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Posted: 18 years ago
Jus caught up wid ur ff, its absolutely awesome, i h8 mishty btw... n angad n kripa r tooo cute!!! n dadi is awesome as well!!!
Edited by nehagupta_9 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
aww u were in the hosoital!!!
i hate tat place i had to go
there to get stiches i really
HATE that place anyways:) sidetrack
hope u feel better nd cont soon
Edited by madu1006 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Bollywood_chic

hey u were at da hospital soo sad hope u alright now wat happened am waiting for u to cont but take ur time k...get well...

Sonia



i noe sad...i got a really bad cough, cold, n fever...thankz ...i am cont. tonight :)

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

Jus caught up wid ur ff, its absolutely awesome, i h8 mishty btw... n angad n kripa r tooo cute!!! n dadi is awesome as well!!!



lol thank u!
p.s. i love ur siggy!! i love dev from kajjal...ahh he is sooo hot!!! lol sry...over excited haha but i really love him! lol

Originally posted by: madu1006

aww u were in the hosoital!!! i hate tat place i had to go there to get stiches i really HATE that place anyways:) sidetrack hope u feel better nd cont soon



haha i love when ppl get sidetracked...it makes me feel normal..cuz i do it ever 2 min. lol thankz..i am cont. tonight.
Edited by hotaditya - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Recap:
Mishty looks up and sees dadi. She smiles and says, "Nothing dadi…why are you asking?" "Oh for no reason…I just saw you almost kill the poor glass and I thought I could help you with something of some sort."

"Dadi…has Angad told about us?" Dadi smiles and says, "No he hasn't….was he supposed to?" "No he wasn't…supposed to…but I just wanted you to know that Angad and I have some chemistry going on, n I think you should be hearing wedding bells soon."

Gimmie gimmie gimmie a desi….a desi guy
Gimmie gimmie gimmie a desi…who looks so fly
I want a man that rocks my world cuz I need a gangsta!
Don't know about you girl but I need a gangsta!
Ek sona sona mundha, I need a gangsta!
te thura sa lafunga! cuz I need a gangsta!

Break it down!
Ya make me wanna a go turram turram!
All my ppl in the place go turram turram!
45 Lakhs! Turram turram!
Baby I'm kewl! Turram turram
All the girls in the house yo! Turram turram!
All my mans in the place yo! Turram turram!
All the girls in the house yo! Turram turram!
Hard kaur kewl ya let's go come on!


Part 11:




The song dies down….

"Mishty…what you think is gonna happen…think it…" Saying that Dadi leaves Mishty. Mishty just makes a face at Dadi's back and crosses her arms.
Mishty starts walking towards the bar as she does…she sees Angad n Kripa still dancing. Mishty got even more irritated. A guy comes to the bar, "One beer." Mishty turns around sees him sipping his drink. Mishty suddenly smiles.

"This is the perfect way to make MY Angad jealous," thinks Mishty. Mishty picks up the drink on the counter and sips it.

"Hey," Mishty says in a flirty tone. "Hey," says the guy. "I am Mishty," says Mishty putting out her hand. "Hey…I am Ajay…" says the guy as he shakes her hand.

"Oh…I love this song!" Says Mishty as she puts her drink down. "Come on let's dance!" She pulls Ajay onto the dance floor by Angad and Kripa.

Mishty starts dancing like there is not tomorrow. While Ajay just eyes Kripa.

While dancing Mishty "accidentally" bumps into Angad. "Oh Angad! I didn't see you there…..r you having fun?" Angad looks at Mishty who is with a guy who looks bored as hell. "Yeah I am…time is going by."

Someone taps Angad on the shoulder, and whispers something in his ear. Angad turns to Kripa who is dancing with him and says "hey I will be right back Kripa."

Kripa nods and continues to dance with her friends who are also next to her.

Angad leaves and Mishty takes this as the time to follow him. So Kripa and Ajay are left alone…

"Do you want to dance?" asks Ajay who is checking Kripa out from head to toe. "Uh…sure."

A slow song comes on and Ajay and Kripa start dancing. By now Angad is walking back with Mishty trying to catch up to him. Angad stops when he sees Ajay and Kripa.

"Why does it hurt to see Kripa dancing with someone else? It didn't hurt when Mishty was dancing with him," thinks Angad as he stares at them with a hurt expression.

Kripa looks around and sees Angad looking at her with pain in his eyes. She pushes Ajay away, and goes towards Angad.

"Angad are you ok?" says Kripa putting her hand on his check. "Actually…I think I am really tired right now so I am gonna go home…"

"Oh ok can you drop me too? Because I came here with Mishty and I don't think she is willing to take me home…" Angad looks at Kripa confusedly, "yea sure I can drop you off…but why is she not willing to?"

"Because she saw me dancing with you…I don't know why but she gets more annoyed every time she sees me with you." Angad laughs and turns around walking away.

Kripa stays there watching Angad walk away. Angad stops n turns around, "aren't you coming?" Kripa laughs and runs to catch up with him.

And Angad wraps his arm around Kripa's waist….



grr u do not noe how mad i am...i wrote this in my note book since i couldnt use my laptop...n i wrote FIVE pages! n when i started typing it turned out this short! it was prob. cuz i cut out half the stuff...does this ever happen to u? u r write so much..n than u go over it n u scratch half of it...well if it does..than u must noe how pissed i am....but if i get comments than i will be happy..n i will noe that u guys forgive me lol thanks u guys!!

Luv,
~Preeti~

p.s. u like the banner? thankz to sikh kuri!!!
Edited by hotaditya - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: dudeeitseva

LOVEDDDDD ITTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!



lol thankz eva....
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Posted: 18 years ago

hey , just caught up with last 2 parts...mishti is soooo dum shes thinks shes really hot i think someone shud go to her and say: hey mishti ur really hot....

she would be all smerking and then the guy adds NOT...lol that would be funny..

ok im runing wild here any ways back to FF i love dadi...she is cool...i lliked then end of the part .. i can imagine angad laughing..ohh its sooo cute..

sam.

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Posted: 18 years ago
👏nice part luvd it 👏i juzz wish angad gets to noe soon dat wit whom he actually chats😊 den its gonna b mre fun :)
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey preeti good to c u all weel again love the banner and the part did ajay tell u to put him in there??? lol must have...ha ha anyways i got ma laptop last tues and now its not letting me log nto IF so i have to go n big comp annoying....u haven't commentated for a while on my ff oh well plz do if u have time...how did ur exams go have u got da results yet??? anyways maybe wednesday morning i iwll speak to u on msn it'll be ur tues night i have extended homeroom so mite be on msn lol....anyways speak to u soon....

Sonia
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey ur awesome 👏 i like this ff 😆 its so cool 😉 nd i lv dadi's character 😳 i hate mishty 😡
i wnt AK 2gata 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: chocolate p

hey , just caught up with last 2 parts...mishti is soooo dum shes thinks shes really hot i think someone shud go to her and say: hey mishti ur really hot....


she would be all smerking and then the guy adds NOT...lol that would be funny..


ok im runing wild here any ways back to FF i love dadi...she is cool...i lliked then end of the part .. i can imagine angad laughing..ohh its sooo cute..



sam.



haha u noe wat..i will deff. use u idea..if u dont mind! haha i can picture mishty's face now...lol i love dadi too....haha thankz sam for likeing it!

Originally posted by: newkidontheblok

👏nice part luvd it 👏i juzz wish angad gets to noe soon dat wit whom he actually chats😊den its gonna b mre fun :)



lol thank u....haha he will noe soon...to tell u the truth i dont noe wat the next part is gonna be about so....i also dont noe how this story is gonna end up lol..thankz for reading n commenting!

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