Ghayab- Avneil SS epilogue pg 29- Page 10

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Posted: 8 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Veenapain

Lovely update.One thing I didn't understand if Neil is police , how come he was guide.Is it his hobby or for the sake of a case.


sake of a case which is top secret lol.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Read two parts in a go . How did Avni forgive so easily . I thought she will take a class . Neil Khanna ki jaadu aisa hai 😆 He was straightforward that he never knew her before the trip started . And he handled DVM too .

Where is the date ? I expected some flirting from Neil . Seedha drug trafficking Avni is a reporter ?
How come she is so cool with DVM


Avni and Neil are totally ignoring DVM. They know or will know what they are for each other. Neil cares for Avni no matter the past or her family background. As he said banter with me, but you will marry me someday or so he said in his mind. Maybe later they will give DVM a bashing. She just cares about money and spoiling her only grandson.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#93
Just read it in one go
Absolutely amazing story
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kmhcrazyfan

Just read it in one go

Absolutely amazing story


so glad you are liking it!😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part Twelve- The Villian


" Who is that brave yet foolish officer that dared to try to find me?


"Sir uski paunch bauth upar thak lagti hai, his henchman stammered.


"Uski koi toh kamzori hogi, dundo usse. In the mean time I headed out of the country. We need to make a decent fool proof plan. He will have to pay for his bravery, the boss declared.


His henchman was about to leave, but he stopped by his next words.


"Naam kya bataya tumne?


"Uska toh ACP Neil Khanna hai saab, he replied.


"Uski koi biwi ya girlfriend hai kya?


"Phata karta hoon saab, he said with his head down.


" Usko kidnap karke mere paas leker aana. Jab bhi mil jaye, the boss declared.


" Saab kahan leker aana hain?


"My favorite city of all time of course, Prague, the boss answered.


The henchman left the room worried. Boss's favorite city always changed. How was he supposed to get the girl, if there was one to Prague without being caught?


Vidyuth Pandit was no ordinary boss, he would do far worse than kill to get what he wanted.


The henchman's name was Balu. He led a life of crime but he had a bad habit of taking things at face value. Also Avni Mehta aka Aanya Verma was no easy catch. Just ask her fiancee who was now bending on one knee proposing to her less than 24 hours before their engagement ceremony.


"Come on Avni manjo! Look my knee is hurting,Neil pleaded with his chocolate brown eyes and adorable expressions.


Avni smiled.


"Theek hai ACP Neil Khanna, I accept your proposal, she declared.


"Sorry mere paas woh ring nahin hai hai. Woh Bebe ne..


"Bebe chupali hai. She is so excited for tomorrow that's why. No worries.


"Vaise woh human trafficking case kaise chalra hai?


"Why do you want the first dibs on the report, Ms. Verma?


Avni chuckled. They would always use her pseudo name when in public places and especially since she could not use her real name in her current job. It was too risky. Avni and Ali had a makeshift office cum hideout in the uneven basement of his mother's cafe. They often met informants there.


"Perhaps I do, she whispered.


As Avni was leaving the station, Balu came there in a disguise and inquired who she was.


A peon scoffed at him.


"Of course everyone knows. She is ACP's special informant. Without her help he wouldn't have made such progress in the past couple of cases,


Balu's eyes widened. He felt like he had hit the jackpot.


If he arranged for her to be napped, then that ACP would never be able to catch his boss.


Flashback..


Neil shook hands with Avni outside his office door. She felt something being pressed into her hand.


"Keep it aside but close to you. I think we are being watched, he whispered.


She merely nodded and placed it inside her bag.


After she left, Neil called DD.


"Track Aanya Verma's phone. Whoever is the boss is bound to look for her, he stated.


"Jee sir!


Present time thirty minutes after Avni left the police station.


A blue van pulled up and blocked the rickshaw she was traveling in.


"Yeh kya hai?


She reached for the object Neil had pressed her in her hand.


In minutes she was dragged out of the rickshaw, the driver was knocked unconscious in the process.


Choro mujhe!


A cloth covered her face and soon she was rendered unconscious herself. The covered her with a bag and headed towards their hideout.


It seemed like hours later when she gained consciousness. The bag was no longer on her head.


The chloroform had left her with a major headache.


A strange man glared at her.


She gave a dirty look.


"Ok kitne paise chaiye?


He looked at her dumbstruck.


" Vaise you kidnapped the wrong person. My parents died and my foster mother doesn't have a cent to give you. Unko kyun pareshan karna hai? Bechari took me in when I was a child and has wasted her life in raising me, Avni declared.


"Arre chup kar. Maine usse liye nahin kidnap kiya tujhe!


"Phir kyun kiya?


" Tell that ACP to stop tracking my boss!


"Woh meri baat kyun sunega?


Balu wanted to smack his own face in frustration.


"Kyunki tum uski informant ho!


Avni laughed at him.


" I went there for a story. Who told you I was his informant? That ACP wouldn't give to me, she declared.


"Jhoot mat bol ladki!


"Kya kare gaya? Mara gaya? Toh marke dekha!, she hissed.


A strong grip on his hand stopped him from hitting Avni.


He turned to see Neil and behind him were the men he thought he had hired to help him with the kidnapping.


" Have some shame man! You were about to hit a defenseless woman. Look she is tied up but you are not. This is not fair!


"Jee sir we should remedy this, DD declared.


Balu was kicked suddenly by Avni and then she got up from the chair, her ropes had been loosened by one of the undercover cops.


She slapped his face next. Then hinted at DD and few other officers to come tie him up.


"Take him to his rightful place, Neil ordered.


Avni wearily sat down in the police jeep and took out her inhaler.


She took two puffs.


She felt his hand on her shoulder.


"Tum theek toh ho?, he whispered.


She nodded.


"My breathing is ok just my head hurts, she stammered.


He handed her a water bottle. She rinsed her mouth then drank some.

DD was the only one who knew they were going to marry soon.


He offered to drive her home.


"Dhyan se leker jana. Actually maybe she should go to the hospital first, Neil suggested.


"Stop it!


The guys looked at her puzzled.


"Don't talk as if I am not here. I will go to the hospital, DD doesn't have to drive me.


"Lekin Bhabhi!


"DD is going to drop you, this is not a request, this is an order. I will come meet you at Neela Ma's house in the evening, he declared.


Avni sighed.


"Theek hai. Chalo DD, Avni relented.


He knew how to push her buttons and keep her safe all at once.


Neela Verma knew it would be a life altering decision when she took Avni under wing several years ago after the demise of her best friend Ayesha Haider Mehta. Daywanti wanted nothing to do with her daughter-in-law until she gave birth to Aman which she preferred to call him Amol. As Avni and Aman grew up, Dayawanti treated her older granddaughter like a future weapon to expand her business. She needed Aman to be her heir, and Avni was the person he clung to at the age of five when he lost his parents. He was cordial towards Neela as she fostered Avni and her career ambitions and helped Avni escape from a few horrifying alliances.


This enraged Dayawanti Mehta but she had no choice. After Aman's drug habit reveal it was Neela who handled the situation and got the now 23 years old young man the help he needed. Daywanti called a truce to their feud for the time being. She could next focus on finding Riya a rich business man or at least a boy from a decent business family. She was disappointed Neil preferred to be a cop than work for Khanna industries, but the hope was that once they had children they would continue the business after Prakash died.

Edited by adventure_gurl - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#96
Res..
Unress...
Romantic Khanna's way of telling.. hayee!
I was in awe all during that entire scene..😆
And even their small convo during walk...
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Year later?😲
Hihi.. loved Neil's scene with his to be saala and saali..
Can we get this neil Khanna in real life please?!
He is sooo supportive ... Avni is lucky indeed...
Neela has been.. n always will be avni's angel..
Loved thier scene tooo..

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Vidyut is here finally... But Don't mess with Khanna VR... 😳
Ye kya hai.. balu itni kaabil kaise ban gaya?
He successfully kidnapped her..?😆
Daya ko sirf apni business ki padi hai😳
...

Totally Loved all the updates...😃

Edited by ...SA... - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#97
Are we headung towards Vidyut -riya plot?? Just curious.
Avni is savage. I really wish she actually kicks ballu on screen too. And Neil is just <3

This was unexpected and amazing.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#98
Amazing!
AvNeil are smart and resourceful & unafraid to push the boundaries for their work!👏

Loved how Avni didnt shy away from physically retaliating against Balu & that Neil encouraged her to do so!

Eagerly anticipating the next part!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#99
This is interesting😊.. plz update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Love your version of all these familiar characters and esp how you are bringing Avneil closer ... terrific update

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