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Originally posted by: ithihaas
Hello Divya,
Thanks for the update and I was waiting for it eagerly.. when I saw your PM, i was excited and read it between the meeting when the call was on hold for some time.. and I loved loved the update.. it was just awesome and I am loving how the story is shaping up !You are a wonderful writer and I am loving how you are writing the story 👍🏼Coming to the update, I kind of missed the parts that you write for incidents in past for last couple of updates and I had this wide smile when you included that in this chapter.. I am loving the interactions between Shivika when they were kids..helps us understand the characters so much..and I can see the difference in both of them from past and present..how certain incidents, situations change the person's outlook towards life...She is the only constant in my otherwise unstable life -- wow.. 👏 a single line that describes what Annika is to Shivaay ..So Shivaay had anger issue from his childhood.. guess its the way circumstances that he is been subjected to as a child...So the changing of friendship to some thing more has started.. 😉 So Vikram asked Annika to be his girlfriend.. what will Shivaay do ? I guess he wont say anything and will keep it to himself burning inside but be normal infront of Annika?So here Shivaay's dadi wants to get him married to Tia .. Shivaay & Dadi's relationship is not on good terms... looks like Shivaay is there in that house only for his mom and her happiness which is her husband Tej...No comments for Annika's chacha, chachi and of course her cousins...and they knew that Annika loved Shivaay ...Feeling bad for Annika though.. hopefully Shivaay gives her all the love and support that she needs...Amazing update and will be waiting again..LoveRohini
Hello Rohini😊
I missed writing in the past-present format!! Past and present are separate in my head..yes, they are a part of the same story but the Shivaay in the past is different from the present one and ditto for Annika. Circumstances, experiences, time changed them into who they are today but it is interesting to see how they were before.
And yes, Annika was that person who was always there for him no matter what. There was no stability in his life. Financially or emotionally. So, I don't think Annika or anyone realizes how important she was for him. And I think that was the crux of the problem...he never said it..he never showed it..
Actually I wrote Vikram's part mainly to make Annika aware of her feelings for Shivaay..and I'll keep mum on how Shivaay is going to react😉
Annika thinks Shivaay is enjoying life and chilling with his new family but all that glitters is not gold..he is miserable in that house
Phew! Finally, done! Thank you so much for that...It's always nice to know the reader's perspective😊
And you made me go back and write a small part of the next update..Yes, I blame you! You did that!
Anyways, Keep reading and commenting😃
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