole chaos his constant nagging was starting to give him a headache.

They were seated towards far end just near the entrance, which was the only area a little clean from all the glass pieces. Rest the workers were tiding up trying being careful not to hurt themselves. No one had any idea of how it all happened

She was cleaning up his cuts being careful not to hurt him, while he was lost looking at her wounded self. Gaining some courage, he took the first aid box which was provided by the staff for which he was truly thankful for and stooped her hand from reaching him

You are hurt too love! He said holding her hands in his.

What just happened? Maan I'm so sorry for bringing you this place, I just ruined our date, right? She dropped her gaze to our now intervened hands

He gulped down his fear and tried to gather his thoughts. If what she was now was true then he needed to get her out of this place right now

I think we should head back home, we'll plan something sooner? Your wounds seem, to be deeper love they would get infected too... let's get you checked at the hospital first

He thought she would say something but she kept staring at our hands, when he slowly tried to release his hands her eyes snapped towards him which caused him to jump back. Her eyes were hollow and dark and with his sudden motion she reached out and grabbed his collar pulling towards her

Don't believe everything you see LOVE, we would never let you be alone! She said and in the next second, he was engulfed in the darker trap. There were empty houses every were engulfed in darker clouds which cracked with every step he took

He tried to shut himself from the agonizing cries, of loss, he could hear grieving every were, he looked around to find an escape. The terror he was feeling began to suffocate him. Opening his shirt buttons he kept his legs moving where his legs carried him.


Amidst the dark fumes emitting from the place, he could see it was an abandoned under construction building. He had seen it somewhere, he tried to recollect before he could take a step towards the building he bumped in to a small child who had his toy gun pointed towards him


Maan just wanted to escape from the place which was closing on him as soon as possible, so he side stepped the boy not caring to apologize. Before he could take a step away he was stopped by a tiny hand clutching his leg.


He looked down at the kid shocked with the kid's strength, while the kid pulled his toy gun and shot him. His eyes widened at the real pain caused through his body and his mind jolted awake. All he could remember was the menacing cold look the kid gave him, and his eyes were covered with his own blood

Looking around he tried to locate the kid only to realize he was still in the restaurant which was now empty with only the manager looming over his head.

Sir? Sir? He was calling him in an unsure and there was some kind of urgency in his voice

What is it? he snapped trying to ease the pain in his head.

Sir? Are you alright? You seem to be hurt badly... he said pointing to the read blotch forming on Maan's shirt and that's when maan noticed the place which he was shot with that toy gun was bleeding... but it was because he was stabbed by a piece of glass!

Sir? Umm?! the managers mumbling wasn't helping him with tonight' events at all. And on top of it he didn't understand why he was still standing over his head.

Sir, the lady who came with you has been found unconscious in the ladies' washroom.

What!! Maan turned to his side to see her gone... she wasn't anywhere around him too... rushing towards the washroom he pushed open the door to find her lying down on ground. There were not injuries or even small scratches on her body anywhere. The ridicules pencil was still in her hair, just as it was before she entered the wash room


He slumped down beside her unconscious body running his palm down his face in disbelief.






It takes just a second for the heart to follow its next beat, how long does it take to discover the reason of its next



To Be Continued...





p.s: this part is dedicated to all those people to thought you figured out his girlfriend😈

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Posted: 8 years ago
🤣
this is too good yaar😆

M usse pm kardo ye post please😆
y should we have all the fun😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
res.. will read at mid night😉


HAILA!! yeh kaisa twist tha..
His girlfriend turned out to be one among those ghostly people..
Toy gun se maara aur ye mar gaya,😲
kitna zyada musterious update hai..
O teri bete ki!! GF toh waha khud mari padi hai, toh iske saath kaun thi??
By the way kaafi improovement hui hai aapki writing mein..
pata chal raha hai padh ke.. but mujhe phir bhi darr nhi laga, thoda sa shock zaroor laga tha woh washroom wali gf ko dekhkar..
Kaafi saare ideas aa rahe hai dimaag mein, but i will keep them in my dimaag only..
kyuki aap toh kuch batane se rahi..
pata chala maine sahi bhi guess kiya toh madamji ne story hi badal daali..
par ek secret bolu.. enjoy bahut kiya aaj ka update.. aur meri toh nahi phati, par bahut logo ki phategi ye wala update padhkar..

Edited by LovelyUmang5 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
^^

Abhi karati hoon PM Commelina ko..
that one of her readers is shifting her loyalties..😉😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5

res.. will read at mid night😉

sure😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest



🤣

Edit -- @LovelyUmang and Spoorhi..
You both are having an interesting conversation..could not help myself but put this emoticon 🤣
You made my day.

I am obliged!!😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

^^

Abhi karati hoon PM Commelina ko..
that one of her readers is shifting her loyalties..😉😆

Hey!! I never said anything about shifting loyalties..
I love them both equally..
I am the point where bella had to choose between edward & jake😉
but mujhe toh ye bhi nhi pata k kaun edward hai aur kaun jake
Edited by LovelyUmang5 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5

Hey!! I never said anything about shifting loyalties..
I love them both equally..
I am the point where bella had to choose between edward & jake😉
but mujhe toh ye bhi nhi pata k kaun edward hai aur kaun jake



Arrey kya farak padta hai, Edward ho ya Jake ho..finally both were non-human and loved Bella..isn't it?

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