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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

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Posted: 8 years ago

#241

Amazing update👏

Loved Sukor's loves filled with awkwardness😆

Loved how Suraj brought back all the properties for Chakor😊😊

Waiting for next

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nemo316

@nemo316

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Posted: 8 years ago

#242

That was amazing maithu,

Loved Sukor's awkward scene, and inner talk. Their closeness is creating new sensations in both of them. Why did Shieku come then!!!

Chakor was happily surprised that she got her property back, liked Suraj's explanation of why he acted the way he did.

Naughty Suraj, he didn't apologize for the accidental touch, he ran away before Chakor reacted 😆.

Looking forward to next part.

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#243

Originally posted by: Shar456
Awesome update n want more romance waiting eagerly for tom update n little long

Thank you so much dear!

Will be posting the next part soon!

Romance will be there but at the same time a small time leap too! 😃

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#244

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj
It was an awesome part sis..
Sukor awkwardness mixed romance s so cute..
Shieku come at the wrong time😭
The way suraj brought her parents asset to her was superb sis..
Want to read more romance of them😉
Eagerly waiting 4 next update sis..😊

Thanks a lot sister!

Happy you find it cute!

Well it is right time according to Shieku, so you have to ask him LOL

Will try my best to have a romantic bit in the next part!

See you!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: katheriene
Amazing update👏
Loved Sukor's loves filled with awkwardness😆
Loved how Suraj brought back all the properties for Chakor😊😊
Waiting for next

Thanks buddy!

Happy you enjoyed reading their moments!

See you in the end of the day with the next part!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#246

Originally posted by: meshmesh
That was amazing maithu,

Loved Sukor's awkward scene, and inner talk. Their closeness is creating new sensations in both of them. Why did Shieku come then!!!

Chakor was happily surprised that she got her property back, liked Suraj's explanation of why he acted the way he did.

Naughty Suraj, he didn't apologize for the accidental touch, he ran away before Chakor reacted 😆.

Looking forward to next part.

Thank you so much dear!

Glad you loved their awkwardness and inner talks

She was more than happy for her father's works to not go in bad hands, remember the file scene when she saw the files.

Well! It's Suraj and he is like this only! so no pbm LOL

See you!

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

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Posted: 8 years ago

#247

Maithu

🤗

thats so so nice..

and I guessed it right thought it would be her property papers Lo my gentleman did it...

awww loved their awkwardness but truly arey yaar always some one to intrude in this romance ofcourse not a villian still 😡 sheiku but you know the moment i read his name i laugh LOL!!! thanks to HK

just loving it... the trust... so apt and nice.

and dude is 😉 enjoying his (so called accidental) touches which is creating havoc ...

but in all this I just love love my Ayan chweetie and Maithu thanks for bringing this little one...

hmm soon he will have a sibling but want that process smooth...

thanks deary

a smile on my face when I read this...

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: sumsukor
Maithu
🤗

thats so so nice..

and I guessed it right thought it would be her property papers Lo my gentleman did it...

awww loved their awkwardness but truly arey yaar always some one to intrude in this romance ofcourse not a villian still 😡 sheiku but you know the moment i read his name i laugh LOL!!! thanks to HK

just loving it... the trust... so apt and nice.

and dude is 😉 enjoying his (so called accidental) touches which is creating havoc ...

but in all this I just love love my Ayan chweetie and Maithu thanks for bringing this little one...

hmm soon he will have a sibling but want that process smooth...

thanks deary

a smile on my face when I read this...

You know dear!

Each time when you or someone else tell they are having a smile or enjoyed or had a light moment reading something of mine, I feel like I won 1000s of awards!

He is indeed a gentlemen!

Hope one day I can make him negative!

Heee I wasn't intentional, poor Shieku, he will feel bad if he comes to know his fans are mocking him LOL

He is indeed enjoying it and soon it will be a lot more too.

Happy you loved Ayan's presence. And it's my pleasure dear!

Hope soon he gets those siblings when right time comes

Thank you so much dear!

See you

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#249

Hey !

As you all know this the part B of 14!
Hope you get few answers!

Link to the previous part : Part 14 A

Happy reading!

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Part 14 B

"Lunch my Boy?" he asked Ayan as he got up.
"All is ready!" she said as she showed the file in her hand "I will put it in our room and join you!" and she went from there leaving Son and Dad duo!
"Your Maa is really a good person!" he said to his son for which Ayan nodded his head "I think I like her!" Ayan glared at his father "I mean it can be more than a simple like!" Ayan smiled "What is she feeling for me?" he asked as they made their way towards the dining table.
"Maaa Paaa Booo looo" Ayan said and laughed making Suraj smile at his antics.

And days started to pass with Chakor taking over her father's company, Suraj helping her at home and at work while Ayan started to say few words like 'Lub ouuu' 'Bahter' 'Yaammmiii'. Hope you all got that it's 'Love you', 'Water' and 'Yummy', if not Ayan will himself explain in future to you all.
Along with their free life routines, the case also proceeded and as said, the culprits got sentenced for a lifelong imprisonment for all the crimes and black business they were doing.

Two weeks have passed since with the couple being more and more attached towards Ayan and attracted towards each other with their physical proximity and feelings of heart.

"Finally got time to come here!" Suraj said parking his car out of Chakor's maternal house as this visit was initially planned weeks before and now only it happened, giving Chakor the needed time out of her work load.
"My baby is coming here for first time!" Chakor said as she got out with Ayan who started to walk in his own speed.
"And me too coming here for first time!" Shieku said as he joined her while Suraj went to open the knock on the door and not open it with keys.
"It's locked!" she said.
"Wait!" he told her as everyone faced the door.

*** I still can't get him! ***

- A small surprise! -

And the door opened, shocking Chakor, showing one of the most important person of her past life.
"Mausi!" and with tears escaping her eyes, both the ladies neared each other as Suraj pulled Ayan from her, to only embrace the pool of emotion of being separated for all these days.
"My little baby has grown up I see!" Girija said as she kissed Chakor's forehead in an affectionate way.
"I missed you so much!" and hugged her aunt tightly.
"You see my Boy, I was right! Your Maa is just showing of being strong!" Suraj said.
Instead of glaring at him, she just smiled at him, still hugging her aunt.

Getting stable, both separated from each other and Chakor started to present one by one:
"He is Shieku bhaiya!" and Girija smiled "The little one is my son Ayan!" she said smiling ear to ear.
"Son?" Girija asked.
"Hmm That... He... I..."

*** How to tell her? ***

Not knowing how to tell her, she came up with an idea of seeing her husband to see if he will say something but it was her aunt who told a thing that made her more emotional "I have never thought my baby will grow up to be a lovely woman who can so easily mingle with a child!"
"Mausiii!"
"And he"
"The one who asked me to come back here for you!" Girija.
Chakor turned to her husband in surprise when he stood as if nothing happened.

"Thank you!" she said.
"Are we going to stand here or" even before he could finish Girija invited all of them inside as she took Ayan in her hands, making him sign in his language.

"I missed you a lot Mausi!" entering the kitchen as she back hugged her aunt who was preparing coffee while everyone else were waiting in the hall.
"What Mausi mausi! Call me Girija as usual!" taking her hand, making her girl face her "Tell me! How is life going?"
"Good!" was the simple reply.
"Someone said one fine day that she wasn't interested in marriage and all." her aunt said as if thinking.
"It's not like that Mausi" seeing her aunt daring look "Girija!" she smiled "It's different!"
"I heard what all happened! If it wasn't for my son, I wouldn't have left." she said sadly.
"No Please" she said and hugged her.
And the ladies chatted their stories in the time of preparing as they severed it to others over the table along with biscuits and talked random things.

"So?" Suraj asked as he settled on her bed, in her room while Girija went to prepare lunch for them and Ayan went to play out with Shieku as Suraj came to help Chakor pack her wanted things in her room.
"Huh?"
"Happy to back here?"
She just smiled at him, putting her dress inside her luggage, she came and sat near him.
"Thank you for everything!" she said as she put her head over his shoulder while he put his hand around hers and pulled her closer to him.
"Do you need to thank your other half?" he asked making her shake her head as he kissed her forehead while she closed her eyes.

Wow Wow Wow this is so strange! How did everything changed between them? is all of our question and the answer is in their past.

***** PAST *****

A lot of events happened not only in their mansion but also at work place.

"You see this graph on the left" Suraj said as he was sitting on her left in a separate chair, in her cabin, her father's cabin.
"Yeah!"
"You have to get used to read these kind of information" showing the next one "this is for economical basis" showing the other one as their sides touched as both lifted their eyes to see at each other but no one moved.

*** Should I move? ***

- Will she think I'm avoiding her? -

And their thoughts continues as they stayed stuck to each other and shared their thoughts over the upcoming project until they were disturbed by Suraj's manager.

Not even a day went by then when Chakor fell down and had a back sprain due to the water pulled by Ayan on the tails and right at the moment when Shieku went to bring something to clean.

"I can't get up!" she says to her husband who is by her side, asking her to make an effort.
"Try!"
Glaring at him "Help me or go and sleep!" she said as they were the only souls present there as Shieku went to put a sleeping Ayan on bed in his room.

- Help me god! -

"Ahhh" he yelled holding his shirt as he lifted her in movement.
"It will be okay Chakor!" feeling her pain in him "Shall we go to doctor?"
"I think" closing her eyes "First rest is needed!"
"If by tomorrow morning it's not ok, doctor is the only solution!"
"Hmmm" she nodded with her eyes still closed.
And as they climbed the stairs, Shieku came to hall and went back to his room.

As he left her on bed, something came in his mind as he pulled out his first aid box.
"I think this will lessen your pain!" showing a tube of cream as she faced him "Apply it!" putting his hand forward.
All she could do is glare at him.
"Can I?" he asked hesitantly.
Turning on the other side she nodded her head and hummed.
And climbing on the bed, he helped her to turn and slowly removing the saree from her waist part as she loosen it, he pulled it a bit down while his hand caressed her skin, sending shivers down her spine.

Taking balm in his right hand, he gently put it over her body and massaged not only her paining back but also smoothening her beating heart.

"How are you feeling?" he asked as he made be comfortable to sleep.
"Better than before!" she said.
Making himself a place on the bed "If need anything, tell!" and took hold of her right hand to assure her as they slept in the same position.
And by the next day, all was good.

With time, no awkwardness was visible with their proximity but something new started to happen.
"What is the need to tell her that when she knows?" Suraj remarked as they were having dinner and watching TV.
"You will understand it!" Chakor said as she saw the romantic scene going on the TV.
"Shieku! Do you think it's needed?"
Scratching this head "I think it's always needed to say what we feel so that no misunderstanding creates!"
"Agree Bhaiya!"
"You are always going to side your sister!" he said as he finished eating while only few minutes of film was left.

"Do you think it's needed to tell the feeling we have?" he questioned her, facing her back as they were laying side by side on bed with she was facing the wall.
Turning on her right "Huh?"
"Do you really want to hear all those lines of emotional torture?"
Making a face "It's not torture!"
"Then?" putting his right hand over her left, making her shy.
"No need when it's all clear!" she said meekly, bending her head.
Moving his hand to her chin and lifting it to have her on his level "Are you happy?"
She hummed as her cheeks turned red, making him a smile of pride to have this reaction over her.
He moved a bit and lifted his head a bit up and kissed her forehead "I'm happy that I got you!" as she closed her eyes.

- I don't know when equations changed but you are mine for this life and wish to have you for forever. -

*** Will he also know what I feel for him since an unknown time or should I say it. ***

"I.." and he put his finger over her lips, stopping her.
"Don't feel forced to say!"

And that night, things have really changed.

***** PRESENT *****

"I love you!" she said at a moment when he didn't expect.
Moving away from her as she sat straight "I"
She stopped him by putting her finger over his lips "Don't feel forced to say!" and both laughed as they remembered the day she was about to say something.
Their laughter didn't last long as Suraj's phone rang.

"Hello!"
"Yes!"
"What?"
"How?"
"Thank you for informing!" cutting his phone he turned to face Chakor "They escaped!"

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Next part on Wednesday only!
If any mistakes of missing words or something let me know as I didn't re-read it! Heee
Sorry!

Next part : Part 15

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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