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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lghosh



Something about the way when you envelop me,
In your arms bringing me close, for you to see,
Your arms hold my face perfectly in your palms,
Or how effortlessly around your back, go my arms!
Your eyes pour into my mine with love shining through,
I am mesmerised by your charms and your honest virtue,
And when you finally bend your head to capture my lips,
I go numb in pleasure thriving in my own apocalypse!
And you pull me closer to you claiming me to be yours,
And I submit myself wholly to your passion, which lures!
I am yours to be cherished, enjoyed and spoilt in love,
Standing on your boots I wait to experience the behove!
Your hug tightens around me showing your lidded desire,
I am pleasantly surprised and thrive, on this news I acquire!


Awesome poems,Patti and Lana!❤️❤️❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: jiya.k

Guilt cannot change the past, and anxiety cannot make your future bright. It is best to cherish what you have and try to make implementation on what you think for future. Positivity is the spirit to carry along with you that can enlighten inspirational thoughts in you. Giving up is not the solution, and moving on is all one need
Just dwell in 2017 for a while and learn from the mistakes committed and start the year 2018 With a new beginning and fresh zeal,Full of inspiration and positive thoughts,
Let's begin this year with an optimistic thought.
wishing you a great 2018 a head with last good morning message of 2017. Have a great day .Good morning to all my lovely sahibas & baisas here..😊 😃


Jiya love having you here... the words you deliver from Urdu poets are inspiring and give us a warm cozy feeling... thanks for the New Year wishes and wish you the same! 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lghosh



Moi an antagonist!! 😲😲😲

🥺

It is relative!! And you mean to say I am viler than Khalil?? 😡


🥺

My Certain Someone said after Heera, I am the protagonist of his life!! 😉😆 So nana nana nana to you!! 🤣
And if you say anything more I will hook you up with one of this intelligent villain! 😈🤣


Superb idea,Lana.Pls go ahead!🤣

Hope you enjoyed the vacation,Adwi!🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali


Chapter 43.
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The Story so far..

Oh my God! What to say about the update
It is no doubt the best till date
If the first half is like Milton's Paradise Lost
The latter is the Paradise Regained at any cost
His unfinished sentence ringing in her mind
"..there's plenty you do not kn.." she is determined
To probe into his past to put her mind at rest
She meets his associates to find the rest

His lovely father figure Chachajaan
Narrates to her of his woes bygone
She still couldn't trust what she has heard
'How heartless is the woman to leave her child without a word'
Her heart goes to him when she hears about it
"..They killed every part of his body bit by bit.."
To his chamber a sudden urge within her drives
She waits to open her heart out when he arrives

Elsewhere her spy kept in the safe house gives a slip
Creating an extra problem to him which he can't skip
At the other end he sends his men on different errands
Himself undertaking the most dangerous one as planned
He sees her sitting in his room beside the open scroll
Shocked to see her and misunderstands her to be a mole
But she looks at him with eyes , affection brimming
She sees him as a new person with emotions overwhelming

She wants to run over to him to give a big hug
And promise to tend his wounds without any lug
'Did she watch my chamber to spy on me?
Does she want to snoop on my work so free?'
She notices the fury hitherto not seen on his face
Quickly understands him and tries to get it erased
'I have not read a single word in the scroll..
'Do you think I would disregard your orders acting foul?'

She explains her stand for coming to his room
'I want a chance to meet you and not as you assume
Ustad Akbar Mahmoud Khan' Sahiba wants to confess..
She is grateful for everything you have done for her, not less'
He sees the sincerity in her eyes when she says this
Considers it as a gift he would treasure forever with bliss
From the conversation that follows after that
He comes to know that she has learnt about his past.

To put it in the words of the author in an emotional vein
The precious chain of confessions snapped under the strain
Breaking down into droplets of tears..
'Both of us living without knowing what tomorrow holds for us'
Then what? Then comes the author's inimitable account
Of what happened between them in words of no count
A perfect understanding between our protagonists
Beautifully described in detail with all elegance ..

The author stops here with her usual warning
We know that the misunderstanding between them is waning
Every chapter proves her talent to keep us in the grip
And to wait for the next one where she will take us on a trip
We are sure blessed with such a historical fiction
To which we have developed an addiction
Let us pray for the author to continue with energy
Let the New Year bring her joy to the maximum degree!

Karkuzhali.



This is Super-O-Super,Patti!👏👏👏

I feel my afternoon meal is incomplete without curd rice.Similarly,our HBAS updates seem incomplete without ur "story so far"..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali



My Gains during 2017..


My biggest gain is my virtual family in the HBAS thread. From the time I wake up till I go to bed I am always in the company of my dear nieces and grandchildren every day, whose faces I have not seen nor their voices I have heard. But the year 2017 gave me an opportunity to meet a couple of my family members , Sandhya and Shyamala when I visited India.

What a wonderful group these Baisas form! I am so thankful to my dear

Shyamala, who introduced me to this lovely family in the India Forum a couple of

years ago..

Well, about my kith and kin here ...Barring a few I know almost all of them from

JA days..

Lashy the adorable.. My limited vocabulary doesn't do full justice to write what I feel about her.. She is like my daughter and at times like an elderly person to me, when clearing my doubts or giving me advice at proper times.. She is unceasingly active, doing multiple functions at the same time, like an entertainer skilfully juggling so many objects at the same time without dropping any of them. She juggles her duties as a wife, parent, author of a wonderful historical drama and so many other responsibilities..

Periyamma... when you said you're back with a bang, little did I know it was in ways that would move us to tears. I was and continue to be so touched by these words you've written about me. But not only what you've written above but all of the words that follow too - about the rest of the baisas. What a sweet sweet gesture!!! But you are no less - a poetess, entertainer, mother/grandma/g'grandma and so much more!

But as I've always said (and Vathsy said too) the teen Periyamma is my favouritest. I ASPIRE to become you when I grow older. I've said this to others to and will say it to you again. I want to be a free spirit, broad-minded, open to learning like you are - and love you so much. This is a relationship that goes beyond just the 'e' world of internet. It's much more than that! Thanks for giving us this opportunity to know you.

BinduPrasad , the punctual..

The sun may forget to rise, but Bindu will be present in the HBAS thread, wishing all of us a good morning.. She never fails to respond to the members' posts as and when she reads them.. And has developed a unique style of writing of her comments on the author's work. This year, we were not able drench in her good morning wishes for a few months due to some political disturbance happening in her place.

Lana , the all rounder..

I have come to know her during the HBAS era. A beautiful analyst, witty in her remarks, always alert, story writer, a poet who is always ready with the poem suited to any occasion, situation or picture.. Above all a compassionate teacher for her students who are so special..

I am yet to know how many other talents she has concealed in her.

Rose, the pleasing person..introduced by Lashy

I have never seen Rose taking a day off from the forum without proper reason. And her words of appreciation for comments, words of soothing to those who feel a bit low at times, the never failing reciprocation to the posts with immense sincerity, her art of writing... and so on and so forth..I admire her for these..

Kausi, the chirpy girl..

Always bubbling with enthusiasm, never missing a chance to come up with best poems and musings , though very brief in her reviews.. She believes in the saying, "Small is beautiful.".I love her challenge with Sandhya for Jalal!

Sandhya..the treasure chest..

An excellent poetess developed into a story writer, a good conversationalist, a clever story analyst and of course a strong rival to Kausi and her never-give up- attitude when it comes to the 'ownership' of Jalal!

Mitali, the silent performer..

Her talent for poetry writing is like the saying in Tamil, "Kudathilitta ViLakku pola.." (Like a lamp kept inside a pot.) Very calm and without any paraphernalia..

Manasi, the chef and the computer image generator!

I used to wonder how she managed to make 20,000 posts within a short period of 7 years! But I guessed the answer correctly after seeing her expressive emojis which substitute the usage of words..

Kuki..The smart one..

A very clever young girl, equipped with excellent knowledge of the computer, very sportive in her attitude, almost a pet to everyone in the HBAS family..

Bindu, 007.. the intelligent

This little one, along with Shagun is responsible for making me create our darling kutties, Baby and Babloo. I adopted Bindu and Shagun as my granddaughters on the New Year Day 2016..

Lavanya, the mature writer.

I know her from Shyamala aunty's JA (rerun) analysis thread.. She is an A- class poetess, a talented writer cum analyst, with a very lovable nature. I used to admire her takes on JA analyses as well as on the HBAS chapters. Her poem "Ajnabi" stands an example for her talent in the field..

Selvi, the wonderful photographer

I know her only recently introduced by HBAS..Every morning we log in the computer just to see Selvi's Landscape GIFs and the relevant poems composed by Lana, Vatsy, Sandhya and others. She is a person very quick to react to other members' posts..Very intelligent as well..

Vatsy, the mature minded.

Like Selvi, she is also a new addition to the list of my relatives in the HBAS family...Her calm and composed nature is revealed in her responses to the Baisas' comments in the thread..

Anindita: The poetess..

Very active and always comes ready with a Bengali poem with English translation to post at appropriate places..

Harshu, the Master of Musings..

She holds the highest record in her unique way of doing episode analysis of JA serial. She never missed any episode..Only she can make it lively by inserting appropriate emoticons at relevant places. Her analysis was like grandma's story telling , humor and seriousness combined ..I miss her presence now a days.

Others I miss in the thread are the cute and smart Adwi and my favorite little grand daughter Shagun..who are committed to their studies this year...

I thank all of you girls, for keeping me rejuvenated throughout the year that has passed.. And I hope to enjoy the same warmth in the coming year as well..

WISHING YOU A HAPPY NEW YEAR,


Sachu Patti

Periyamma/Aunty.


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

😳 ☺️ 🤗 Anything for our beloved author, the beautiful Baisas and HBAS!

>>>☺️

And I noticed the 'sangat ka asar' too... pleasantly bowled over by her grasp of the new language!

Mirza Sahib must be proudly coughing away to glory! 😆


Originally posted by: lghosh



My assets of 2017 that I inherited are all of you here in HBAS, for making me laugh, dream, create and to simply have fun! 😃 For making me a part of your family and for this I will be ever grateful to Lashy! 🤗 All of you in your own sweet way embrace me every day and make me smile and help me to go through all the hurdles of mundane life and I can simply glide through all those in a whiff and be a happy camper here with nothing but laughter and happiness!! That is a tremendous achievement of this year and my heartfelt gratitude to all of you for this! 🤗 A special mention to Rose, Sandy, Kawsi, Manu, Kuki, Selvi, Lavanaya, Anindita, Adwitiya, Vatshy, Shagun, Akki, Shivu, Muski, Jyothi, Bindup, and Bond for making my day a colourful rainbow and to reach for that pot of gold which is the friendship you all offer at the other end of it!! 🤗 If I have missed anyone, I am tremendously sorry, didn't mean to!! All of you make it special here for me! 😃


And Lashy thank you specially for giving me this family and most importantly my Certain Someone who whiz me away from the stark realities of life to an unparallel dreamland!! 😉😆 And thank you for our daily chats and the dose of laughter!! 😃 You rock and hope for the evergreen dose of DQgiri to continue throughout the year from you! 😆👍🏼 🤗

This is super super super sweet and touching, Lana 🤗you're such a part of this place that I now can't imagine how we functioned without you here!

Edited by lashy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

This is Adwi's drool-worthy post!! 😉🤣The villains are more 'tagra' than the 'dubla-patla' angrez hero with you!! 😆 You can keep this cousin to yourself!! I need the tall, broad, muscular cousin in his 17th century yummy tunic and his beard and long auburn hair, on which I can...ahem...errrmmm...ummm...well for me to know and you all to guess!! 😉🤣 Sigh!! And who doesn't kiss their 'garbar ghotala' cousin's hand!! 🤔
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lghosh


This is Adwi's drool-worthy post!! 😉🤣The villains are more 'tagra' than the 'dubla-patla' angrez hero with you!! 😆 You can keep this cousin to yourself!! I need the tall, broad, muscular cousin in his 17th century yummy tunic and his beard and long auburn hair, on which I can...ahem...errrmmm...ummm...well for me to know and you all to guess!! 😉🤣 Sigh!! And who doesn't kiss their 'garbar ghotala' cousin's hand!! 🤔


Well obviously, you'll have to suspend disbelief by a bit when it comes to these pictures, Lana... 😆 I can't get an assassins' creed with Disney princesses, can I? If we dress, act, talk, walk and behave like disney belles, he has to be one of the disney heroes too... and as you said imagination is the key... so, the rest is to be imagined! 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali



My Gains during 2017..


My biggest gain is my virtual family in the HBAS thread. From the time I wake up till I go to bed I am always in the company of my dear nieces and grandchildren every day, whose faces I have not seen nor their voices I have heard. But the year 2017 gave me an opportunity to meet a couple of my family members , Sandhya and Shyamala when I visited India.

What a wonderful group these Baisas form! I am so thankful to my dear

Shyamala, who introduced me to this lovely family in the India Forum a couple of

years ago..

Well, about my kith and kin here ...Barring a few I know almost all of them from

JA days..

Lashy the adorable.. My limited vocabulary doesn't do full justice to write what I feel about her.. She is like my daughter and at times like an elderly person to me, when clearing my doubts or giving me advice at proper times.. She is unceasingly active, doing multiple functions at the same time, like an entertainer skilfully juggling so many objects at the same time without dropping any of them. She juggles her duties as a wife, parent, author of a wonderful historical drama and so many other responsibilities..

BinduPrasad , the punctual..

The sun may forget to rise, but Bindu will be present in the HBAS thread, wishing all of us a good morning.. She never fails to respond to the members' posts as and when she reads them.. And has developed a unique style of writing of her comments on the author's work. This year, we were not able drench in her good morning wishes for a few months due to some political disturbance happening in her place.

Lana , the all rounder..

I have come to know her during the HBAS era. A beautiful analyst, witty in her remarks, always alert, story writer, a poet who is always ready with the poem suited to any occasion, situation or picture.. Above all a compassionate teacher for her students who are so special..

I am yet to know how many other talents she has concealed in her.

Rose, the pleasing person..introduced by Lashy

I have never seen Rose taking a day off from the forum without proper reason. And her words of appreciation for comments, words of soothing to those who feel a bit low at times, the never failing reciprocation to the posts with immense sincerity, her art of writing... and so on and so forth..I admire her for these..

Kausi, the chirpy girl..

Always bubbling with enthusiasm, never missing a chance to come up with best poems and musings , though very brief in her reviews.. She believes in the saying, "Small is beautiful.".I love her challenge with Sandhya for Jalal!

Sandhya..the treasure chest..

An excellent poetess developed into a story writer, a good conversationalist, a clever story analyst and of course a strong rival to Kausi and her never-give up- attitude when it comes to the 'ownership' of Jalal!

Mitali, the silent performer..

Her talent for poetry writing is like the saying in Tamil, "Kudathilitta ViLakku pola.." (Like a lamp kept inside a pot.) Very calm and without any paraphernalia..

Manasi, the chef and the computer image generator!

I used to wonder how she managed to make 20,000 posts within a short period of 7 years! But I guessed the answer correctly after seeing her expressive emojis which substitute the usage of words..

Kuki..The smart one..

A very clever young girl, equipped with excellent knowledge of the computer, very sportive in her attitude, almost a pet to everyone in the HBAS family..

Bindu, 007.. the intelligent

This little one, along with Shagun is responsible for making me create our darling kutties, Baby and Babloo. I adopted Bindu and Shagun as my granddaughters on the New Year Day 2016..

Lavanya, the mature writer.

I know her from Shyamala aunty's JA (rerun) analysis thread.. She is an A- class poetess, a talented writer cum analyst, with a very lovable nature. I used to admire her takes on JA analyses as well as on the HBAS chapters. Her poem "Ajnabi" stands an example for her talent in the field..

Selvi, the wonderful photographer

I know her only recently introduced by HBAS..Every morning we log in the computer just to see Selvi's Landscape GIFs and the relevant poems composed by Lana, Vatsy, Sandhya and others. She is a person very quick to react to other members' posts..Very intelligent as well..

Vatsy, the mature minded.

Like Selvi, she is also a new addition to the list of my relatives in the HBAS family...Her calm and composed nature is revealed in her responses to the Baisas' comments in the thread..

Anindita: The poetess..

Very active and always comes ready with a Bengali poem with English translation to post at appropriate places..

Harshu, the Master of Musings..

She holds the highest record in her unique way of doing episode analysis of JA serial. She never missed any episode..Only she can make it lively by inserting appropriate emoticons at relevant places. Her analysis was like grandma's story telling , humor and seriousness combined ..I miss her presence now a days.

Others I miss in the thread are the cute and smart Adwi and my favorite little grand daughter Shagun..who are committed to their studies this year...

I thank all of you girls, for keeping me rejuvenated throughout the year that has passed.. And I hope to enjoy the same warmth in the coming year as well..

WISHING YOU A HAPPY NEW YEAR,


Sachu Patti

Periyamma/Aunty.



Pattii🤗

You've gifted us a beautiful post!Thank you so much! I can never forget all the fun we had along with Shagun on AAA threads.I'm thankful to Shyamala aunty.It was b'coz of her I got to meet you and then came our dear kutties.(Guess,Baby and Babloo are busy with the little Mina these days!)

Your quizzes,poems,haikus,anagrams..all of them are very entertaining.

Your wisdom,creativity and energy always amazes and inspires me,Patti! You are always young at heart! Love you!

Happy New Year to you too!🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali


Chapter 43.
Image result for painting of hugging fairy tale lovers


It is just an embrace
But when you think about it
It is not even that
It is just two bodies
Coming together for warmth..

Something about the way
Your arms fit perfectly around my back
Or how my arms effortlessly
Wrap around your shoulders
Or how my head and your chin\
Fit like puzzle pieces
Makes me question
If it was really just a hug?



And here comes the beautiful romantic poem... that adds to this star-studded event today!
Thanks Periyamma... and what a way to end the poem with that last line!

Originally posted by: lghosh



Something about the way when you envelop me,
In your arms bringing me close, for you to see,
Your arms hold my face perfectly in your palms,
Or how effortlessly around your back, go my arms!
Your eyes pour into my mine with love shining through,
I am mesmerised by your charms and your honest virtue,
And when you finally bend your head to capture my lips,
I go numb in pleasure thriving in my own apocalypse!
And you pull me closer to you claiming me to be yours,
And I submit myself wholly to your passion, which lures!
I am yours to be cherished, enjoyed and spoilt in love,
Standing on your boots I wait to experience the behove!
Your hug tightens around me showing your lidded desire,
I am pleasantly surprised and thrive, on this news I acquire!


*Thud!*
And the feelings in this poem is, on behalf of _____ 😆
Edited by lashy - 8 years ago

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