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nemo316

@nemo316

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#271

I feel bad for Sukor, especially Suraj his world has been shattered.

Loved the talk between the queen and Suraj, it was heart touching.

I'm happy that the family are standing together and ready to face the world.

Hope Imvaan are taught a lesson because they're despicable creatures.

Hope Paakhi can help get Sukor back together.

Eagerly waiting for next.

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#272

Originally posted by: sumsukor
Maithu
Feeling bad for sukor but i feel he will realise and get her back

Loved the mom son revelation

Feeling positive that everything will fall in place

Yes my dear Sumi!

For sure SUkor will be sukor in the end ;-)

Happy you loved the duo of Mon Son

Always be positive ;-)

Thank you dear

See you

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#273

Originally posted by: katheriene
Beautiful update👏
Finally Suraj accepted his family from the bottom of his heart
Loved the mother son reunion😊
I think Vivan will have to face queen & Suraj before crowning as King😃
I think Pakhi wanted to talk about Chakor
Waiting for next

Thanks a lot dear for this lovely message

Finally happy that he accepted to dear Heee

Happy you loved the combo of Mom & Son

Yes of course Vivaan will have to face them LOL

Poor Pakhi she is not in good timing! :-(

Let's see soon what happens

Thank you once again dear

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#274

Originally posted by: meshmesh
I feel bad for Sukor, especially Suraj his world has been shattered.
Loved the talk between the queen and Suraj, it was heart touching.
I'm happy that the family are standing together and ready to face the world.
Hope Imvaan are taught a lesson because they're despicable creatures.
Hope Paakhi can help get Sukor back together.

Eagerly waiting for next.

Don't feel sad dear!

He is a strong matured man, so all will be good

Happy you loved the talk

Always Family(Mom & Dad) the first support!

Hope they get a good lesson too dear

Let's see with Pakhi ;-)

Thank you so so much

See you soon

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 8 years ago

#275

Awesome Chapter

Suraj seems worried is it about his role as King but then he also portrays a careless playboy image

loved how the queen and son's conversation swayed he did get great support

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#276

Originally posted by: taahir004
Awesome Chapter

Suraj seems worried is it about his role as King but then he also portrays a careless playboy image
loved how the queen and son's conversation swayed he did get great support

Thank you so much dear for reading and liking it

Happy you loved the convo of Queen & Prince

Keep on reading

See you soon

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#277

Part 33 (Previous part : Part 32 )

With heavy snow falling outside the assembly, in this earlier morning, few people inside the assembly were precipitated to finish the work in their hand.

"Here is the marriage certificate!" The registrar said as he passed a document and a pen to Vivaan.

Getting the pen and placing the certificate properly on the table, he passed it to the lady besides him with a happy smile "Darling!"

She simply putting a mask of smiling face, took the pen and signed it before giving him back so that he can do his work.

And these things are happening in the presence of the Prime Minister who looked pissed and the registrar only.

"Done!" He announced as he bent his head a little and peeked her cheek with her closing her eyes in pure disgust as she showed her cheek.

Getting away from him "Now that we are married" facing the Prime Minister "Let's concentrate on the business at the hand!" she announced while Vivaan gave back the marriage certificate to the registrar to be validated.

"Well! The coronation cannot take place until a majority of the King's council officers are present." he informed with a straight face as he looked not so happy with the events.

"The interregnum will expire this afternoon, so I suggest you to hurry!" the man who just now got married said as he stood by his wife side.

"The law clearly states that the Queen must preside at the ceremony!" Prime Minister as he stood face to face with the couple "And it's Christmas Day!" he said smiling.

With an angry look "I don't care if it's Christmas or not! Go get her!" she with no respect for the elder man who looked at them with a hint of hate.

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On the other side of Canamaris, inside the airport, she took a seat with her heart in her hands as tears threaten to fall from her eyes with her fingers playing with the bracelet offered by Pakhi..

Seeing that she has plenty of time in front of her and she needed to speak as the guilt and fear pressed her down, she pulled her phone out and dialled the only number that could rescue her at whatever time it is and wherever she is in this planet.

"Hey Chakor dear! Merry Christmas!" her father answered "It doesn't feel like Christmas without you here!" he said from the other side of the line "How is Christmas going there?"

"I'm at the airport Dad! Waiting for my flight!" she answered trying to be normal.

"Yeah?" he asked excited to see his daughter soon "You got everything you need for your story already?" he enquired.

"Hmmm Some!" she said as her voice cracked.

"That's good right" he stopped as he heard few sobs escape her lips "Okay! I see it's not good!"

"No Papa! Everything went wrong! Everything happened in a way I didn't expect. The person I was worried about hurting just got crushed and that too because of me."

"It's probably not as bad as you think dear!" he tried lifting her mood.

"I failed Dad! I bombed! I crashed and I burned!" she said as she gathered herself while the onlookers where having their eyes on her.

"So! It's a learning experience!" her father said but she didn't look convinced "You know what!" her father continued "Failures plant the seed for greater successes down the road."

"I wish!" she said heaving a breath and something clicked in her head that made her eyes twinkle "Wait a second Papa! What did you just say?"

"It's a learning experience!" her father repeated as looked on confused and uncertain.

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Thank you buddies for reading!

Hope you all liked this part too!

Let me know it!

See you soon!

Love is the air = Love for you, for parents, for family, for friends remain in the air until we breath!

❤️ Happy Valentine's Day ❤️

Next part : Part 34

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#278

Amazing update👏

I think Imvaan married each other for power😡

The Pime Minister was not pleased with the development😊

Loved Chakor's father, his advice always give Chakor a new dimension😊

What got into the brain of Chakor

Waiting for next

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#279

Originally posted by: katheriene
Amazing update👏
I think Imvaan married each other for power😡
The Pime Minister was not pleased with the development😊
Loved Chakor's father, his advice always give Chakor a new dimension😊
What got into the brain of Chakor
Waiting for next

Thank you so much dear!

Happy you liked it

Of course they got married for the power only :-|

Glad you loved Chakor & her father's conversation

See you soon with the next part!