Chap 14 on Pg 136 Entrapment : An Extremely Dark Advni FF

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Posted: 8 years ago

#721

does Shilpa have any part in the story?

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ChitraGS

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Posted: 8 years ago

#722

Originally posted by: 2filmy
Chitra there's no way he can make her sign a contract right ?

U never know pri, wait and see 😉

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Posted: 8 years ago

#723

Originally posted by: mahin123
does Shilpa have any part in the story?

No my lovely, this story Shilpa doesnt have a lot, but predator she does... so I am just focussing on Murshi in Predator TBH, here she is there but not much role , atleast nothing as of now, 😃

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Posted: 8 years ago

#724

Originally posted by: 2filmy
wish we can see some scenes between Niru Advay. they met only on the first day. I also want to know what happened to Yash. why is his condition like this.

Yes Priya ... Niru Advay also have a few good scenes, but there is a little time for that, Yash condition all that will come out when the truth comes out, so dont worry ...u will know eventually when it will play our 😃

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Posted: 8 years ago

#725

Link to the story on wattpad

https://my.w.tt/UiNb/1KtN48SKLI

Edited by ChitraGS - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago

#726

Link to the story on wattpad

https://my.w.tt/UiNb/1KtN48SKLI

Edited by ChitraGS - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago

#727

Link to the story on wattpad

https://my.w.tt/UiNb/1KtN48SKLI

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Hello my beauties , Hope you are all doing great ,

Okay these chapters...i don't even know where some of the parts of these chapters came from, but i am happy with the way the chapter has turned out, given how senseless it sounded when i wrote it yesterday. But today there was a spurt of new ideas and here i am with this chapter... It is a filler in a way ...but a few good things do come out of it..

Okay i need take a moment here to Thank RUMKI PAL @ ARSHIKA ARSHI !!!

As they say one's persons creativity inspires another persons's creative impulse...well Rims this is what happened to me, after i watched ur VM on Saat Paaki Bandha ...can you guess what part u have inspired...!!!

No !! YES!!!

Well let me tell everyone...the entire Yash Narayan convo ...is inspired by the first scene of Rimi's VM, where he puts Chandini's hand in Advay's hand and in the original sequence on the show they had , Yada Yada playing in the BG...so thanks Rims...and here's dedicating all of Chapter 14 on Wattpad...to YOU !!!! So keep making more VM's and keep inspiring us 😃

The link to Rims..VM are here on her index for those of you who want to watch it😳...they are incredible, do watch it guys 😳

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon-3/4910851/rimis-vm-index-new-vm-barsaat-mein-24-02-18

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Posted: 8 years ago

#728

WHOAAA!!! Another update on way!!!

BTW one of my friend asked me to share this story to her when completed...because she hates waiting! 😆

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neverlandspirit

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Posted: 8 years ago

#729

Amazing chapter! You mentioned that this was a somewhat filler chapter but a lot of significant things happened here! And they all were beautiful❤️

I desperately wanted to discuss Advay's Aghori side but I am sorry I don't know a lot on the subject. But you have done a marvelous job explaining the gist of the Aghori community. Did his actions in the Shamshaan repulse me? No they didn't. They intrigued me!

Because, a lot of us think of death as the ultimate truth of life but certainly not to the point that it becomes the only truth of life. For Advay to worship death with such devotion was such a heart-wrenching depiction of his trauma. You do complete justice to whatever your write and I understand how difficult it must have been to take a decision to write Advay as that.

But I am so proud of you!❤️ (Is the topic of Aghoris sort of Taboo in the Indian community?)

Yash Narayan actually being the only one to pin-point Advay's true identity was such a smart and surprising move! I LOVED THAT TWIST! Because 'Your secret is safe with a mad man like me'. !!!

I can never predict the story line with you, you know! You always keep me on my toes (and that's a feat!).

What I also took away from this conversation was that Yash did infact know the mantra to the treasure door but he chose to stay mum! Why? What is the drift between him and Indrani? (I'll be eagerly waiting for you to unfold your cards to this!)

Of course the whole 'Meri beti ab tumhari zimmedari' was so effing cute

There is just something absolutely pure and lovely about a father giving away his daughters to their husbands! Especially the way you wrote the scene. ❤️

DON'T GET ME STARTED ON SHIKHA AND ADVAY'S RELATIONS!!! BEcause I swaer I dont shut up about it!!!!!!!

IT WAS SOOO CUTE! (Where can I find a big brother like him?)

The whole scene of him feeding her and her acting like his princess was melting my heart! NO, dont bring such cuteness in I CAN'T HANDLE IT!! (Actually bring it on, I want more!) I am going to keep it short... I LOVED IT x1000!

Shikha truly is Advay's and Chandini's almost daughter! SO CUTE!

The premonition was the best touch. I felt so because I am a firm believer that premonitions are only seen by people with pure hearts. For Advay to see a premonition of Chandini possibly being in danger was a nice complex touch! Because as you said, She's in danger with whom? Could it possibly be Advay himself? That really got me thinking! 👏

All in all, a wonderful update!

Love,

Mehvish!

PS: Rumki's VM's are amazing!!❤️

PPS: Also the trailer Neelum made looked bomb!

Us, readers, dedication to you and this FF is a true indication of just how marvelous you and your stories are!👏

Edited by neverlandspirit - 8 years ago

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ChitraGS

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Posted: 8 years ago

#730

Originally posted by: Arshika_arshi
WHOAAA!!! Another update on way!!!
BTW one of my friend asked me to share this story to her when completed...because she hates waiting! 😆

HAHA It might take while tell her, as we are not even 20 percent into the story 😆😆 hmm maybe 25% into the story i wud say