NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THD 38~Teaser for Chapter 44 pg 1 - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
#31

Instalment mein kyun bol rahi hai, poori kahani bata na thik se! 😎
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wishing you a wonderful birthday, Bindu. 🤗 🥳

Lashy Sahiba has given you your first birthday present. What a gift it is, too!👏

I think Manu is planning a birthday thread for the birthday girl. Are you, Manu?😉

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Posted: 8 years ago
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY BOND 👏⭐️ WHAT A GIFT YOU HAVE GOT 😆😉


SO I GOT UP AT 5.30 AM TODAY AND THERE WAS NO UPDATE 😳 SO I THOUGHT I COULD EXPECT ONE ONLY AT NIGHT, SINCE THATS WHAT LASHY USUALLY DOES


AND THEN I LOGGED AGAIN AT 12 AND LO AND BEHOLD 😉 THERE IT WAS.


THEN THIS MAD RUSH TO COMP,ETE MY SHORES AND JUST SHOO EVERYONE AWAY FROM MYSELF 😆😆


AND WHAT AN UPDATE 😳⭐️👏 EXTRAORINARY IN EVERY SENSE


AND NOT ONLY FOR WHAT IT CONTAINED


IT IS EXTRAORDINARY FOR EACH AND EVERY WORD THAT HAS BEEN USED, EACH EMOTION DEPICTED - HEERA'S TURMOIL AFTER CHACHAJAAN'S REVELATIONS, HER UNSTEADINESS, THE ESCAPED MESSENGER'S DESPARATION, SAHIB'S REMINISCING OF AZEEZ'S PAST,
HIS INITIAL WARINESS AND MILD IRRITATION WHEN HE ENTERED HIS CHAMBER, THE LOOK HEERA HAD WHEN SHE SAW HIM ENTER, HIS MILD INTERROGATION, HIS CORRECT GUESS ON WHAT THE MATTER WAS WITH HER, HIS FORCED AVOIDANCE, HER AGRESSIVE DEMEANOUR...


SERIOUSLY LASHY, EACH OF YOUR UPDATES IS STUPENDOUS, IT MAKES US LOSE OURSELVES IN THE WORLD OF HEERA AND HER SAHIB ❤️


WHAT CAN ONE EVEN SAY ABOUT KHAN SAHIB AFTER THIS ❤️🤗


AND TODAY I LOVED HEERA TOO, AS MUCH AS HER SAHIB 😆 SHE TOO HAS LEARN THE ART OF JUDGING HIS THOUGHTS PERFECTLY AND SHE DOESNT WASTE ANY TIME, DOES SHE 😉WHAT AN AWESOME PAIR THEY MAKE


KUKI - YOUR AZEEZ IS A HERO IN EVERY SENSE OF THE WORD. YOU HAVE GOT A GREAT CATCH 😆 BURY YOUR PANS FOREVER AND THE SAME FOR BOND AND ROSEJAAN 👏⭐️


FOR NOW, I CANT WAIT TO TAKE YET ANOTHER DIP INTO THIS MAGICAL LAND


P.S - AFTER READING THE UPDATE ABOUT KHAN SAHIBS MON, MY GUESS IS THAT A HAPPY ENDING BETWEEN THEM IS GOING TO HAPPEN 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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ok her b'day thread is ready so plzzz wish her there...😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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18 pages of HW overnight in the old thread- thanks to the Baisas that Manu rounded up.👏

Periyamma in Singapore- just struck me -now we will be in the same time zone.😃

Lana, what a packed daily schedule. Managing 2 jobs? Don't work yourself too hard, dearie!🤗

Logging off for now - 4 hours online! All update's fault!😆 😉

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Rose Bhabijaan, please don't mind but I liked the interruption made by Mirza Sahib!! 😛 This was not the right time for their complete union, in future at an apt time in leisure it should be!! 😉😃

But you know there is a dreadful feeling gnawing at the pit of my stomach about this upcoming mission!! 🤔 There will not be Azeez, no Sayyid, no Ibrahim...KS all alone and knowing that Khalil is already in cahoots with Mahendra looking for a chance to get his revenge...my sixth sense is not giving me a good feeling!! Moreover, that man got away from the safe house with his intention to reach Manswar to Royal Piggy!! 🤔 Not good at all!
I trust Lashy but something sinister is up!! My CS can be in danger!! Hope I am wrong!! 🤔 There can be a major trap! Ooofff Lana, subh subh socho!! Be the vest and protect him! 😃

Rose, as I wrote earlier the line that got me, was, "And it was then, at that instant, that Heera had a true inkling of how far her husband had been keeping his desires lidded." This one line had many layered meaning, which made KS very much human and normal! 😃

I agree with the rest you said Rose, a superb edit of the picture, her eyes saw the little neglected and abused 10 year old in her soul close to her heart!! Her partial sight finally got a completion today of that unknown past and saw it as a whole complete picture, on her own! She is healed and has started the healing process for KS. Her compassion and love as a wife came to the forefront! The epiphany was superb where she actually realised how He literally brought her out from the dump, the dark hole lending her his hand!! Reminded me of the first canal scene! 😃 That was a superb touch!! 👏 How she was saved by him in her life when she was all the way down through this parallel was a magnificent one! The psychology plays the part and enlightened her of all the dark past and corners of her life and how she was rescued by him and the moment this realisation took place, she reached out immediately in gratification! And the way she portrayed the importance was also brilliant! The lives we lead where we do not know what will happen tomorrow...that brought the importance and the urgency to perspective for him!

And also the fact that she addressed him as Ustaad and appreciated him and conveyed her love for him also did the magic! That part that was holding him found its freedom today and he let go of all the reins! 😃 She embraced Ustaad the CIO, AMK the businessman who kept Parnagarh safe and Khan Sahib her husband who gave her love, protected her from all evils and gave her a shelter in his heart! Today it was the completion of a complete circle of her comprehension of the Man! 😃 And nothing could stop him then! 😉😃

And Lashy, you clarified very clearly that KS's mom left him for selfish reasons of her own, dumped him very wholeheartedly and is leading a happy life of her own and in spite of knowing this he has kept away from her and the city. Heera can give the feminine love to him that his rough and rugged side deserves but I do not want anything to do with that selfish lady! If he has survived well so far then he can survive in future too with the love of Heera! That lady has not done any favours to him and she can stay away for all I care.

Today I will have to give an 'adaab' to Shehzade for whatever he has done and accomplished as far as making a CIO out of KS! For selfish reasons yes, for his own benefit yes but nevertheless if he had not shown the way KS would not have been what he is today. He was a good role model for him.

I have mixed feelings about Chachajaan's conveying everything to her but I also want a scene in future where KS will reveal his every feeling of pain, struggle, disappointment, hurt, feelings of failure, neglect, hope, determination to make it to the top...to Heera! One to one!

And loved the insight and foresight of KS in picking his boys from the street! For a moment I got reminded of the dagger throw at him when he was throwing the scrolls at him to distract him from the cold in making the moment lighter! 😃 His care and concern in keeping them safe and not letting anyone go on this dangerous mission are admirable! And his transition to professionalism and alertness within a moment is commendable! His agile form, his ever-active mind and his intelligence always kill me to the core! Waise Rose Bhabijaan hope you are all okay now and recovered from your sickness completely in the tender care of Mirza Sahib enveloped in his love!! 😉😆


And today his love as a husband also took me to unmeasurable heights. He wanted to listen to more, her acceptance of him as a whole, on her own volition, without any force from him, without any push from him and once she did that there was no holding back for him!!

Lashy their part was brilliant!! Fantastic! Spectacular! Marvellous! 👍🏼 I can go on but you get the picture! This update was so full of emotions, riding on the supple waves of feelings and sentiments. And like always you stole our hearts by your conveyance and storytelling!! 👏⭐️ Thank you for this story and giving me my KS!! 🤗

Now keep him safe and don't make him fall in the entrapment of danger! I know he is the Ustaad and will get out but I will pray for his safe return and safety in general. I don't want even a small cut on him! 🤔

And I didn't write about the intimate part on purpose because I know I will get carried away while writing and then don't want to be bambooed by IF! 😉😆 That part was amazing!! Yes, I was right in telling you, if I was half dead in the afternoon I am full dead now! 🤣
Edited by lghosh - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congratulations Lashy & all B&B's for the new Home !!! 🥳

I peeked in a couple of times in between visitors for the update & saw Rose's note.
Had to wait for the last of the visitors to leave & settled down to read.

Wow - what a fantastic update. Quite an emotional one & the feeling I got initially was that we have been on the run with the leads for quite some time & finally can catch our breath to heave a big sigh as that last of the remaining shreds of the wall is cleared. Though we know the journey now will restart with many unknown twists & turns this will be the first true oasis in their travel through the desert that was no mirage 😳. I'll be going to bed basking in the bliss that has been endowed to us.

Will come back to read up on the last thread & other reviews tomorrow. It's going to be a busy day.

Lashy need to Thank you for giving us this treat just in time for X'mas & appreciate all your efforts to do so. Enjoy the holidays with your family.

To all sahibas - Wishing you all a happy X'mas eve !!! 🤗

Good night !!!





Edited by Vmanoh - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: lashy


A humble request/tip - if possible, do read it when you have the time, nothing else on your mind and (if really possible) when no one else is around!😆


You should have put this at the start of the chapter...
Godd!!can one be sad ,horrified,teary eyed,worried,surprised ,excited ,grateful,hopeful ,thankful and in a state of eternal bliss...
YES..
One needs to read chapter 43..
I knew something good was to happen and it did...that analogy with cave and little Heera and AMK left me teary eyed...
Heera's confession ,AMK's reactions and the build up to it...amazing...you are a star..love you and I mean it...
And yes,why would you let me be happy wholly (the messenger part...😡)...
Last part...can't stop smiling and if I die due to over excitement then its on you...
Want to write so much but for now THANK YOU ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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And yes..thankyou Khan Sahib for taking Azeez under your wings😃..pickpocket...baba re...mummy se kaise milwati😲

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