Originally posted by: Tessaloni
Yay! You posted! Glad you did! 😃 but then again you cannot be a traitor by half 😆 go all in for sure! 😛
kidding aside, as always, loved your writing! And as I said before, I loved how you showed the POVs of both the major and minor characters. The heartbreak of AK, Tanshi's clearing of MUs by addressing OBVIOUs issues without going in circles, Netra's retribution, Rano's resignation to fate, AK placing the happiness of Nats and Tanuja above his own because in it lies his true happiness, and of course the interests of both girls handled with due sensitivity! I love that Nats was given a voice to shed light on what her little heart desires, and it essentially led the adults she loved to do the right thing by her, so bravo to the judge, and of course to you! 👏
beautifully penned; Honey-Bee 😃 especially TanShi's emotional reunion, I do love happy endings! 😆
didn't expect a comment, right? 😉 should I have copied and pasted instead?