RishBala SS : Zarir (Completed - 02/02 - P: 60 + Epilogue - P: 63)

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Maithili

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Posted: 8 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: Hend_Refai
great update
I hope now RK and Madhu cooperate to bring justice to their families

Thanks a lot dear!
Glad you find it good!
Hope the justice is brought soon!
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Maithili

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Posted: 8 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: arshifansiri
Awesome update!!
Loved it.
Eagerly waiting for the next part.
Thanks for d pm:)

Thank you buddy!
Glad you loved it!
Will be updating the next parts in 2 sub parts as it will make it a little longer than now!
So see you soon! ;-)

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming
lovely update .

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Maithili

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Posted: 8 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: varshajoshi17
Superb update
Loved it

Thank you dear!
Glad you loved it!
Hope it continues!
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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: harini_
Nice update,
so that's why Rk is blaming himself,instead of his bro he went to US if his bro went there then they would have been alive now,he feels becoz of him they died,
Madhu escaped from them,
now Rk know what really happened will he say it to her that's him her parents choosed for her,
hope they both punishes those culprits soon,
continue soon,
thanks for the pm

Thank you so much buddy!
Hope he gets out of this soon!
Luckily she escaped!
Now he know and hope the punishment happens soon!
Will be updating soon dear!
Thank you so much once again!
Keep on reading!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: Clara20
Awesome update dear

Thanks a lot buddy!
Hope you like all the upcoming parts too!
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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--
Awesome update Maithu.. u are taking it with great precision.. so madhu was held captive by those culprits ! and then She fought it well.. and Rk.. aww.. the poor guy.. i felt very bad here.. he was blaming himself.. cant see him in pain.. hope Maithu.. provide him with peace soon :) ..hahaa.. lolz.. thanks for pm :) cont. soon !

Thanks a lot dear!
Well dear! You know how to play with more precision than me ;-)
Gladly she fought it and escaped!
Hope their bad time gets away soon!
Sure dear! He will search for his peacefulness soon! Hehehehe
Will update soon!
Keep on tuned! :-)

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#228

Hello!

As you all know, normally the update was for tomorrow but as I was a bit free, thought to make this part in two sub-parts!
So here I'm with the part A!
For sure you are going to have questions at the end!
Ask them, will try my best to reply to every question! ;-)

Link to the previous part: Part 7

Happy reading!

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Part 8A

*** As I came running towards the road, I got blinded by rays of lights and lost all the strength I had. ***

"Sorry for lying! I had no other choice!" she said in between her sobs.
"Sleep! We will talk later!" he said as he gave one glance at the sleeping for of Ayan before exiting the room after seeing Madhu nod her head.

*** Will he ask me to get out of the house now? ***

- Is fate playing game by bringing her here? -

*** Will I loose Ayan too now? ***

- Will she be able to love Ayan even after I tell her who I'm really? -

*** Why life is this cruel? ***

- Why can't life be easy? -

With plenty of thoughts running in both their minds, they kept on lingering their eyes on the ceiling, walls, on their surroundings, in the dark hours of night.

Not knowing how to face him in the morning, she stayed in the room with the pretext of keeping Ayan.

- She might be feeling sad to revive her past. -

*** He might be hating me for telling lies and lies. ***

- Need to talk to her! -

*** Hope he leaves me to work here! ***

And they continued their thinking process until moon shines bright in the sky.

"Where is Ayan?" he questioned as he took a seat around the dining table.
"He slept earlier chief!" Bittu responded.
"Where is Madhu?" unbuttoning shirt's hands and rolling it up.
"Madhu?" the servant saw his chief as if he is speaking a foreign language.
"Anjali!" he said calmly.
"Oh!" and he turned side way to catch her disappear inside the kitchen completely "Inside kitchen!"

Rishab lifted his eyes to search for the entrance of the kitchen as that is the spot where she stays when he has his breakfast, lunch or dinner.

- Is she avoiding me? Why? -

*** Why is he asking for me? ***

- If she is hesitant, how will I ask what I have planned to ask? -

*** Mom and Dad! Please help me! ***

With baby steps, she came out of her hide out, with her eyes focusing on her steps as Rishab called for her.

"Take a seat!" he proposed making her look up at him as if he asked something impossible "Sit!" he repeated seeing her questioning gaze.
Hesitantly, pulling the chair on her side, she took her seat on the chair he has pointed out i.e. the one opposite to him.
"Bittu ! Bring a plate for her too!" and it made both the human beings around him look at him as if he is speaking alien but his man however went to fetch a plate for the lady he still treats as his sister.

*** Why this special treatment? Is he feeling pity, so doing all this? ***

- What is different that they are behaving like this? -

"Should I address you as Ajali or Madhu?" he asked at the right moment she was going to take a spoon of her food.
She immediately turned her face to see her brother like person watching her like she is a stranger to him and replied "Madhu!" in her meekly voice making Bittu get the queue that she will explain everything to him later. So left the place without any sound.
Turning to face him, she looked like a kid lost in a crowd.

- She is looking like a kid herself! -

"What do you think about marriage?"
She looked questioningly at him for this question as she expected something else "Huh?"
"You heard me the first time I think!" he noted.
"Hmm!" she nodded.
"Let me reformulate it!" gaining her full attention "What do you think about marrying me?" making her choke to death with this unexpected question of his.

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Next part: Part 8B

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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