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Lakshmi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: richa_kapoor
Part 1 awesome ;)
Bear this short comment... Sare repost karne padenge na 😆
But will give proper comment from Part 5 😉

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Sure...further parts in progress 😉

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Lakshmi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
Part 1 - heart wrenching update! wonderfully written! Maan saw Geet at his FH and fell 4 her! Maan and Geet forced 2 get married! but Maan cannot forget his Pari! Stupid Maan did not see his wife's face! he is unaware that his wife is his love... hated Maan! he is so rude and heartless! Feeling 4 Geet! she is helpless! Maan behavior was unjustified! Geet shattered! Shantima consoles Geet! but Geet has decided 2 leave Maan! she has suffered so long and so much! Maan so gng to regret! but the damage is done! update soon! nice pics

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Lakshmi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: ammu5
Interesting start...

Thank You dear 🤗

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Lakshmi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: anu5
Interesting start Akka !!
Liked it
After completion of their exams , Geet and her friends decides to celebrate and cherish their time by partying. Geet and Ridz landed up at wrong address whilst Geet was lost in serene beauty of the ambiance. A year passed by but still Maan was down to his memory lane and was reminiscing the day he saw Geet and fell in love at first sight. He adores her and names her Pari as he was unaware about Geet's whereabouts and identity. Destiny tied Maan and Geet together but in it's own way. Maan was tricked into getting married to Geet forcefully hence he never saw his respective wife's face and never acknowledged her as his wife as he lost in his Pari's memories. He was impolite and unchivalrous towards Geet. Geet was left shattered and despondent.
Nice precap!
:))

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Lakshmi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Alamelu
oh wow what a start...seriously maan has no idea he has what he has been searching right there with him and he is dismissing her away thinking of her but not seeing...really wish he saw her face then he would know that Pari is his wife Geet...they are one and same...
poor geet...

Thanks for liking the start 😊

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Lakshmi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: maan-ki-jaan
Nice story, nice update. Sad for geet. Maan married Geet but so foolish to not see her face for a year! Looking forward to more.

Thanks for your lovely comments dear 😊

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Lakshmi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: T.Peru
Nice update
Maabn and geet are married
But Maan love someone else
Poor Geet how rudely Maan behave with her
Update soon

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Roopa_1

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Posted: 7 years ago

#38

my fav story... 😳 In love with this story...

Maan sees geet in his farmhouse and loved geet at the first sight... She is his pari.. He is in the thoughts of his pari when geet hugged him and he was agitated by it.. He is frustrated as he couldnt find his pari.. 😭 He is even more upset because of his unwanted marriage.. As a result he had insulted geet and he didnt see her face... Poor geet.. 😭 She is bearing this for one year... He insulted her by saying that she is illiterate... Godd.. He is soo heartless. How can he do like this ?? Atleast shanti maa is there to support geet. ... Even she didnt likes the behaviour of maan ... Geet lost it ... She want to leave for hosiarpoor .. She for last time wanted to meet maan but he had broken her heart ... Maan should repent a lot now .. 😃

Cant wait for next part ... Waiting waiting 😳

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Lakshmi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming
very emotional start
his rudeness silently killing her
poor girl

WELCOME to ORP 😳

yes...you are right...its silently killing here..

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seema saini

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Posted: 7 years ago

#40

Wohh wow interesting story ...he loved her... married with her from last year but he don't know that she is the one...in all this poor Geet is suffering...

Edited by HateMee - 7 years ago