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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: katheriene
Amazing update👏
So Suraj doesn't consider himself deserving &scared of taking responsibilities😕
Loved the way Queen supported Suraj😊
Chakor &Pakhi moment was beautiful😊
Waiting for next

Thank you so much dear!

Happy you liked this part too!

Kind of he is questioning if he will be up to his father's place and knowledge!

Glad you loved the mother son duo

Hope you like the upcoming moments too!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj
Nice update sis..
Something cooking in suraj's mind..wat was tat?
The way queen supported her son was superb..
I think distance btw paakhi and maths was so long..lol
Chakor and paakhi is having a great moment..😊
Waiting 4 next update sis..

Thank you so much sis!

We will know it soon!

Glad you liked the way Suraj was supported!

Hahahaha You might be right about Pakhi LOL

See u soon dear!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Interesting update

Loved the mother-son talk. Truly appearances can deceive, to the outer world Suraj is an irresponsible playboy, but in reality he's worried about doing justice to the king's role.

Loved Chakor-Pakhi's great escape. The slide scene reminded me of Suraj playing with the kids in the previous part.

Looking forward to the next part.

Thank you Mai

Happy you loved the mother son moment

Yup yaar!

You got it right! He is worried

Well Suraj will come there too LOL

In few hours!

Didn't start to write it! Heee

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: sumsukor
loved it a lot
hmm serious thinking as why he is not feeling right to take the responsibilities don't feel he is shoving but just that he feels he is not ready for it???

liked the mom and son convo and nice the way she is supporting him/

ChaKhi just love it.
super Maithu

Thank you so much Sumi!

Happy you loved it dear!

Well! He want to do justice to that post, so thinking a lot!

That is what mothers are for! Support their children and guide them! Love mothers of this world!

Glad you liked ChoKhi moment, hope you like the upcoming ones too!

See you dear!

Thank you once again!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#135

Part 16 (Previous part : Part 15 )

"We are finally here!" Chakor said to Pakhi who was on the wooden sled "Are you ready for some fun?" she asked as they stopped at some point.

Seeing the little Princess face to fall apart, Chakor got to her level "What's wrong?" she asked.

"It's just that I don't know if I can do it!" the little one said seeing the slopes from distance.

With a smile "If you ask my opinion, I will say that you can do everything you want to." giving her a small push on her shoulder "You are not a china doll!"

With a sad face "It's not that!" seeing the snow spread across her "What if I end up even more more broken than I already am?" eyeing her legs.

"Pakhi! You are a lot more away from being a barren if it's what you think!"

After a small pause, lifting her head as a smile started to cross it "I will be on the front!" Pakhi said lighting her friend's face too.

"If you want!" getting up, she sat behind her student "You ready?"

"Yes!"

"Let's go!" as they pushed the sled forward "Hang on!" it started to slide as both started to enjoy and laugh "Be careful" Chakor said as they passed an area.

"Ohhh!! Speed up!" came Pakhi's joyful voice.

"Whooo! "Yeaaahhh" both the ladies enjoying their little adventure!

"Oh my goodness!" the elder.

"Faster! Faster" the little.

And by that time, Suraj came there in his horse and stopped seeing the ladies.

Seeing them laughing, a smile appeared on his dull face.

"Be careful!" Chakor's voice.

"Oh no!"

"Turrnnn!"

"Ohhh!" and Chakor skipped out of the sled automatically as the sled moved forward and Pakhi was pulled in to the snow with her face on it and their sled stooped at a distance away from them.

As Chakor got up, all she could here is Pakhi's panting and the little one calling her friend's name in a little voice "Chakor! Chakor!" Nearing her, the tutor called her student several time and as she touched her shoulder

"Shall we go for a second round?" Pakhi asked smiling as she turned to face her tutor.

"You prankster! I'm gonna get" and even before she could finish her line, a snow ball hit her.

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Thank you for reading!

Hope you all liked it!

See you tomorrow!

Next part : Part 17

- Maithili

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Sania_suraj

@Sania_suraj

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Posted: 8 years ago

#136

Nice update sis..

Their adventurous sliding was superb..

Omg..is suraj also there..

But too short update sis..

Eagerly waiting 4 next update sis..

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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

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Posted: 8 years ago

#137

Amazing update👏

Loved Chakor & Pakhi's slide fun😊😊

Suraj is also there

Waiting for next

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj
Nice update sis..
Their adventurous sliding was superb..
Omg..is suraj also there..
But too short update sis..
Eagerly waiting 4 next update sis..

Thank you so much sis!

Glad you liked their adventure!

Yup he is there!

Sorry for the short update dear, i couldn't make big with work by side!

See you tomorrow!