#6 MR. TASHANBAAZ Khanna: AvNeil Different Shades of ACP Series.! - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: neeraja91

Love it!!! Beautiful I'm loving the fact that avni has a job and is career oriented. Wish that happens on the show.


I cant tell u how much i crave to see Avni career oriented in show but since she remains busy with her hubby's missions so i took the chance to write that Avni in my story.!
I am glad u liked it.!
Thank u so much.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: -Charu-

I've been a silent reader to the stories here but your story forced me to comment! Amazing and one of the finest works I've ever read on India Forums! Amazing 👏 👏


I am sooo much happy after reading ur comment.!
Thank u so very much.!
If ur writing is compelling a person to comment means u won as a writer.!
Bold- That be the biggest compliment for me till date. Made my day.!

Thank u so much dear.!
Keep reading and appreciating.
Means a lot to me.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Shaiksafia

Just another brilliantly written OS loved it 😳
There is so much potential in AvNeil story hope cvs takes some hints from you to progress there story
Yourwriting is beautiful 👏


Thank u thank u than u so very much.!
I agree there is so much potential in their story but CV's always choose the negativity to portray.!
Bold- That would be the another biggest compliment for me for the day.! Means a lot to me.

Thank u so much for such lovely words.!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

I was lmao with Divya's reactions😆Poor girl ! She must have dreamt of trying out Neil😆Extra marital affair .🤣 Divya ke upar to jabardast Bomb fut gaya. 😆 Yeah all her dreams of having a hottiee ACP went into drains

I love this headstrong and no nonsense Avni . She is such a game . Only she can handle enraged Neil .
She has her ways to manofy her hubby, be it getting physical in work place. That too chup chup ke
Neil's note😳Iss bande ko kabi bui kahin bhi sirf romance soojta hai😆☺️The make out☺️I love such wildness and intensity .
It was heated moment so thodi wildness to banti hai. M glad u liked it and it disnt came out to be cringeworthy.
It was too hard for both to handle☺️👏

I guess one day u will really bring Pillu and make him listen to his/her parent's love story😆 pillu will surely get to know the censored version of his Parent's Antics 😆


Thank u so very much.
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Ur comments motivate me to write more.!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Srivanithummeti

Really ammazing continue this pls


Thank u so much dear.!
Yeah next shade story will be a continuation of this.!
Will try update it soon.!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: sweta2005

Awsomeee too good, please continue the story


Thank u so very much dear.!
Next story will be a continuation of it surely.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: avneil2

Loved it dear.Superb.yeh log kahi bi shuru hojate.😉Rahul and divya ki baathe omg they think avbi have extra marital affair.🤣ACP khanna ki khanomein yeh baath gaya toh kya hoga.superb iska sequel hai kya? Waiting for next.U r awesome.😎


Awww Thank u so much dearie.!
Neil ne to order deke sabko bhaga dia, romance karne ke lie 😆
Well looking at the scenario Rahul and Divya arent wrong in thinking whatever they are thinking. You will soon know ACP khanna ke kano me jab ye baat jaaegi to kya hoga.!
Yupp we have a continuation of this in Next story.!

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Posted: 8 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Veenapain

Amazing , lovely . Please continue soon. Crime reporter & Police deadly combo.


Awww. Thank u so much dear.!
Yeah and if the Crime reporter is this Sexy like Avni and Police is this Hottiee like ACP tab to sparks honge hi.! 😉
Will try update soon.!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Afsana103

It's yet another mind-blowing ff yaar please update soon Kahan se soch ti ho Aisa different shades of neil Khanna I'm seriously in love with each and every shades you have given

Update soon


Thank u so very much dear.
Bus awai ideas aajate hai.
Bold - Aww. That means a lot to me.!

Thanks again
Keep reading and appreciating
Will try update soon.!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: lenageorge

wow loved it dear...😳

tashanbaazi b/w Avneil
avneil romance woh bhi chup chupke☺️
update it soon


Thank u so very much buddy.!!
Voi to chup chp ke wale romance me kuch alag hi maza hota hai.
Will try update soon.!
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