Do Jism,Ek Jaan!- Very Imp Note on pg22! - Page 8

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Posted: 17 years ago
#71
WOW SAPNA KI SHAADI R ROMANCE HAI AR CHAL RAHA HAI..........PLZ SWEETY CONT SOON WTH A LNG PRT.......... 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#72
i'll surely conitnue with a longgggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg part very soon... 😉

these days i'm busy with my MBBS exams preparation! 😉 😕
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Posted: 17 years ago
#73
aww your exams comes first so take ur sweet time we will wait n ya all the very best for your exams 👍🏼

waiting for the next part
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Posted: 17 years ago
#74
just caught up with the whole fanfic! . 😛 absolutly amazing ff hun! 👏

keep up the great work! 👍🏼 and cantt wait till the next partt! 😳

and also .. good luck on ur exams!! 👍🏼 😳

❤️Sanyaaa
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Posted: 17 years ago
#75
NO PRO SWEETY TKE UR TME ND
ALL THE BEST FR UR EXAMS

nd whn u update cn u plz pm me.............cont.soon nxt prt plz lng dena wth romance...............luv u

YACHNA 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#76
heyyy hun!! awesum job!!!
plzzz cont afta exams!!!!
n plzz pm me once u hav updated....plz plz plz i relli wna read the continuation....dnt wna miss it!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#77

Really sorry for making u all wait....sorry its a short part but surely try to post the next part soon!😉


SCENE-20

Muskaan was walking and talking to herself when she didn't see water on the floor and slipped but fortuanately Rahul was there in time to hold her...He held her from her bare waist...Both didn't noticed that Armaan & Riddhima had walked upto them and now were looking at them bcoz they were too busy looking into each other's eyes...
Armaan & Riddhima smiled after looking at them...
Armaan "Riddhima,maine kaha tha naa inhe pyar ho gaya hai"
Riddhima "tumne sahi kaha tha par mujhe vishvas nahi ho raha ki jo log itna ladte the vo kabhi ek dusre se pyar kar sakte hai?"
Armaan "iske main tumhe do examples de sakta hun..ek to Rahul & Muskaan dusre hum dono....remember hum bhi to bahut ladte the"
Riddhima blushes at his statement..!
Then they together shout "RAHUL & MUSKAAN"
Rahul & Muskaan come out of their world...and stand there blushing + embarresed...
Armaan sings "pyar to hone laga hai"....Muskaan leaves from there blushing while Riddhima smiles and follows her...
Armaan "kyun be, tune bataya nahi ki tujhe pyar bhi hota hai"
Rahul "aisa kuch bhi nahi hai mere aur muskaan ke beech mein"
Armaan "maine Muskaan to kaha hi nahi"....
Rahul "a....wo..."
Atul comes...
Atul "arre yaar,tum log chalo andar sangeet shuru ho gaya hai"
Armaan "chal...."..they all go
...

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SCENE-21

Riddhima went upstairs bcoz she felt that her zip had opened a little..!
all were busy on dancing that Riddhima has went upstairs leaving Armaan bcoz he was gazing at Riddhima continuously....

Armaan followed Riddhima upstairs..he saw that she was in front of the mirror(which means her back is towards Armaan) trying her best to close the zip but her hands were not reaching..so he moved foward and touched her bare back gently..Riddhima felt a cold hand touching her back so she quickly turned...

Riddhima "Arm...Armaan tum...tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?"
Armaan says nothing and just stares at her continuously with love filled eyes....this made her blush and she turned which means again her back towards armaan...

Armaan gently closed her zip while looking at Riddhima's face in the mirror which was totally red as she was blushing so much...
Armaan made her turn around...her eyes were closed..
Armaan lifted her head with his hand an kissed her eyes...She opened her eyes..!
They both were staring at each other when somebody knocked at the door...KNOCK! KNOCK!
both turned and saw Anjali & atul standing there..!

Anjali "aap dono ko ye do yaad hai na ki ye aap ka nahi sapna ka sangeet hai?...to ab aap neeche chalenge...ya?..."
Riddhima "n...nahi di....chaliye"

Riddhima & Anjali go..
Armaan was standing there and was sad that Riddhima had to go..

Atul "don't worry..tujhe chance mil jayega"(while laughing at his condition)
Armaan "chup...aur ab chal"

they both go down!!..................😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
#78
😆 😆 Sweet part! hope your exams went well!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#79
thanx for updating it was soooooooo cute 👏 .
i never knew u had ur exams, how were they.
waiting for next part. keep it up girl
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Veiledbeauty

😆 😆 Sweet part! hope your exams went well!!

my exams went great..thanks

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