The Eyes You Saw - Chapter 39 and 40 on Page 90 - Page 27

Hmm will wait for Chanakya wrong decision

Originally posted by: 2filmy

Wow you too have that proverb ? amazing

Yes indeed our cultures are diverse but similar too

I understand from where the confidence comes

Nanad seems like a person who will hold on to Nandini

for as long as possible and to extract as many favors as possible

Yes I know she has been kept off information

But I thought at least Lopa would have heard

as whispered rumors float everywhere

And specially as Lopa is a servant and has more access

I agree

Originally posted by: 2filmy

I was actually relishing thinking of the results of this whispering rumor

okie dokie Ash.

Originally posted by: FrankPunch

NIAMAJEN🤗

Thank you for moving from a silent reader to posting your comments !! I am so moved and boosted by your kind words.

@BOLD -

See, this is why I keep asking for comments. The reader's feedback tells the Author whether their story has reached the exact way they intended to narrate.The author, while writing the story, will write it in a flow of a certain angle. At times, they could miss out on some other angle. Or could keep it for later. Or could leave open loops by mistake.

You're absolutely right, we have seen the story MOSTLY from Nandini's POV. Chandra's mindvoice or monologue was kept to the minimum, since he was in the Enemy Camp. Now, I will try to bring more Chandra's mind skills and more Chandra-Nandini back story in future chapters.

Hmm... But you have given me food for thought on the last two lines - Chandra's POV on what drew him to her (i had a brief story in mind for that - but after reading your comment, i think i will have to fine tune that thought😊) ...

Since I was concentrating on the love-hate relationship of these two battling souls, I had not actually given a thought to his relationship with his other wives. Thank you for pointing it out !!

I cant do away with Durdhara since i mentioned her as Chandra's pregnant wife in the story. But I am still in two minds - whether to continue with the Helena character or do away with it ? Since she has not even stepped inside the story yet (I only mentioned her once as Chandra's wife), should I do away with her ? Whats your thought on this ?

Hmm it's hard to say. I was never a big fan of the Helena character, she seemed so horribly one dimensional, but I would be interested to see what you do with her character. Very excited to learn about this backstory from Chandra's POV. I think that's what I'm most curious about, what is the true essence of the love Chandra and Nandini have for each other. Is it physical attraction, is it admiration for each other's qualities, is it two lonely souls finding each other, is it all of these things or none of these things? Is it simply destiny? I'm excited to find out

Originally posted by: FrankPunch

okie dokie Ash.

Are you coming up with new stories ? Where are you writing them?