Rikara FF: Paradise Regained (Index: Pg1, Ch 11: Pg 32)

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rithika2015

@rithika2015

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#71

not just gauri even im blown away with this story.

i just loved how nicely and subtly u have portrayed the feelings of gauri and the development in relation.

after such a big mu in their life they need some time and space of their own to become normal which is missing the show. im glad that many writers here in forum are fulfilling that space for us rikara fans..

update soon cant wait much longer..

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yayini

@yayini

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela
Waah..!! Both of them are trying hard to control their temptation of ahm ahm..!! Aage you know that..
Gauri is actually awestruck with the depth oof his words..this Omkara, so much in love with her is totally new to her...
The honest attempts that Omkara is making is going to melt our chiraiyya soon..who can resist a man like him..?? And most importantly the intensity of his love..
Her paintings in his studio gave her shock cum surprise...but the inspiration and the story behind those paintings actually made her overwhelmed somehow..even I was chilled reading his words...meri zindegi tum ho, meri bacche ki ma tum hi ho...
Gosh..!! Karthi di it was beautiful...waiting for the next chappy...continue soonish..

tasnim..😊

Yes.. he is now genuinely expressing his interest where she is holding back due to the hurtful state. But its against her nature to be not expressive, since it takes mammoth effort from her side.

She usually melts in arms, has way too much adulation for him than she thought.

Let's see what happens..😉

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sara1990

@sara1990

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#73

Superb, updates. Gauri is melting. Om is such a sweetheart. Looking forward for the next update

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#74

Awww i just loved this update yar

He is surprising her day by day ...

she is witnessing the side of Omkara which she is unknown...he always had feelings for her but failed to realize it

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GoWithTheRhythm

@GoWithTheRhythm

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#75

And another amazing Chapter
Loved how we get to see what both are feeling
om- in love and wanting to be close to his wife and Gauri- feeling happy and shocked about all the care and attention she is getting from her husband
Loved how he made her wear the Mangalsutra and the sindoor hopefully we will get that in the show once
Loved that he wanted to take her out and I liked that you were honest : Gauri was happy but not flattered because she is still hurt and has every right to be
And the end how he showed her the paintings
Please update soon 👏

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priya_86

@priya_86

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#76

Oh my dear Karthi...have i ever told you...how much I love you for your FFs??😳😃🤗...

They are literally my lifeline now...

As you know very well...Rikara officially ended for me last Friday...when Om got her back from Bareily...after that I havent watched a single episode...and not even read the updates...so for me Rikara will take off Lost and Found or Paradise Regained...😳

And as for this FF...you know very well even without my comments...that you are the BEST with regards to Rikara FFs 😊

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Palakh Aggarwal

@RudrakshPreesha

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#77

All 3 chaps were mind-blowing so wished show main bhi aisa hota but sigh kismat hi phooti h hum fans ki mila kya BKT 😭

But such a gr8 read it was i loved all 3 chapters read them all in 1 go do update soon dear , will be waiting for ur pm . 😃

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Spyngzzz

@Spyngzzz

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#78

Vowww...itz fantastic...loved it...❤️

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#79

Wow dear...

It's awesome and mind blowing update...

Just loved it...

Do continue soon

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yayini

@yayini

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: priya_86
Oh my dear Karthi...have i ever told you...how much I love you for your FFs??😳😃🤗...
They are literally my lifeline now...
As you know very well...Rikara officially ended for me last Friday...when Om got her back from Bareily...after that I havent watched a single episode...and not even read the updates...so for me Rikara will take off Lost and Found or Paradise Regained...😳
And as for this FF...you know very well even without my comments...that you are the BEST with regards to Rikara FFs 😊

Pri

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Here you are completing my FF. We don't need comments.. i hope to end our Rikara on a high note with FF..😊