AvNeil SS ~ Colliding With Each Other...Again {Pt 7A} - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: AvNeil_TV

Hey,

NICU please update today... it's a boring Sunday without NK... Please try

I started writing the next chapter. I'll try to post it by today, Kanika. Cannot promise, though.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aphrodite_NV

Thank you so much Sri for that precious feedback of yours. No matter whether a person has moved on, his past always resurfaces in some course of life. Same goes for Saesha. The next update is going to focus upon Neil's POV only. And writing it is extremely difficult 'cause putting up a smile when eyes are filled with tears,only Neil Khanna is pro at that.
Love,
Nivi

Hey just a request . Let Ali be around him . I have always missed their friendship which was long forgotten by CVs . Even Avni's last wish was Ali to become rock for Neil .
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Posted: 7 years ago
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AvNeil SS ~ Colliding Each Other...Again


Instlment 2


The saddest thing in the world is losing someone you love and who loved you...


The room was pitch-black similar to the dark moonless night outside, synonymous to his life, dark, hollow and empty...that's how he is since the last ten years, since the day he lost his Avni due to the fire accident. They have come a long way from hating each other to friends to husband-wife to lovers to soulmates, the journey was not easy, numerous problems they tackled together yet it was worthwhile because they had each other side-by-side.


'Every morning I smile Avni, every morning I smile remembering your promise. But how can I spend these nights knowing you aren't here to snuggle closer to me, wrap yourself around me, mutter 'I love you' in my ears.' He complained like a child. 'Kabhi toh aao Avni, sapno mein hi sahi. Sukoon se soye hue dus saal hogaye hai. Main sona chahta hoon tumhare god mein...' And one more night passed like this with him staring at her pictures.


The sky was coloured in bright hues of oranges and reds as the sun rose above the horizon indicating the start of a new day, new beginnings, new hopes for many. Neil glanced up at the wall clock which showed half past seven. He straightened up and entered the bathroom to get ready for the day.


His eyes were puffed and dark circles were clearly visible due to the lack of sleep the previous night, while brushing he looked at his reflection in the mirror. Taking a quick shower withing five minutes, he dressed up in simple denims and black checkered shirt. He had his watch on one wrist and her wedding chain on the other. Locking his room, he swiftly descended the stairs and found his parents and grandmother having their breakfast.


'Tillu aaja, aaj na maine tumhare liye tumhara favourite sandwich banaya hai' His mother chirped.

'I am not hungry, mom. Will have something later.' He replied and left the mansion. Swetha looked at the retreating figure of her son and then at the meal she prepared and then towards her mother-in-law and husband.


'Don't know when will he learn to be happy again. Bohot dukh hota hai Bebe jab main is Neil ko dekhti hoon, jo apna saara dard apne andar hi kaid karke rakhta hai, kisi ko dikhata hi nahi hai.' Swetha weeped at her son's misery.


Raabta, Neil's Radio Station


'Nayi subah itni sayani ho jaye

Aapki dukho ki saari baatein purani ho jaye

De jaye itni khushiyan ye din

Ki khushi bhi aapke muskurahat ki

deewani ho jaye...


Khushamdeed' Neil greeted his audience warmly, taking a sip of black coffee from his mug upon which is letter 'A' engraved artistically in bold red.

'Aaj..aaj hum baat karenge mohabbat ke bare mein. Main aap sabke saath ek kahani share karna chahunga...meri kahani share karna chahunga.

Samundar ke lehron mein mile the hum dono, gussa uski aankhon mein aur khalal meri. Infact, she actually rose her hand to punch me, thinking I was a man of no good intentions.' Neil chuckled, reminiscing their first meeting, well clash would be a better word. Taking another sip of the beverage, he continued,

'We walked into deep pits of the jungle quarreling almost like kinder garden kids, oblivious to what fate had in store for us. I was intrigued with her, her enigmatic kohl-filled eyes and the mysterious aura she created around herself. She had the curious glances of mine, glances of the former A.C.P of Mumbai. We headed back to our places, somehow contacting our near ones, praying fervently to the Almighty to be the first and the last encounter with each other lest we knew this was beginning of our tale, written using the inks of angst, pain, suffering yet with unfathomable passion and sublime love for each other.'


Tuning onto a romantic song, he announced 'This song is for those romantic people who have found their soulmates and for those as well who are in the course of finding.'


Ajeeb daastaan hai yeh

Kahan shuru kaha khatam

Yeh manzile hain kaunsi

Na wo samajh sake na hum...


'hume bhi kaha pata tha Avni humari daastaan aisi hogi.' Neil thought, letting the lyrics overpower his feelings.


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And, it's a wrap for the second chapter. Apologies for the delay and short chapter too, had a throbbing headache since yesterday and severe eye pain too. I was completely restricted from touching my laptop, leave along typing anything. Taking a painkiller and eye drops, I typed whatever I could.

In the anticipation of your feedbacks,

Cheers,

Nivedita


Edited by Aphrodite_NV - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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It is awesome Di👏. Love it. Take rest and get well soon. Update well u are OK. And plz don't use lappy and mobile until you become absolutely fine. Love you itna saara
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Posted: 7 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: 16043051

It is awesome Di👏. Love it. Take rest and get well soon. Update well u are OK. And plz don't use lappy and mobile until you become absolutely fine. Love you itna saara

Please don't call me di, I might be younger than everybody on the forum, in fact might be the youngest. Address me Nivi, as most of them call. And thank you so much, for the quick feedback and also for so much of love. Though headache has reduced, eye still pains. But the satisfaction of satisfying everybody with the chapter has forced me to post this evening. Off to rest now.
Love,
Nivi

P.S. If you don't mind, may I know your good name please. Since it would easy in addressing. I'm sorry if I've hurt you.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#26
Thank you for the second chapter , hope you feel better soon loving both your stories.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nivi,

Dear take care of yourself keeping well is the most important thing other thing follow.

Now coming to your update it reminded me of the first post leap episode...

Very well written...

A request dear please make Ali and DD part of it... less villains and no Metali...
Edited by AvNeil_TV - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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A very interesting start. Do continue soon..
And as far as I can see, I like this Saisha. 😊 Will look forward to how Neil lands up in Neilanjana's life.
Take care.
Edited by Atyay - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: sp13

Thank you for the second chapter , hope you feel better soon loving both your stories.

Thank you so much for the appreciation. Well yes now I'm better, waking up after 14 hours of sleep. Glad to know you liked my other story as well. Btw, which one is it Entwined Destinies' or Red String of Fate'?
Love,
Nivi
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Posted: 7 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: AvNeil_TV

Nivi,


Dear take care of yourself keeping well is the most important thing other thing follow.

Now coming to your update it reminded me of the first post leap episode...

Very well written...

A request dear please make Ali and DD part of it... less villains and no Metali...


Thank you so much Kanika. Now I'm feeling better, the pain has reduced considerably. And I'm glad you loved the second chapter. I kept the first episode after leap in my mind while writing, so naturally it turned out to be like the one. I don't know how am I supposed to include Ali and DD at the moment, but they will be in the plot for sure. Mitali will surely be less, can't understand and tolerate third angles and their crazy obsession for the protagonists.
Love,
Nivi

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