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Now I want both AdNi to do some important Pooja as a married couple
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@ Chitra
See what you have done ... some have exam fever , I have moving ( country ) issues , others have personal n household issues yet we all turn up and wait with waited breath 😳 for the biweekly updatesif your highly engrossing n heart throbbing story between these two lovers who are our ruin 🤣 for sure 🤣
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Dearest Chitra my darling how are you? have you watched Padmavat? how was it? coming to the story it is only getting better day by day. my most favourite part was the morning scene after their suhaag raat. my Advay, sigh! eagerly waiting for the next part. at the moment I am very busy with life but entrapped is 24/7 on my mind. May Allah Grant you all the happiness in life. love you a lot
Allah Hafiz.
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Oh I am so addicted to this story
I have reduced coming here due to studies
But this story is in my head 24*7
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I love that she does not have to do all the house work now
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@ Chitra
See what you have done ... some have exam fever , I have moving ( country ) issues , others have personal n household issues yet we all turn up and wait with waited breath 😳 for the biweekly updatesif your highly engrossing n heart throbbing story between these two lovers who are our ruin 🤣 for sure 🤣


Will be back
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Dearest Chitra my darling how are you? have you watched Padmavat? how was it? coming to the story it is only getting better day by day. my most favourite part was the morning scene after their suhaag raat. my Advay, sigh! eagerly waiting for the next part. at the moment I am very busy with life but entrapped is 24/7 on my mind. May Allah Grant you all the happiness in life. love you a lot

Allah Hafiz.


Hello luv,

Yes watched Padmavat on sAt, HMMM i didnt like it, but I dont know if u like that SLB style grandeur u might liek it, but it is a clean movie and family movie, PG i would say.
Its ok for 1 time watch, but i wouldnt receommend it as there it didnt touch my, didnt no anything for me.

Be back to write in detail.
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I am good what about you dear yes I am great great fan of Vijay sir and very happy to know you also Vijay fan so I have one more Vijay fan with me


Oh cool, yeah me too I love Vijay he is an amazing actor IMO
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Disclaimer...Hmm Is this A ...I dont know yaar, maybe it is ...lets just say it is ..teek hai...Parts of the Content is 18+


Chandini stretched herself in her bed. The sun was seeping softly through her curtains. What time was it? She rubbed her eyes and asked herself. Her body ached deliciously... everywhere. She loved this ache, it was the good kind of ache, the kind that brought a smile to her face. She frowned at the white ceiling. Where was she? She was in her room. She didn't remember sleeping in her room. She scanned her memory and a sudden shiver ran down her spine as the events of the previous night flashed before her eyes. They were on the terrace gazing at the moon. When had she made it to her room? She raked her memory again. She gasped out loud as the memory of balancing herself on the edge of the terrace wall flashed before her eyes. She blushed to a deep shade of red. What had she done? Had she lost her mind? What if someone had seen them? She frowned again to herself, he did have a point, she was with her husband. There was nothing wrong in that. Or was there? She frowned, she was going to have to talk to him about this later. A soft giggle escaped her lips as the memory played in her head again. It had felt naught yet she had enjoyed it once she had let go of her inhibitions. But it was risky, too risky. She could have died. She had lost her mind to have been leaning back against him as euphoria had cascaded upon her. What if she had fallen down and hurt herself? She shuddered and cuddled against the warm cozy pillow under her cheek. It felt smooth but it didn't feel soft, she frowned turning her head to check what was wrong with her pillow. She gasped, it wasn't her pillow, it was his arm. She slowly turned her head to her side to find him sleeping peacefully beside her, yet again spooning her in his arms. She sighed revelling in the warmth of his embrace. His arm was the most comfortable place to rest her head on, only just after his chest, she reminded herself, admiring the breath-taking tattoo glimmering on his sculpted chest. She poked her fingers into his bulging biceps again and smiled to herself. Hence why she hadn't fallen off the terrace wall, her husband was too strong to be true.

Something poked in her back. What was it? She turned her head and gasped to find his arousal poking in her back. She giggled to herself, he was fast asleep, yet his body behaved in strange ways. Maybe he was born with a defect, she thought with a frown. She squirmed back into his chest and allowed the entire length of his body to cup against her back. They were a perfect fit, there was no doubt there. She gazed down at the arm holding her in place around her waist and the other hand cupping her breast from across her chest. This was the most comfortable position to sleep in, she sighed nuzzling against his arm. If only they could lay here forever, but the sun had risen.

She scratched her hair yawning to herself. What time was it? Was it time to wake up? But her body wanted to rest for a little while longer. Her gaze fell on the the bruise on her wrist. She gasped, they were finger marks. She brushed her fingers against her wrists and gasped again to find similar marks on the other hand. There were fewer bangles around her wrists. What had happened? Where were the rest of her bridal bangles? She frowned at the cuts on her wrist. What had happened the previous night? She remembered balancing herself on the terrace, but what had happened after that. Were there gaps in her memory yet again? She wondered, wincing in pain as she brushed her fingers on the bruises again.

"Does it hurt?'

She gasped at the sound of his low gritty whisper from behind her. She turned her head to find Advay smiling at her. She smiled back leaning back into chest.

"Morning.' He said, wrapping her into his embrace. "Here let me have a look.'

Chandini admired his handsome face with pride as he took her hand into his.

"You are going to have to get used to it,' He sighed, assessing the cuts and bruises on her wrist, "I am a rough man...I like it rough.'

She blushed nervously, not that she was complaining. She liked it too.

"I'll buy you more bangles.'

She nodded with a smile, holding his hand in hers. She frowned at the cuts on his palm. She gasped, how had he hurt himself. Why hadn't she noticed them before?

"How did you hurt yourself?'

"The broken glass on top of the compound wall.'

She gasped again, hence why his hand had been bleeding when he had stopped her from running away on their wedding day. She placed a soft kiss on his palm with tears welling her eyes. She was responsible for this.

"I am sorry.'

"It's okay,' He kissed her temple, "I am sorry about your hand too.'

"I remember falling asleep on your chair.' She lifted her gaze to his, "when did I get in here?'

"I brought you here,' He said, "it was getting chilly in the morning. By the way, you didn't fall asleep on the chair...you fell asleep on me.'

Heat shot to her cheeks at his words.

"Was it good last night?'

She nodded softly, struggling to hide her flushed cheeks.

"Do you remember everything we did last night?'

She shook her head, she was still groggy. Maybe it would come to her later.

"You learnt how to ride me.' He smirked, "turns out, you are a pro at it.'

She gasped out loud and covered her face with her hands as the memory of her thrusting herself up and down his arousal on his easy chair flashed before her eyes. Had she been moaning loudly? Yes, she had been. She cringed at the memory. What was he turning her into? But it had felt amazing.

"Now do you remember what we did last night?'

She nodded biting into her lower lip with embarrassment.

"Told you, you are not as proper as you would want me to believe you are.'

She pouted to herself to hear him chuckling like the devil in her ear. The memories of that moment flashed before her again when he had rested back on his easy chair and helped her straddle him. She had lost her mind and let go of herself on his hot delicious body. A wild passion had consumed her as the sweet pain had crept inside her again. She gazed at his chest, brushing her fingers on the crescent moon-like marks. Had she clawed him? She probably had, she didn't remember, but how had she earned the bruises. She frowned at her hand again.

"That was when I grabbed your hand and twisted it behind your back.' He winked, "remember?'

"Why did you do that?'

"Just felt like it.'

"Is it because of this?'

"No,' He chuckled examining the scars on his chest. "those are from the night before last. From the night of the wedding.'

A gasp escaped her lips. When had she done that? Why didn't she remember any of it? She gazed at her burning wrists again and raked her mind for the memory.

"I felt helpless.' She blurted as that moment came back to her.

"That was the whole point of that.' She frowned at his words, "just because I let you ride me doesn't mean you are in control of me. I wanted to remind you that I was still in control of that moment. That you are still my slave and I am still your master.'

She rolled her eyes. Him and his ridiculous rules.

"But why did you crush my bangles.'

"I didn't do that, you did that,' She frowned, really? How?

"You were struggling to free yourself. Those bangles were collateral damage I am afraid.'

She frowned at her hands again missing the lost bangles.

"Did you like last night?' He asked again, "is there anything you want to discuss?'

"I am confused.' She whispered, biting softly into her lip.

"Confused about what?'

"I am not sure if I was comfortable with the idea that there could be people watching us.'

"You mean you didn't like being watched.'

"I am not sure,' She frowned, "Besides, I don't think we were being watched.'

"You never know.' He winked.

"What were you thinking when I mounted you on the wall.'

"That I was scared of falling down, of breaking my bones and of you having to carry me naked to the hospital in the middle of the night, and of how you were going to explain why I was naked on top of the ledge in the middle of the night.'

He laughed out loud. She was the craziest girl he had known.

"And then I thought I saw a couple of people huddling in their blankets at the corner.'

"Yet, you came violently, didn't you?'

She nodded. That was true. It was earth shattering, she had actually felt the ground beneath her rock and shake.

"So, you were scared?'

"I was scared initially and then worried that we were being watched,' She frowned, re-living that moment, "and then I couldn't be bothered after that'

She held his warm gaze. Nothing had existed after the first few minutes. Nothing but Advay and his deep dark gaze that was boring deep into her soul.

Was it his gaze that had made her let go of herself like the way she had? She wasn't sure.

"What?'

"I am not sure of this one.'

"Do you remember the moment you came hard?'

She shook her head. She was missing chunks of her memory again.

"There was someone coughing,' She gasped out loud at the memory of that moment. That had sent her ticking off. She blushed to a deep shade of scarlet.

"Would you still say this is not for you?'

She felt shame course through her body. Did that mean she enjoyed the idea of people watching them? She wasn't sure.

"Let's try it again, not all of it, part of it. Let's see if you like it.'

She nodded softly, unsure of why she was agreeing to his madness. Her curiosity always landed her in trouble. But there was no harm in trying. Dev had always let her try everything he had done, swimming in the ganges, riding his bike, climbing trees, making bubbles out of chewing gum. Now Advay had taken his place. Just that Advay had some strange ideas, unlike her innocent Dev. She smiled to herself and lifted her gaze to him, to find him gazing at her exactly like he had been the previous night as she had balanced herself on the ledge. She glanced between his mouth and his passionate eyes.

She tilted her face up towards him and kissed his mouth.

Advay grabbed her wrists, pinned them roughly above her head and got on top of her. She squeaked at the swiftness with which he had pinned her to her bed.

"Don't ever f**king kiss me without my permission.' He said, grabbing her mouth for a passionate kiss. A heavy sigh escaped the back of her throat.

"You kiss me without my permission, you pay a heavy price.' He said, and thrust himself inside her wetness roughly. Chandini moaned out loud at the sudden intrusion. She was seeing starbursts in her head. She had only just woken up and he was already wrecking her world. But she didn't mind it. She struggled to wriggle her hands free, but his grip was too tight around her already bruised wrist. Her hands hurt, she wanted to shriek in pain but moaned instead as Advay began ploughing into her with rigour.

"I remember promising you mind-blowing early morning sex, it is time I fulfil that promise.'

She blushed, but frowned as soon as she felt a familiar tug in her belly. She groaned in despair.

"What?'

"I need the bathroom.'

"Good, take a leak on me or hold it,' He whispered, as he continued pounding into her, "I ain't going anywhere or letting you go anywhere.'

"No please, I need to go.'

"I haven't had my release yet, Chandini.' He growled, "You can take a leak if you like but I am not stopping now.'

She gasped, hadn't he. Why?

"Why?'

"You were exhausted after the second time. You literally collapsed on me...I had to let you sleep.'

"Hmm,' She licked her lips at the sweet ache building in her belly. She wasn't listening to anything he was telling her. He has long forced all the thoughts out of her mind. She could barely form words against the desire that was coursing in her veins.

"You owe me a release,' He whispered in a deep grit, "I think I deserve it.'

She nodded. Her eyes rolled back in her head at the way her insides twisted and tangled with every thrust of his hip. It felt stronger and tighter this time as she began to climb the peaks again. Advay tightened his grip around her wrists on top of her head and pounded harder within her. Chandini moaned and writhed against him. She hooked her leg into his knee and ground her hips into his. Advay increased his pace.

"Hold my gaze,' He said, but she wasn't listening, her moans echoing through the walls of her room, at the force with which he was consuming her. She didn't recognise her voice as she broke into rapture and fell apart in his arms. Her body shook and convulsed violently. Starbursts of pleasure blinded her, but he kept hammering her with vengeance. She could barely hear her own breathing against his pants and his grunts as he emptied himself into her with one powerful thrust after another. Chandini whimpered under him, her own body bursting softly in the after-shocks of her powerful climax. She finally opened her eyes and held his gaze. Droplets of sweat dripped from his soft curly hair on her forehead and her lips. She licked the salt off her lips. Advay locked his passionate gaze with hers and kissed her passionately, he had waited all night on purpose, so when pleasure finally hit him it would shatter everything within him. His erratic heart pounded in his ears, he trembled before collapsing upon her. Gasping for his breath, he finally let go of her hands. Chandini wiped the sweat off his forehead with the back of arm. She pressed her lips to his forehead while locking her ardent gaze with his.

"Was that good?' His voice was rugged.

She nodded, tears of pleasure trickling down the corners of her eyes.

"Chandini.'

"Hmm.'

"You didn't take too long to hit your pleasure.'

She nodded lowering her gaze.

"Do you know why?'

She shook her head. Why?

"Because you are holding on to your bladder.'

She glared at him and gasped with widened eyes. She had totally forgotten all about it. She had to go urgently. Advay chuckled, sucking in a few deep breaths to calm himself. He then moved to his side. Chandini whimpered at the loss of his delicious warm weight over her, but her need was way too urgent. She scrambled to her feet at the ache in her belly.

"Can you walk?'

She frowned at the way he chuckled at her. He was laughing at the way she had collapsed the previous morning, she was certain. She finally got out of the bed and dragged herself to the bathroom. Her body hurt her deliciously, she was loving it. She usually felt this kind of an ache when she had swept and wiped down the entire haveli in one go. But this ache was better, this was a reminder of the intense passion her had poured into her. She brushed her fingers on her wrists again and blushed to herself.

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She finally smiled to herself, stepping out of the bathroom, to find Advay lazing on her bed. She slipped beside him and kissed his cheek.

"You are taking liberties aren't you my little slave.'

She nodded, straightening the black beaded necklace around her neck. Advay chuckled to himself, at her constant reminder that she was his wife before she was his slave.

"What time is it?' He glanced at his watch. It was six in the morning.

"Do you want to sleep for another hour maybe? It's six.'

She nodded. She could sleep all her life if he promised to never let go of her. She nuzzled against his chest, before turning around to let him spoon her in his arms like he was. She gasped at feel of something poking in her back. She turned around to check what it was. She gasped in shock again, he was aroused already.

"What?' He chuckled at the startled look on her face.

She frowned, did he never tire? How was she meant to last six months with an insatiable man like this?

"Is it always like that?'

He laughed out loud at her innocent question.

"It's like that even when you are fast asleep.'

"Is it?'

She nodded in horror.

"It pokes me in my back all the time.'

"It's your fault.' He chuckled like the devil.

She narrowed her gaze, how exactly?

"What do you think is going to happen to me if you keep touching and teasing me with that sexy ass of your,' He smacked her bottom, "you little tease.'

She giggled softly and closed her eyes. Her husband and his excuses.

"I'll wake you up later.' She nodded as Advay kissed her cheek and decided to sleep for another hour or two. It was only just six in the morning. They could wake up at eight. He wound one arm around her waist, while the other arm went back to cupping her breast in the firm hold of his palm. Chandini smiled resting her head on his arm. Marriage was truly blissful.

Chandini whimpered at the gentle strokes of his fingers through her hair. She sighed at the feel of his lips against her cheek. This had been the ritual for the last two days. Was it time to wake up? But she wanted to rest for some more time.

"Wake up my beautiful.'

She sighed, stretching her arms in her bed, no one had ever woken her up like he did. She felt precious...like a princess. She smiled fluttering her eyes open and held his passionate gaze. But frowned, to find him dressed for work. What time was it?

She sat up on her bed and glanced at the clock on her nightstand. She gasped at the clock, it was almost nine. She had never slept this late.

"I am sorry,' She fumbled out of her sheets. "I have never slept this late.'

"Relax,' He smiled, handing her, her cup of tea, "have your tea in peace.'

"But, it's so late.'

"It's fine.'

"I feel bad...feel like a bad wife.'

"Why is that?'

"I should be up before you and waking you up with a cup of coffee.'

"Says who.'

She shrugged, no one did. It was just assumed that a good wife woke early and catered to the needs of her family and her husband. She was ashamed to call herself the daughter of a Mahant.

"No good daughter of a Mahant wakes up at nine.'

"Advay Singh Raizada's wife can wake up when her heart desires... she can sleep all day if she pleases to do so.'

She held his stern gaze I shock. She was no longer just a Mahant's daughter, she was his wife now. Her life had changed in the snap of a finger.

"Besides, you were tired,' He smirked, "and I was responsible for that.'

She bit softly into her lips lowering her gaze to the contents of her cup.

"Hey,' His voice was seductive, "was it good this morning...Did you like it.'

She nodded, unable to hide the red in her flushed cheeks.

"It was amazing for me too,' He said, leaning to kiss her the pink glow in her cheeks.

Chandini lifted her gaze to him and smiled. It felt good to know that he had enjoyed it too, just as much as she had.

"Did you like it?' She asked, leaning into his chest and sipping on her tea. This was the best time of the day. To be woken up with a kiss and a cup of tea.

"Hmm, it was mind-blowing.'

She giggled softly.

"I have no idea about any of this,' She said, "I am nervous sometimes, unsure if I am doing anything wrong.'

"Just follow your instincts and follow my lead,' He said kissing her temples, "I think you are a pro at this. A natural... who knows how to drive me wild.'

She blushed burying her head in his chest. She wasn't sure why but his words were turning her on again. She glanced up to find him licking the coffee off his lips.

"Aren't you getting late?' She finally asked, distracting herself from his beautiful mouth.

"Work can wait till you finish your tea.'

She smiled and went back to sipping her tea.

"Chandini.'

"Hmm.'

"Things will change, once we start training.' He sighed, "I will no longer sleep with you or kiss you, will no longer wake you up with a cup of tea.'

She nodded with a lump forming in her throat at the thought of training. Tears welled in her eyes, at the thought of not waking up spooned in his arms. She lifted her gaze and studied his perfect mouth. The thought of not being able to kiss them felt worse than a death sentence.

"You won't wake me up?'

"No.'

Tears trickled down the corners of her eyes and seeped into the cotton of his white shirt.

"Will you leave for work without kissing me goodbye?'

"Hmm.'

"Why?' She lifted her glistening eyes to his.

"It's best we don't fall into the trap of a normal couple,' He said, "it will be easier to move away from each other.'

Tears finally streamed down her face. How hard was it to kiss her bye every morning? Was she asking for too much? She frowned.

"Chandini,' Advay folded her in his arms allowing her to sob softly.

"Won't you even say bye?' She sniffled between her sobs.

"I don't want to ... but we'll see.'

Advay held her tight as she continued sobbing softly. This was not what she had agreed to. She had agreed to his rules, but this was not how any man would treat his wife. At least she deserved a good bye if not a goodbye kiss. But she was married to a strange me who seemed to want to hurt and torment her. She wiped her face.

"We will start training from next week,' He said, once she calmed herself down, "but we will have to discuss a few things through the course of this week, so you know what to expect.'

She nodded softly sipping on her tea. At least he was here now and she was happy they could share this perfect moment.

"Will you be home for lunch?'

"I will.' He smiled at her, "I am here at the temple. Don't have much to do today. I should be home by twelve.'

She nodded, wanting to ask what he would like for lunch, but stopped, reminding herself they didn't have a kitchen yet.

"When will have our kitchen?'

"Later today.'

She lifted her gaze to him. So soon.

"The painters are painting, as we speak.'

She nodded.

"Today is an eventful day. We are getting the kitchen fitted and all the furniture for the lounge will be in today.'

"That didn't take a lot of time.'

"There isn't much to do,' He said, "The walls were knocked down yesterday, and the first coat of the paint went in. The second coat should dry by lunch time. We should be able to move in by the evening.

She nodded finally licking the last drop of her tea. She could finally venture out of her room. There had been people working round the clock the previous day while she had slept in her room for most of the day. Would they start work on her room next?

"When will start work on my room.'

"Tomorrow onwards.'

She nodded.

"You may have to sleep in my room for a couple of days, while they work on your room.'

She continued nodding.

"Will I have to pack anything?' She asked innocently, "Maybe empty my wardrobe or shelves.'

"No, there is no need for that,' He smiled, "There are a couple of changes to your room. It's a surprise, I hope you like it.'

She nodded while he glanced at his watch.

"Okay, I am going to have to make a move now,' He leaned to kiss her mouth, "Will see you at lunch. Do you fancy anything for lunch?'

She shook her head with a smile.

"I'll see you soon, you can go back to bed if you feel exhausted, and call Murli if you need anything.' He smiled and strode out of her room.

Chandini stretched as soon as Advay left. She didn't feel tired, she felt bored. But first it was time for a long hot shower and for her to get dressed. She dragged herself out of her bed and into the bathroom. She held the bottle of herbal shampoo he had ordered from the Meghu's friends shop. Sandalwood, rose and patchouli, sounded delicious. She took a whiff and sighed out loud. It smelt divine, she poured a liberal amount of the dark viscous liquid on the palm of her hand, it was time to smother herself with this divine concoction.

The thought of training kept niggling at the back of her head as she stood under the hot shower. This was a life she had agreed to, yet it was a life she was totally oblivious to. Why did she need training? Didn't she just have to follow the rules, or was there more to it? Just the anticipation was killing her. She scrubbed her scalp thoroughly, wondering if her Maa was back. No one knew where she had disappeared to. She was worried for her. Who would now make her, her early morning tea? Who would oil her hair and massage her feet at night? Who would care for her Maa like she had? Meghu was busy with her studies and Shikha was young and carefree and she didn't want to burden her with the chores of the house. She sighed, what would her Maa have done had she moved to Delhi with PP? But at least she would have spoken to her and smiled at her. Now her Maa would never forgive her. She could never redeem herself with her Maa, not after what she had done. There was no hope now, but she was not going to give up so easily. Her Maa would eventually come around. She would fall to her feet and seek her forgiveness. But before that she had to get Advay to agree to allow her to visit her family. That was one rule she wasn't comfortable with. Would he agree? She wasn't sure, but she was going to have to try. He did say that everything was up for discussion and negotiation. A warm smile stretched across her lips. He wasn't as unreasonable as she had thought he was. Maybe all hope wasn't lost. Maybe they could still have a life together, a family... a happy ending. She blushed to herself, finally wrapping herself in a soft plush towel also in peach. Had he changed her towels too to match the rest of her room? She frowned in surprise. Yes, he had. Her husband was unbelievable, but she loved him and he was back at twelve. She squealed in delight.

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