Soothing the Fire- Thread 2 (Ch-33 on Page-57) 17.10 - Page 28

Originally posted by: vivacious_gurl

Payal consummation in Goa wud HV been too soon in their relationship... Their relationship is just blossoming ... Taking it to levels beyond wud HV been only physical need and not out of love ... Coz they r smitten by each other but they r still away from being totally in love ...

Am frankly waiting for the time they get back from goa...Tia is still to be dealt with ...Mrs Kapoor and now even daksh... Daksh isn't going to keep quiet about shivika... It's obvious that he will create problems so waiting for all that to come up... Frankly payal was daksh needed at this point in time when Tia n Mrs Kapoor were still to be taken care of?

Originally posted by: rainbowveins

Thankyou for understanding Gouri di! You're right it would have indeed been too hasty. I keep forgetting that even though I've been writing this story for months, the actual time line has only been a couple of weeks in the story. On the chance that Daksh does create problems, it will be a different kind than Tia and Mrs. Kapoor since these two don't have any personal problems with Shivika. I haven't really decided on the future plot yet but I'm not planning on making it too dramatic. Anyway, thanks for your feedback <3

Originally posted by: vivacious_gurl

U know I had actually forgotten that this FF existed too...I asked a couple fo times for update since Nov n then forgot... Lolz... Time line in the story is just I guess 3rd week since they shared their feelings for each other...so too soon anyway for consummation ...

Btw I'm waiting eagerly for u know the what na...the dialy dose of the update on wattpad... Lolz... yeah it's me only who keeps writing mad comments there ... Lolz