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@riya666

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Posted: 8 years ago

#221

Ohh..no...this was one of my favorite stories😭.. But as the saying goes all good things must come to an end. Right !. But a big relief that many of ur stories are yet to come.😆Loved each and every part of Zarir. 😳Quite curious about the ending of the story.. Eagerly waiting for the upcoming parts with a heavy heart. !. Lots of love. ⭐️

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Maithili

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Posted: 8 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: riya666
Ohh..no...this was one of my favorite stories😭.. But as the saying goes all good things must come to an end. Right !. But a big relief that many of ur stories are yet to come.😆Loved each and every part of Zarir. 😳Quite curious about the ending of the story.. Eagerly waiting for the upcoming parts with a heavy heart. !. Lots of love. ⭐️

Aww my dear!

Happy that you got what I wanted to say!

Yup! There are almost three stories coming on our way and TTW will be updated too, once I finish this!

No worries dear, I will try to make the remaining parts light hearted and enjoyable!

Thank you so much!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#223

Hello everyone !

Hope you all enjoyed the festival days !
Here is a new part of Zarir!

Link to the previous part : Part 12

Happy reading!

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Part 13

At the same, somewhere in the same city, only one room was illuminated in the whole mansion.
"We need to do something!"
"Not now son! First we need to go out of this place for few days and then execute the plan I want!"
"What plan Dad?"
"Not now Vivaan!"
"Can't you tell it to me?"
"Not even to my shadow!" the old man said "Pack your bags! We are leaving tomorrow morning!"

And the morning arrived later than expected.
"Should I make him also get ready?" she asked as she was feeding Ayan breakfast while the little one's father was getting ready.
"I think Shieku can make time for him." checking his watch "Are you ready?"

- Just 30 mins and everything will be normal! -

*** Why is he this much worked up when we are just going to head to the Police station! ***

"Yeah! Just 2-3 minutes and I will be all set to go!"
"Come soon! It's already 8h30!" as he neared the door of their room "I will be waiting downstairs!" he said as he disappeared.
"Your papa is so not easy to understand!" she said to her son as he was nodding his head side to side "At least you are listening to me and easy to understand!"
Ayan showed all his teeth as she cleaned him.

Getting to hall, she called for her brother and gave his responsibility to him before going towards the car parked on the front lane.

*** Hope everything goes well! ***

- All will be for sure going well! -

Inside the car, the couple was calm until Suraj took a turn.

*** Why is he going this way?
Police station is on the other side? ***

"You are taking a wrong route!" she remarked.
"I am on the correct way!" he said.
"But the police station is on the other side!" she said not knowing why she got married to him.
"Are you going to tell me what route to take to the unsaid destination of ours?"

*** He has become mad! May be he got hit by something! Or I think he fell in the bathroom! ***

"Can I know where are we heading?"
"In just few minutes, you will know!"

*** Now I'm over somewhere I don't know! ***

Seconds turned into minutes as the car moved and interactions happened in both the places.
"Why are we heading in this direction?" she questioned as they took a turn she recognized.
"You will see!" is all she got as replies.

"Why are we leaving Dad?"
"You will see son!" the old man replied as he got inside the black car, holding his laptop bag.
As his son started the car and moved towards the main door, another white car came in the opposite direction, making this car to halt and reverse as the other one just moved forward.
And that car was followed by 2 jeeps of polices, making the girl in the main car, and the men in the other car anxious.

"Come!" Suraj said as he blocked the black car and opened his door to get out.

*** What is happening here? ***

"Enjoy the show he said!" as he saw his wife get out of the car while policemen surrounded the black car as the two men were stuck to their seats.

"He has trapped us Dad!"
"I will not leave him! He hasn't trapped us but his fate!" the old man said as he opened the car door by himself.

*** When did he plan all these? Why didn't he tell me yesterday night? ***

As the policemen hand cuffed those two men as soon as they stepped outside of the car, saying the reason of their arrest "You both are charged to be culprits behind their parents' car accident and cheating over Mrs. Rajvanshi's property."

"Cheating?" Chakor said as she turned to face her hubby.
"Don't you remember signing on something after you came to India?" He asked her.

*** Yeah on that unfaithful night! For employees salary! ***

Seeing her face to hit the realization "Now you know what cheating it is?"
"I thought I was"
"Leave it!" he said as the elder men approached them after asking permission from inspector.

"You can put me in jail for your parents and his family death and send me a notice from the court for the properties but you can't escape from me, from my eye. I will return for you to take revenge and I will kill you for ruining my son's life by putting him in jail when all he wanted is to live a happy life with you! I will kill your family. We will make sure to get all your properties by your hand itself once again. It's my promise for you, my dear sweet SISTER's DAUGHTER. Mrs. Chakor" and faced Suraj "Suraj Rajvanshi!" and even before anyone could speak, he went back to the inspector to make a move from there.

As Suraj saw her get agitated with the mention of destroying her family, he held her hand in comfort.
"We will take the charge from now on Sir!" the inspector said before leaving to take his jeep after giving the mansion's keys.
"I think it's better to get back home now!" he said to his wife "We will come back here tomorrow!" he said as they moved to their car.
"Thank you!" she said.
"It's for both of us!" he said.
"I didn't knew you were planning"
"It's better we get going on!" he said interrupting her as he moved the car and stopped at the main door.
"Make sure to be here when we come tomorrow!" Suraj said to the watchman before exiting from there.

And the day moved faster with Chakor trying to divert her mind and Suraj at his work, leaving her the needed space.

"What are you searching?" he asked that evening, seeing her search here and there something as he came out of the wash-room after freshening.
She didn't reply but continued to search on the side drawer when he went near her.
"If you tell me, I may help" and right at that time she exclaimed "Got it!" and turned to get hit by a hard chest.

Ohh Ahh Blooop was the sound heard as she balanced to stand when he helped and then she helped him to balance and finally both hit the bed with her over him, with her hands over his shoulder and his hands around her waist while there body stuck in a position where each parts were aptly placed against another one, with both their eyes closed and heart beating at light speed with the initial cause: them falling but now, something else.

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Thank you so much buddies for reading and liking it !
If you enjoyed the little ride, hit the LIKE button and COMMENT your views!
Next part, few romance! Is it okay for you all?
See you all on Thursday!

Next part : Part 14 A

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

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Posted: 8 years ago

#224

Interesting update👏

So Suraj has planned the arrest of Chakor's uncle &Vivan👏

Hoping they get the worst punishment

Loved Sukor's moment😛

Waiting for next

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: katheriene
Interesting update👏
So Suraj has planned the arrest of Chakor's uncle &Vivan👏
Hoping they get the worst punishment
Loved Sukor's moment😛
Waiting for next

Thanks a lot dear!

Happy you liked this part!

Yup! Indeed he has planned few things!

The punishment will be legal so not the worst :-[

Happy you loved the little Sukor moments!

See you soon