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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 7 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc
Taiji thinking about Phulla bua 😉

Yeh kahan se aa gayi ek musibat

Pehle is kadve karele ki kam thi khat pat

Ab jab tak hogi nahi is rajkumari ki shaadi

Milegi nahi mujhko bhi aazadi

Meri har saans lena kar diya hai mushkil

O bai karu kya soche mera masoom sa dil

Har koi mere alava hai inko bhaata

Neh va aisa kyun hai mujhe samajh nahi aata

Hey Prabhu karo koi to chamatkar

Meri naiya bhi lagao aap hi paar

Bholuram ke Nanaji karen humpe upkaar

Humara naam ho jaye sheher mein fir ek baar

Hum bhi baithen kabhi hawai jahaz mein

Baat karungi main in buaji se tab main

Humari hogi tab alag hi kuchh saakh

Yeh dekh sab ho jayenge raakh raakh

Par abhi to hai yeh sapna dukhi mann se Maine maana

Sunna hai abhi to mujhe buaji ka taana 😆🤣

Hey bhagwan! Kya poem hai..🤣 Darling you are born poetess.👏👏 Taiji ka hai masoom sa dil...🤣🤣 Baithegi hawai jahaz mein just to give attitude to Bua dadi.😆 Loved it to the core..One of your best works.👏

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#112

From Sameer's POV-

Tumhara ghar nahin

Circus lagta hai dur se dekhun

Mazak kya pata hai Naina?

Main bhi iska hissa hoon.

Arjun ki karni hai seva

Phir jeetna bhi hai pyar

Sirf tumhari massoom dil ka nahin

Sabko banana hai yaar.

Dekhliya bariki se

Tumhari yeh parivaar

Khali yeh zindagi mein

Reh gaya hun sirf yaaron ka yaar.

Mahal jaisa ghar

Ghar mein koi nahin

Sirf mein aur guitar

Aur suni tanhai.

Samajh nahin paaya

Kabhi khudka haal

Hero samajh ke khudko

Bichaya villain ka jaal.

Itna diya pyar tumne

Kho gaya mein jisse

Itna bhi na karo gussa

Kho na dun khudko phirse.

Dhup chavon ka yeh rishta

Juda na ho sakenge hum

Saath saath ab hai jeena

Kasam hai tujhse sanam.

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P.S.:Don't know how it has turned out.😕

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braveheartdoc

@braveheartdoc

Alumni

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU
Hey bhagwan! Kya poem hai..🤣 Darling you are born poetess.👏👏 Taiji ka hai masoom sa dil...🤣🤣 Baithegi hawai jahaz mein just to give attitude to Bua dadi.😆 Loved it to the core..One of your best works.👏

😆😃

Thanks a lot dear... I came to know about my talent here at IF only... so thanks to IF for bringing out my talent😃

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braveheartdoc

@braveheartdoc

Alumni

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU
From Sameer's POV-
Tumhara ghar nahin

Circus lagta hai dur se dekhun

Mazak kya pata hai Naina?

Main bhi iska hissa hoon.

Arjun ki karni hai seva

Phir jeetna bhi hai pyar

Sirf tumhari massoom dil ka nahin

Sabko banana hai yaar.

Dekhliya bariki se

Tumhari yeh parivaar

Khali yeh zindagi mein

Reh gaya hun sirf yaaron ka yaar.

Mahal jaisa ghar

Ghar mein koi nahin

Sirf mein aur guitar

Aur suni tanhai.

Samajh nahin paaya

Kabhi khudka haal

Hero samajh ke khudko

Bichaya villain ka jaal.

Itna diya pyar tumne

Kho gaya mein jisse

Itna bhi na karo gussa

Kho na dun khudko phirse.

Dhup chavon ka yeh rishta

Juda na ho sakenge hum

Saath saath ab hai jeena

Kasam hai tujhse sanam.
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P.S.:Don't know how it has turned out.😕

Such a cute poem dear... really this family is like circus... and I really feel he has come to set everything right 😃

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dixie123

@dixie123

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc
Taiji thinking about Phulla bua 😉

Yeh kahan se aa gayi ek musibat

Pehle is kadve karele ki kam thi khat pat

Ab jab tak hogi nahi is rajkumari ki shaadi

Milegi nahi mujhko bhi aazadi

Meri har saans lena kar diya hai mushkil

O bai karu kya soche mera masoom sa dil

Har koi mere alava hai inko bhaata

Neh va aisa kyun hai mujhe samajh nahi aata

Hey Prabhu karo koi to chamatkar

Meri naiya bhi lagao aap hi paar

Bholuram ke Nanaji karen humpe upkaar

Humara naam ho jaye sheher mein fir ek baar

Hum bhi baithen kabhi hawai jahaz mein

Baat karungi main in buaji se tab main

Humari hogi tab alag hi kuchh saakh

Yeh dekh sab ho jayenge raakh raakh

Par abhi to hai yeh sapna dukhi mann se Maine maana

Sunna hai abhi to mujhe buaji ka taana 😆🤣

This is too good Manisha👏 😆 Taiji ka massom dil 🤣

Taiji ke sapne fulfil karenge unka Bholuram 😆

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#116

Was missing this creative thread and finally here.

As our forum reaches the 'TOP' this poem is dedicated to our beloved Sameer and Naina.

I am not mentioning from whose POV it is written,its a general poem about ---

Read on to find out.😉

It is a fragrance wafting out of

a pair of intimate eyes

Sense it in your spirit,

Do not defile it with a touch

Do not give it a name

to define the relationship

let it remain as such;

It is a stream of light that

trails glimmering down

for centuries on end

it is a spark that never goes out

a flowing magic that never halts

never stops at any place;

it is not a voice not a note, nor a word

but an eloquent silence;

it is a flicker of smile

that lurks in the eyes, and

luminously hangs over hesitant eyelids

holding untold tales many it waits

on the quivering,sealed lips.

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(Wrote in English because certain expressions were difficult to translate in Hindi.)

P.S.:Thank you for reading.😃

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braveheartdoc

@braveheartdoc

Alumni

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#117

Beautiful Minu...its such a pleasant surprise...nowadays its so difficult to search out threads even😆

Your words always touch my heart...be it Hindi or English...the emotions that you expressed here... really super se upar😃👏...you are really brilliant at writing dear... May God bless you with all the success in future... you surely can try at writing for this PH😃👍🏼

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc
Beautiful Minu...its such a pleasant surprise...nowadays its so difficult to search out threads even😆
Your words always touch my heart...be it Hindi or English...the emotions that you expressed here... really super se upar😃👏...you are really brilliant at writing dear... May God bless you with all the success in future... you surely can try at writing for this PH😃👍🏼

Thanks Manisha 😃 I have given up searching threads..and my bookmarks list is adding on.😆

It is inspired from a poem by my favourite Professor who is my 'dusri maa'. I gave it to her to edit and came this poem with all trimmed and corrections.😃

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braveheartdoc

@braveheartdoc

Alumni

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU
Thanks Manisha 😃 I have given up searching threads..and my bookmarks list is adding on.😆
It is inspired from a poem by my favourite Professor who is my 'dusri maa'. I gave it to her to edit and came this poem with all trimmed and corrections.😃

I usually dont bookmark threads...actually dont know how to do them😳😆