RiKara Drabble's #18 pg. 67 14/07/2018 - Page 19

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

I really hope someday Omkara will know about the tortures Gauri went through since her childhood..
Omkara should know everything to realise Gauri endured a lot and deserves every happiness now...
I want him to treat her like a baby..a princess..
We're getting some cute scenes in the show..but being a die hard Rikara fan from the starting I cannot be happy with these random scenes..
So hopefully we'll get some heart to heart convo where Gauri will disclose everything about her life and Omkara will share the happenings of his past with Gauri..
You are one of my fav writers in this forum Amel...and I really want to read more and more of your amazing writings...



I really hope that Too! Om should know everything to really understand how strong the woman is he loves, how much she had to endure and how deeply he misunderstood her. There relationship could have been so beautiful but I am happy the way they met and everything happened because that gave us the most unique wedding in TV History😳

I want to see Om pamper Gauri , to caress her hair while she is asleep, to pamper her like a princess( like u said 😳)

I know what you mean I am happy whenever we have some Rikara Moments but the Randomness and the seconds are not enough 😭😭 We want more

@bold: Omg Tasnim thank you so much. It is an honor that you feel that way and I hope I will always have your support and love. This way I will never stop writing maybe I will take some time but I know you will always be there thank you ❤️

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rithika2015

loved it... its super..

keep writing more...



Thank you :D
Will do😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: devildiva21

This was a very beautiful and emotional shot...
The way you described Omkara's reaction and Gauri's fear was 👏 👏
He should know about all the tortures she went through... either with Kali or with her Chacha Cahchi... and breaking down with guilt Kara... you could actually feel his emotions... loved the way gauri handled him!!!



Thank you Divya glad you liked it 😳
emotional scenes are very hard to write but I tried my best and I am happy that you felt it was good enough😳


I always love when Ri consoles her BrokenKara because that is who she is as a person.
She loves him and would rather be in pain or hurt than seeing him that Broken.
She wants him to be happy in life, she wants THEM to be happy :D❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
Very emotional...😭 same time beautiful...i really wish to see a scene like this in show also(expecting too much ...i know...😕) i want Om to knw about evry torture faced by Gauri...how helpless she was at that time n her attempt to seek his (Om)help...How she was chained like an animal (😭) n how she got sold to Kali by her chacha- chachi (😡)...We got a chance to read it through ur drabble...Thanks Amel for writing this...it was 👍🏼👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago


Mel 🤗

Loved the drabbles... so much of what could have happened to RiKara
Thanks for giving us the same.
I love people who can conjure a drabble ❤️... for writing with few crisp words is so challenging... and you do it so gracefully.

Keep drabbling dear 😉

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: The_Inner_Voice



Mel 🤗

Loved the drabbles... so much of what could have happened to RiKara
Thanks for giving us the same.
I love people who can conjure a drabble ❤️... for writing with few crisp words is so challenging... and you do it so gracefully.

Keep drabbling dear 😉



Thank you so much for your lovely words dear😳 It is harder than it seems to wrote short dribbles because sometimes you find the perfect words and the perfect amount of words and yet sometimes you start writing and it's gets longer and you try so hard to convey what you want to say without using too many words 😉

Your compliment really means a lot🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Spyngli

Very emotional...😭 same time beautiful...i really wish to see a scene like this in show also(expecting too much ...i know...😕) i want Om to knw about evry torture faced by Gauri...how helpless she was at that time n her attempt to seek his (Om)help...How she was chained like an animal (😭) n how she got sold to Kali by her chacha- chachi (😡)...We got a chance to read it through ur drabble...Thanks Amel for writing this...it was 👍🏼👍🏼



Oh thank you 😳 Really glad you enjoyed it. It is always sooo hard to write emotional scenes, to make the readers feel what the characters feel😳

I know what you mean dear! Till date I want Om to find out everything, to really break down on realizing what happened to his wife before they met and afterwards: all the torture and the pain :((


Thank you for reading it❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thank you for your support and understanding my dearest Readers 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
And after what seems like forever I am finally back with a Drabble :)
From now on I will work on the requested Drabble's as you know and this one is requested by my dearest Lizzie- on of the greatest Writers I have ever seen 👏 Please do check out her Stories like Girl Friday or The Kara Series 🤗

Please enjoy this Alternate Version of the Babaji Ki Booti Scene :D I hope I have done justice to your imagination and your wish 😳

The original Request: Can you, if possible, write an improvisation after babaji ki booti scene? Because it was a bit abrupt with him falling asleep. Come on we should have more credits to Om's stamina to > Lizzie


Gauri looked at her intoxicated Husband and tried her best not to laugh at his attempts to get close to her. Initially she was scared but seeing that he was not in his senses was too funny until he lifted her up and carried her towards their bedroom. Her heartbeat quickened and she tried to stop him, she didn't want their first time to happen when he wasn't in his senses and especially if they haven't reached that stage of marriage yet. Yes they loved each other but it would be too soon. Because after all the time since they got back together they were so caught up in their family matters that they never had the chance to even talk about that aspect of their marriage. She knew he was ready because he had been in a relationship before and though it bothered her it couldn't be changed. He had a past and she accepted that ever since the day she accepted that this man was her husband and she loved him. He never made her feel inferior to his past, he never made her feel unsexy.

"Gauri... Hearing him say her name she looked into his beautiful dark brown eyes and for a Moment he seemed sober. Like he was actually aware of what was happening around him, between them in that very Moment. His lips found her cheek and she blushed while he slowly laid her down onto their bed. Though he was intoxicated Omkara clearly knew what was happening around him, that he was here in their bedroom with Gauri in front of him. How could he not know? She was the most beautiful and soft woman he had ever seen and feeling her body so close to his was even more intoxicating than any drug or alcohol he had ever tasted. Whatever had caused his state he was partly grateful for it because it took away his inhibitions of getting physically close to his petite wife. He had always been afraid to approach the topic of intimacy because he feared her rejection. Omkara knew he could live with anything but being rejected by Gauri. Without her he couldn't breath and he needed to feel her. His fingertips drove over her arms up to her neck and then cupped her cheeks. Gauri blushed and tried to look away when Om softly turned her back to him. He saw the shyness in her eyes and felt regret thinking how he once termed her as a characterless and shameless woman. She was anything but shameless. Gauri Omkara Singh was pure and innocent, she was kind and genunine with a big forgiving heart. How could he not Love her?

"Gauri...Meri pyaari Gauri... His words were lost in the crock of her neck while his lips nibbled on her skin. His Hand settled on her Hip while the other one grabbed her Hair, causing Gauri to moan and arch against him. She knew she should stop him but it felt too good, she didn't want to fight against her natural desires anymore. Satisfied with what his lips had done to her neck he moved to her lips and looked at her desire filled eyes.

When he thought she was beautiful before he was clearly mistaken, her red neck and hazel eyes were the most beautiful sight he had ever seen and he would have loved to paint her like this but that meant leaving her and her lovely body, something he couldn't do.

"May I? He whispered; his lips merely an inch away from hers and Gauri closed the gap between them. Their Lips met and she shyly opened her mouth so his tongue could taste hers. Both were lost in each other and Gauri- while still kissing him- opened the buttons of his Kurta. Omkara sighed and took it off before pressing hot kisses on her slightly visible cleavage. Her Hands found their way into his hair and he groaned before kissing her once more.

Gauri was overwhelmed by the many unknown sensations she felt while he caressed her skin, while his lips touched her wherever possible and his kisses taking her every breath.

If she had known how beautiful Love making was, she would have tried to initiate romance earlier. But looks like she needed her well known desi formula for that.

Suddenly remembering what had caused Omkara's inhibitions she tried to push him away but he didn't move an inch. He looked into her eyes and saw all the love she possessed for him.

"Omkaraji you are not in your senses...We shouldn't be doing this.

Her words made sense to his sober heart but his intoxicated mind didn't allow himself to agree to her. He was consumed by his desire for her, all these pant up feelings he had.

"Gauri I love you. His voice was so sincere and genuine she stopped thinking and pulled him in for another kiss. His finger undid her neck holder Top and soon he placed kisses all over her shoulders and once again on her slightly shown cleavage. He had a hard time not taking her then and there. Her Hands found their way on his back and he knew for sure he would have marks by the way her nails scrapped his skin with each stroke of his tongue on her skin.

Her lips found his neck and Om groaned slightly. He never knew his innocent wife could do something like that. Shocked by her own behavior Gauri blushed and turned away from him.

"Don't be shy Gauri, not in front of me...Not now, not ever. He kissed her shoulder blade and slowly turned her around, so he could look into her face. She smiled softly and placed her Hand in his. She felt safe with him, his touch didn't scare her like it did in the beginning when he would grab her forcefully to make his point clear. And in that Second her Heart was about burst with all the love she felt for him. Just knowing that he wanted her in that way made her feel sexy and confident as a wife, as a woman. And all she could think of was saying : "I love you Om...
His eyes light up and he had the most beautiful smile on his face when he heard her say I love you. She hadn't had said it after their disastrous break up and knowing she still felt that way was comforting and helped him sober up a bit.

"Om..Tumhara Om... His voice was a barely there whisper and she nodded and they kissed each other once more, before his lips found her neck and stayed there once again.

After what felt like an eternity did she realize that he had stopped kissing her. Surprised she pushed him away slightly and saw that he was deeply asleep. How adorable he looked.

With a chuckle she kissed his forehead before standing up to fetch him another Kurta and put it on him. He looked like an innocent child with the cutest pout she had ever seen.

She laid down beside him and snuggled closer to him. Unconsciously he pulled her into his arms and finally his facial features relaxed. After observing him for a while did she realize that he wouldn't relax until she laid next to him or in his arms and that made her the happiest woman alive. Caressing his face, she placed another kiss on his forehead.

"I feel almost sorry for the fact that you won't remember what happened tonight...but I can't wait to do It again. Gauri whispered before falling asleep in her Husband's embrace.



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Posted: 8 years ago
That was wow
Thank you so much for writing this dear

I'm glad confessed even if it is in intoxicated stage.

Gauri is not afraid of any intimacy after all it is also form of their love

Her promise in the last line was the best. So next time will lan initiate or will she wait for her omkaraji to get intoxicated again?

Well, in my mind their next time will be proper with no alcohol involved.

Thanks again dear

Loved it a lot

Was waiting for this one

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