SaIna SS : ab maan bhi jao na. Part 7 page 38 updated - Page 19

Created

Last reply

Replies

300

Views

37.3k

Users

34

Likes

582

Frequent Posters

Mirrah_Abish thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Part 3

Simply Fantastic
sorry for been so late


Thanks taahir
And its oky..
taahir004 thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely Teaser
looking forward to the chapter
Edited by taahir004 - 8 years ago
Mirrah_Abish thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Lovely Teaser
looking forward to the chapter


Well taahir chap 4 is already updated.
😊
taahir004 thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful Chapter

So Naina is now avoiding Sameer while he is all restless
and Nanu suggest that he should give her a rose
Mirrah_Abish thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Beautiful Chapter

So Naina is now avoiding Sameer while he is all restless
and Nanu suggest that he should give her a rose


Thanks taahir
For commenting seperately..
Mirrah_Abish thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago



Once again thanku guys sooo much to give love to this story of mine. I really can't thankyou guys enough..

So here i am again with another update of my first ever story "Ab Maan Bhi Jao Na"

Will this update is dedicated to TereLiyeMinu..
Well dear i hope you will enjoy reading it and hope its upto your expectations.

And if anyone want to make any special request of which update you guys need do pm me..

Ok enough of my banter
Look in the next post to read the update
N hey guys dont forget to hit like and comment cause your appreciations means alot and encourages me to write

Luv
Nida❤️
Edited by NIDA.ISHRAFAN - 8 years ago
Mirrah_Abish thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Recap:
Sameer smiled at him and hugged him and nanu hugged him back..
Saying : sab theek hojayega ab tu aram kr. (everything will be fine and now rest)

And with that sameer drifted into a deep slumber thinking ways to ask forgiveness..


Part 5

Next day
Sameer woke up early and got ready and reached school on his bike before everyone arrives and again writes a big sorry with a smile face on her desk and waits for her at the entrance of the school.

Munna and pandit saw sameer waiting and goes towards him

Pandit: sameer tu sab se pehle vo bhi school mai(sameer you are the first one in school)

Munna and pandit were laughing but little did they know that he is anxiously waitig for naina so he said

Sameer: tum donu chup kroge(will you guys shut up)

Seeing sameer angry they asked getting serious as they know sameer is serious means its important for him.

Pandit: sameer tu fikr mat kr hum bhi teri maddad krege naina ko manane mai(sameer you dont worry even we will also help you)

Sameer smiles and hugs them both when munna says

Munna: lekin sameer bet ka kia tu apne baal katwayega kia ( what about bet sameer will you cut your hair)

Pandit : han sameer naina ne sab sun liya hai ab tau teri shart kabhi puri nhi hogi(yes naina has heard all of it now how will you complete your bet)

They were talking when pralay and his gang interupts(guys i dont know the name of the boy with whom he has bet with so i have used pralay)

Pralay: ab tau maan jao tumhara sameer har gaya(now ypu guys should agree sameer is a looser)

Munna: pralay tu jaha yaha se (pralay go away from here)

Pandit: abhi din khatam nhi hue tab tk apna mun band rakh smjha(days are still left keep your mouth shut till then)

Munna and pandit were busy in arguing when sameer came forward and said poking his finger in his chest

Sameer: sameer kisi se harta nahi abhi 5 din haina chal phut yaha se(sameer never looses still 5 dats are left)

With that pralay leaves but still he was smirking before he could understand why he turned back to see naina looking towards him with full of tears..

Sameer looked down being guilty he walked towards her but naina didnt look towards him and started walking when he called her

Sameer: naina suno tau( listen to me)

Naina: mjhe kuch nhi sunna please mjhe jane do( i dont wanna listen just let me go)

But she was no where to listen and ran away sameer punched his fist in the air as he was feeling very helpless

With slow steps he walks towards his class and saw naina cleaning her desk. And tears were falling from her eyes as it was assembly time everyone was in the ground except naina sameer and munna and pandit
Sameer signalled them to go and went towards her naina looked at him she simply took her place and took out her books to read to ignore him

Sameer looked at naina and didnt know to start a conversation when all the students came inside

Sameer had to sit back on his seat he was frustrated as he couldnot say sorry

Teacher told everyone to take out their maths notebook and naina realized that her notebook is not with her and look towards preeti and she got to know that sameer has it as preeti told her about it..


Teacher who was checking everyone's notebook
Naina look towards sameer and he simply bend down to tie his shoelaces and when teacher was on on other side he simply passed her notebook back
With sorry and thankyou note

Naina took her notebook back and simply threw the note

Soon class was over naina and swati were sitting in the canteen swati was keep on ranting about madhuri dixit and naina who was least interested in all was just nodding her head

When swati said: naina tu is friday mandir jayegi(will you go to temple this friday)

Naina: han tu bhi tau ayegi na(yes you will also come na)

Swati: nahi mai nhi aski mai apni maasi k ghar ja rahe hun(no i am going at my aunt place)

Naina: oh acha..


Sameer who was listening all this from the next table finally smiled that he got a chance where he could meet naina alone and explain his situation..

At the evening at naina's house

Naina was watching tv with her family but her eyes were stuck on phone only as this the time sameer calls her daily but today he us not calling even she was getting irritated that sameer doesnt even care now.. poor preeti who asked for naina's help has to do her homework alone as naina's mood was spoile

Naina's VO: Us din mjhe itna gussa araha tha ik tau rox phone krta aur aj ik bhi call nhi.. but mjhe kia pta tha k sameer is time so gaya hoga mandir jane k liye jldi jo uthna tha😛
(I was very angry that day he calls everyday but today he didnt called once little did i know he was preparing to sleep to wake up early for temple)

At sameer's house
Sameer was setting 4 alarm clocks so that he doesnot get late as this is his only chance to meet naina alone as he was feeling very guilty he is naughty but still he cant break anyone's heart and naina helped him manytime even in his studies even.

After setting his alarm he went to sleep although he sleep at 11 but today he is sleeping at 9 just flr naina
This thought shakes his head that why he desperately wants her to forgive him but couldnt get any and concluded that he is guilty that he broke her heart.

Next morning
As it was friday sameer woke at 5 his nanu was shocked that sameer never wakes up before 7 he woke up at 5

Nanaji: sameer tu itni subah(sameer you are awake this early)

Sameer: vo nanu mai ne socha hai aj se jogging kro bus is liye(well i have decides to jog thats why)

Nanaji: acha tau tu pant shirt mai jogging pe jayega(ok you will go in pant shirt)

Sameer: oh mai tau bhool gaya(oops i forgot)

With that sameer rushed to his room and was thinking how to go out when nanaji went to his room and sameer grab the opportunity and sneak out of the house and drove towards the temple

Sameer saw everyone was going inside the temple and soon he saw naina coming he called her but she ignored him he was following her when one man stopped

Man: aise jaoge mandir mai(you will go like this inside)

Sameer irritatedly:tau kese jaoga(then how)

Man: joote tau utar lo(take off your shoes)

Sameer took off his shoes and went inside to see naina is standing infront of lord krishna folding his hands he didnt know how to call her so he started ringing the bell again again

Same man said: bhai ik hi baar bjate hai

Soon pandit jee showed with an aarti thaal in his hand but sameer was confused what to do and look towards naina she showed him with hand signal and he did the same

After that she went towards the cow to feed when sameer followed her and was calling but suddenly someone else also he turned back to see tayji calling her that if is free than she should go back home to which she nodded and turned to see as tayji didnt said anything about sameer.

She turned to see sameer standing up and his cheeks was red at his cheeks was being slapped by cows tail..

Naina smiled but didnt said anything he look at her smiling and said

Sameer: shukar hai tum muskurai dekho naina meri galti hai maine ye bet lagaye par im sorry
(Finally you smiled look naina i m sorry that i put a bet on you)

Naina: tum mandir kyun aye(why did you come to temple)

Sameer: tumhare liye pta hai aj se pehle mai kabhi itni jldi nhi utha(just for you and you know today is the first time i wake up so early)

Naina smiled when sameer said

Sameer: he told how pralay provoked him and he kept that bet and asked that he is very guilty for what he has done

Naina: its ok

Sameer : friends is baar sache wale with a big smile(friend this time a geniune one)

Naina: friends and they both shakes their hands

And naina started walking on the other direction and sameer took his bike and went away..
Finally relieved that naina forgave him..

Hope you all will like it..

Edited by NIDA.ISHRAFAN - 8 years ago
Mirrah_Abish thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
Part 5 updated
Have a look and do hit like and comment..
TereLiyeMINU thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 8 years ago
Dedicated to me 😲 Thank you sooo much.🤗 ❤️
Hey bhagwan! these guys are so pestering.😡 As if they will get world cup if Sameer loses the bet.In humans.
Sameer is equally stupid to challenge them.Arey bhai,challenge karna tha to khud kisi chiz mein uljhate bechari Naina ko kyun ghasita? Pagal dusro ko bolta hai aur khud kitna bada pagal hai sahab ko pata nahin hai.
Ab serious hone se kya fayda? Jo hona tha ho gaya hai.Damage has already been done.
Who is happy now? Neither Sameer nor Naina.Is sabse kya fayda hua.Dumb guys.😕
Loved the mandir twist.Naina ko thoda aur tadpane chahiye tha Sameer ko.😆 Itni jaldi maaf karli.I think Naina ka voice over deti during forgiving scene to aur acha lata.😊
Waiting for next update.
Story is going strong.👏
Thank you for the update.Sameer ko aur thoda tadpayo.Keep writing.👍🏼
Edited by TereLiyeMINU - 8 years ago
Mirrah_Abish thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Now unres soon
But pehle update tau krlo..😛

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".