Masoom Ishq #15

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nigah

@nigah

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#451

Lovely update...

Waiting for next update and also update soon...

Pm me this story...

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 7 years ago

#452

fab VM and terrific VM! update soon

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Gurpreet16

@Gurpreet16

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#453

Omg ... what a teaser maan to gaya ab very good he should be... geet rocks get ur rights girl

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dhrastimaan

@dhrastimaan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#454

Lovely teaser

Awaiting for part 77

Will you be updating it today

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Princey

@princey_

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#455

Lovely VM... let's see what happen now

Waiting eagerly for update

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Papon Tabassum

@paponecon

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#456

nice teaser...wtng to c geets bold avatar n how maan will control his desire now

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seema saini

@HateMee

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#457

Originally posted by: gorgeousqueen.

Arrey seema
Take it as healthy discussion.. I love it when someone read my reply on her comment and start chatting me
I have seen your comments on yaariyaan and i really appreciate your efforts to. Post comment on each update
Aur rahi baat shadi ke baad ke track ki to yes physical intimacy is needed between the couple who are in a love marriage. Arrange marriage may take time to move.. Yahaan to love narriage hai.. Bepanaah pyaar bhi hai... But still there is some thing missing.. To ye to kisi ke dimag ne bhi doubt paida karega na.. Yahaan to ek kiss bhi nahin hai.. Mera focus
Bas uss barrier ko todne par hai
And please don't say sorry ever
It's discussion between the reader and the writer 🤗

Nai vo I always admire strong lady lead characters aur jb finally Geet ne Gussa dikhaya par phir ek se ye sb drunk an all...to mujhe jo lga keh diya... First u used LOL word mere love word ko literally love smjh kr...phir your objection on Seduce word isliye sorry khaa

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#458

Originally posted by: HateMee

Nai vo I always admire strong lady lead characters aur jb finally Geet ne Gussa dikhaya par phir ek se ye sb drunk an all...to mujhe jo lga keh diya... First u used LOL word mere love word ko literally love smjh kr...phir your objection on Seduce word isliye sorry khaa

Oh ;ove ko to maien normal wala love hi samjha aur mujhe laga ti tum ko lagta hai ki Maan doesn't love her..That's why I said he loves her a lot..😆😆

abhi yahaan I m not talking about physical love ..I just want Maan to break that barrier where he thinks of her as a child.That's all..let him fall for his wife first uske baad dekhte hain for that physical love..aur waise bhi I usually don't write those detailed love making scenes😳

chalo ab confusion clear hua

and please never say sorry again..and always be free to discuss what ever you want to👍🏼

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#459

Lovely teaser.

Talli Geet in action.

perfect song for geet's situation.

Maan to yaha se bhi bhag raha hai.

Seduce word bura nahi hai. she doing same to get loved by her husband.

I remember both have shot this with diff body doubles.

But VM se lagta nahi hai ke maan kuch karega.

Lets see what both will do.

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Marium

@MariumChoudhary

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#460

Beautiful vm 👏

and perfect teaser 😉

Though in every sequence same thing was result MAAN holding back 🤣

well well let's see how things will be coming to us in this form of teaser 😛

Slightly difference would not matter but Only Maaneet would be accepted 😳

Some more lesson for Angel to not underestimate His Mitthu 😆

And a big big Congratulations for being winner cause you deserve that and you are a good writer so it's all we can do Only appreciate you 😊

But Pardon me I could not contribute my One vote to this appreciation as Miss.Kawaii and SLY comes 1st always in line 😃

but that doesn't mean I am not found of this story and I was not feeling good either all these days marketing Sly to compete with this one too in those last days but then posted Link on this thread to as I read this story I can do the least to support this one too... But no matter what end of the day I'm big crazyhead for Miss.Kawaii and SLY ❤️

Once again congrats 🥳 Winning with 134 votes ⭐️

I would wait for double update though 😉

but can be late to read I've exams in a Few days will be held up...

Edited by MariumChoudhary - 7 years ago