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ElviraRK_PC

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Posted: 7 years ago

#441

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela
Finally Aanchal is realising that she's in love with Ranvir..Aanchal's mom has sharp eyes..she saw love in her daughter's eyes and now trying to make her understand.. Can't wait for the party to know what's gonna happen with Aanchal.. Ranvir..!! My heart breaks to see him broken... Who's that mystery man who came to meet Naina.. Suspense..!!

Thank you very much for ur comment!:)

Next 3 chapters will be emotional roller coaster:) I hope you will like it!:)

And so many secrets will out so soon!:)

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ElviraRK_PC

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Posted: 7 years ago

#442

Originally posted by: anshvi

Elvi 👏
What have u done...this is so beautiful and heartbreaking..I desperately wanted to see this this agnst..this love of AanVir in the show 😭

You have created something so beautiful...I am feeling so bad that we never can get something so beautiful for our AanVir in the show 😭

Elvi Please please tweet this to the makers na...please saying this should have been the main love story..they are beautiful

Haasil makers need to see this !

Elvi..this is beyond perfection 👏

Anshi🤗

Thank you! Thank you very much! I'm really glad you liked it!:)

I also wanted to see something like that in show but...😭

Now I can only write this...Hope you will love to read FF even more now bcz in this promo I tried to show some parts of AanVir's story:)

Thank you very much!:)

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_Payalj_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#443

Another good update. Anchals mother , the epitome of bad advice in the show is talking sense here.

now its time for the truth of Ranveers biological parents to open. That could add more interesting twists

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ElviraRK_PC

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Posted: 7 years ago

#444

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna
OMG IT WAS PERFECT😭
Edit: it's like, they have shown these scenes for AaBir too, where they are crying for their lost love but I didn't feel she*t about it. But here, oh God what I felt! My heart felt tight for the few seconds this video played out! Amazing job Elvi! 👏

PS. Do tweet this to makers please! Someone? Anyone!😆

Thank you very much Sanu!:)
I hope when u will read all this u will become more emotional!:)

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LAKSHMI KRISHNA

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Posted: 7 years ago

#445

Elvi🤗

So mrs.srivastav already know abt aanchal's love for ranvir.. But aanchal didn't want to accept it but can't reject too.

Kabir is trying every way to distance aanchal from ranvir.he is not understanding all his tedi plan will backfire ..because aanchal is becoming more uncomfortable to his clossness.

Ranvir and jatin's conversation is pretty gud.but I can't still believe .he gave up.

So aanchal is trying to find ranvir's mom.kabir is planning something big..sarika is planning to kill aanchal.sab aanchal ki dushman 😆

So naina said lies because of someone's insistence probably ranvir or that unknown person.because he want aanchal to fall for ranvir.so that kabir will turn against ranvir.

Promo is brilliant.iam so excited..😳

Edited by lakshmi32 - 7 years ago

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ElviraRK_PC

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Posted: 7 years ago

#446

Originally posted by: _Payalj_
Another good update. Anchals mother , the epitome of bad advice in the show is talking sense here.
now its time for the truth of Ranveers biological parents to open. That could add more interesting twists

Thank you for comment!:)

We are mowing towards this...Soon Ranvir's mother secret will out...Just few chapters to go:)

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ElviraRK_PC

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Posted: 7 years ago

#447

Originally posted by: lakshmi32
Elvi🤗

So mrs.srivastav already know abt aanchal's love for ranvir.. But aanchal didn't want to accept it but can't reject too.

Kabir is trying every way to distance aanchal from ranvir.he is not understanding all his tedi plan will backfire ..because aanchal is becoming more uncomfortable to his clossness.

Ranvir and jatin's conversation is pretty gud.but I can't still believe .he gave up.

So aanchal is trying to find ranvir's mom.kabir is planning something big..sarika is planning to kill aanchal.sab aanchal ki dushman 😆

So naina said lies because of someone's insistence probably ranvir or that unknown person.because he want aanchal to fall for ranvir.so that kabir will turn against ranvir.

Promo is brilliant.iam so excited..😳

Lakshu🤗

I must say you remember and notced all detailes of FF😆

Mrs.Shrivastava yaha better hai😆

As I said next 3 chapters will be rally emotional roller coaster...At least I hope:)
And I hope you will like it:)

Thank you very much for ur comment!:) Glad u liked promo:)

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ElviraRK_PC

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Posted: 7 years ago

#448

Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5
wow!aanchal's mom is great..
she made aanchal realize her love..
kabir is becoming shameless day by day..
waiting for the confession to happen..

Thank you for ur comment!:)

Confession will happen soon:)

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SukhiD

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Posted: 7 years ago

#449

Please update soon can't wait it's amazing

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ElviraRK_PC

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Posted: 7 years ago

#450

"Black Love"

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PART-25

Night. Everryone were preparating for dinner. Ranvir and Kabir were in their room. Kabir was wearing black suit with white shirt, when Ranvir was wearing white suit with black shirt. They are were joking, laugh.
"Bade, main bohot khush hoon ke tumhara hasi wapas agayi."
"Aankhon mein aansu aa jate hai, phir bhi labon par hasi rakhni padti hai..." - Ranvir was thinking.
"Bade?"
"Mera bhai khush iss liye main khush hoon. Main tumhe ek cheez dena chahta hoon."
"Kya?"
"Ek minute."
Ranvir moved towards wardrobe and put chain from there. It was gold chain with medallion. On the medallion was painted the letter 'R'. He closed wardrobe and back to Kabir.
"Kya hai yeh bade?"
"Yeh tumhare liye...Yeh chain mere saath bachpan se hi. Aaj main yeh tumhe dena chahta hoon. Apne paas rak lo...Hum nahi jante kal kya hoga...Yeh tumhe mere bare mein yaad delayegi..."
Kabir became very emotional. He don't like when Ranvir talking about his death. Kabir's biggest fear lose Ranvir.
"Nahi chahie mujhe yeh!"
Kabir throw chain.
"Kabir!"
"Baas bade! Nahi chahie mujhe koi bhi yadeein!"
"Par Kabir..."
"Aaj mere liye itna bada din hai aur tum mere mood ko spoil kia!"
"Arey...Teek hai...I'm sorry..."

Kabir was upset with Ranvir. He didn't want to talk with him anymore. Ranvir put his hands on his face and said.
"Dekho Kabir...Hum ab bacche nahi hai...We are not kids anymore, man. Zindagi ka safar asaan nahi hota aur iss safar mein humne bohot kuch khona padta hai. Kal kya hoga humne nahi pata..."
"Aur mujhe pata hai kal kya hoga."
"Kabir."
"Bass bade...I don't want listen your philosophy."
"Teek hai...Teek hai."
He lifted the chain off the floor and asked Kabir keep it as gift. Kabir agreed. They are hugged each other and left to hall. Aanchal was in her room and alsowas preparating for dinner. She weared beautiful black sari with white top. She was thinking about Ranvir. He always was on her mind. Though she still didn't acceptedher feelings but yes, he is in her heart. Tonight she wanted in front of whole family ask him for forgiveness and she was very nervous. She put on her earrings and dropped her eyes. She notced sindoor. She took it and recalled moment when Ranvir put sindoor on her mang. She wanted put it and slowly started move her hand towardsher forehead but someone hold her hand. She startled and turned. It was Kabir. He hold her hand and was smiling. Aanchal was in shock.
"Kabir!" - she screamed.
"Aanchal, please aaj nahi...Aaj bohot important din hai hamare liye. Yeh sab choddo."
He hold her hand and moved towards door. Aanchal was very angry but she didn't want create drama. Ranvir was standing with Jatin, he turned and saw Kabir and Aanchalwho were went down from the stairs. He notced Aanchal's anger. Kabir and Aanchal moved towards Ranvir and Jatin. Ranvir and Aanchal were looking at each other. In themoment Aanchal's anger went away because she saw him. Her eyes were only on him.
"Aanchal tum bohot acchi lagti hai." - said Jatin.
"Thank you uncle."
"Bade..Tum kuch nahi bolege?"
"Main kya bolu?"
"Arey usually tum hamesha Aanchal ko compliments de raha hai...Aaj kya hua?"
"Dad bol diya jo maine kehna chahta tha."
"Teek hai...Mom kaha hai?"
"Main yaha hoon"
They are turned and saw Sarika who was moving towards them. She was wearing white saree. She came and with smile looked at Aanchal. It was evil smile.
"Aanchal you looking good."
Aanchal was in shock and felt something strange.
"Thank you aunty..."
"Aaj lagta hai bohot accha raat hoga"
"Yes, mom. And before we will start dinner I want make one announcement."
"Kabir, may I first? I need say something important to Ranvir." - she whispered on his ear.
"Aanchal, everything will be after my announcement. Please. But before that..."
He knelt down and said:
"Can we have one dance?" - he held out his hand. Aanchal was looking on Ranvir. Ranvir left place.
"Please Aanchal...One dance."
She smiled and hold his hand. [Wajah Tum Ho song on BG] They are started dance but Aanchal eyes were looking for Ranvir. Kabir tried become more close to her during dacne but Aanchal keept distance. Kabir kissed her on neck and Aanchal was feeling herself uncomfortable. Then she saw Ranvir who back.
"Ranvir..." - she said. Kabir turned and saw Ranvir.
"Bade! Kaha chali gaya tu?"
"Ek important call aya..So."
"Chalo...Ab main tumhare saath dance karna chahta hoon."
"No way."
"Bade please. Should I fall on kness in front of you also?"
"Kabir tum pagal hogaya?"
"Bade ek dance please...Yaad hai baachpan mein..."Yeh dosti..hum nahi chorenge..." - he started dancing around Ranvir.
"Teek hai...Teek hai...Just one minute."
"Yeas!"
They are started dancing. They are were so happy during dance. It was cute moment between them. Jatin, Sarika and Aanchal were smiling. In the end Kabir hugged Ranvirand said:

"I love you bade."
"I love you too."
"Chalo...Ab mere announcement ka bari hai."
Kabir stand in center. He was so excited to make this announcement.
"Aap sab jante hai ke main aur Aanchal ek doosre se bohot bohot pyaar karte hai. Aur hum shaadi karna chahte the but some problems came on our life. So much things happened and our wedding didn't take a place but now everything is good. So today I want make a big announcement. Aanchal, please come here."
Aanchal didn't know what's going on. She again looked at Ranvir and moved towards Kabir.
"Kabir, yeh sab kya hai?" - she asked.
"Abhi sab kuch pata chalega."
"Par..."
"So mom, dad, bade...Me and Aanchal will marry next month!"
Eveyone was in shock.
"What?!" - said Jatin.
"Yeh tum kya bol raha hai Kabir?" - Aanchal was in shock.
"Kya?"
"Yeh nahi ho sakta."
"Kyu?"
"Kyu ke mere aur Ranvir ke divorce abhi tak nahi hui."
"Hui, Aacnhal, hui. I was in court today and I explained our situation. They agree to grant you a divorce at the end of this month. So no more 3 months of waiting."
Ranvir was in shock. Aanchal was looking at him with tears in eyes.
"So agle mahani hamare shaadi hai, Ms. Aanchal Shrivastava." - he hugged her.
Ranvir was again heartbroken. In anger he left place. Aanchal saw it. She screamed his name and run after him. Sarika notced Aanchal left house. She sent a messageto killer and said about this. She asked him to be ready. Aanchal was running after Ranvir. It was raining. He took off his jacket and threw it to the side.
"Ranvir!" - Aanchal was screaming. "Ranvir please...ruko!"
[Tu Kahe Sad Tune] He stopped and turned. He looked at her. She stood away from him. She was in thin sari and trembling. The raindrops hide her tears. She with trembling voice said:
"Ranvir please...Mere baat suno. Mujhe tumne bohot kuch kehna hai. Please."
"Kya kehna chhati hai tum, Aanchal? Kya? Aur tum yaha kya kar rahi hai...Tume Kabir ke saath hona chahie."
"Abhi main yaha hoon...Please mere baat suno. Ranvir, hamare rishta bohot ajeeb hai. Pehle main tujh se dosti karni nahi chahti thi par dheere dhere mujhe samaajh aya ke tum bohot accha insaan hai aur tere jaise dost ke mere zindagi mein zaroorat hai. Main tujhe saach mein apne dost maani...Pure dil se... Par tujhe pata hai na meri kaam, meri duty mere liye kitna important hai...Main nahi janti hoon main kya bol rahi hi hoon..."
"Aanchal..."
"Ranvir please...Let me say everything what I want to say...Jab mujhe pata chala ke shaayad tum Meenu aur Naina ko maara toh meri dil toot gayi...Main uss din bohot roya thi...Mujhe laga main tujh se nafrat kar ne lagi...Par asli mein yeh sach nahi hai...Par apni kaam puri kar ne ke liye main haar din khud se bol rahi thi ke main tujh se nafrat karti hoon...Mujhe hamesha lag tha tha ke tum mujhe aur Kabir ko alag karna chahta hai aur yeh sach hai...Mujhe pata hai...Par mujhe laga ke main tumhara zidd hoon...Main tumhare liye ek khel hoon aur main Kabir ko khona nahi chahti thi...Main gusse mein yeh sab kuch kiya...Main bohot bada galti kiyi..Mujhe maaf karo..Please Ranvir...Tum mere liye bohot important hai...Tere ane se baad mere zindagi badal gayi...I don't know what's going on...I don't know what I'm feeling.. But I don't want lose you..."
The killer was standing beside tree. He pulled out his gun. Ranvir didn't said anything to Aanchal. He just moved towards his car. Aanchal was crying. She understand Ranvir didn't forgive her. She moved towards home. Killer loaded the gun. Ranvir stopped suddenly because he heard a click. He turned sharply and saw a man with gun beside a tree. The man slowly pointed the gun at Aanchal. Ranvir was in shock. He was scared. He quickly ran towards Aanchal. The bullet hit his heart. Ranvir pushed Aanchal and she fell on ground. The one bullet hit his heart and second one his stomach. Ranvir slowly started falling.
[Tu Kahe Sad Tune]
"Aa---n--ch--a--l"- he said and fell.
She sharply raise her head and saw how Ranvir falling. She was scared so much.
"Ranvir!"- she screamed.
The rain intensified. She stood up and ran to him. She was in shock. She sat down near him and laid his head on her lap.
"Ranvir! Ranvir! Ranvir! Please! Tujhe kuch nahi hoga! Ranvir! Koi hai! Please! Help!" - she was screaming and crying.
His eyes were half-closed. His hand was on heart which one was bleeding. He started raising his hand and move towards Aanchal's forehead.
"Ranvir..Tujhe kuch nahi hoga...I promise..."

He dyed her mang with his blood. Aanchal closed her eyes and was recalling their wedding. Though rain was washing everything but it was their moment. He slowly said.
"Maine kaha...tum...sirf mere... biwi hai...Mere akhri... saas tak..."

She was crying. Ranvir closed his eyes. Aanchal was in shock.
"Ranvir! Ranvir apne aakhen kholo! Ranvir please! Koi hai! Please! Kabir! Uncle! Aunty!" - she was screaming.

In home Jatin and Kabir were worried when Sarika was waiting for call.
"Kaha hai yeh log?"
"Dad..Main check karke ate hoon.."
"Main tere saath chala jaunga."
"Chalo"
They are left. The man called Sarika.
"Kaam hogayi?"
"Nahi ma'am."
"What?! Why?!"
"Main galat aadmi ko mara."
"Kya?!"
"Some man saved her. And took bullet."
The phone fell from her hands. Sarika understand it was Ranvir. She was in shock.
"Ranvir..." - she said quietly and ran.
Kabir and Jatin saw Aanchal who was sitting on ground and Ranvir on laying on her lap. They both were in shock.
"Ranvir!"
"Bade!"
They screamed and ran towards them. Sarika also came and saw all this.
"Ranvir...Kya hua beta?" - Jatin asked.
"Bade! Kya hua bade ko, Aanchal?!"
"Woh admi...Woh shot kiya...aur..."
Kabir was in shock. He slowly stood up and began to move backwards.
"We should take him to hospital! Jaldi!" - said Jatin.
"Ba...de...Ba-de...Me-ra...bh--ai...Me-ra...Baa...de..." - it was hard for him to speak.

He recalled their convo and the moment when Ranvir gave chain to him. He fell onhis knees and screamed:
"Badeee!"
Jatin and Aanchal put Ranvir in the car. Jatin notced Kabir who was sitting in shock and ran towards him.
"Kabir utho...Kabir...Ranvir ko kuch nahi hoga...Humne hospital jana hai..."
"Bade ko kuch nahi hoga?"
"Kuch nahi hoga...Chalo..Utho..."
They are sat on the car and went to hospital. Sarika was standing alone. She was away from them. She was in shock and fell. She was calm but but she was quiet because of the shock.
"Yeh maine kya kiya?" - she said and started crying.
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