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_nakshi_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#221

I like it 50...50...

Shivu masti overall through out the part was solsooo cute..

Dj ND vish were melting towards him...

Shivu enjoying with his mom dad ND making fun hahah...

Den dj ke sang holi..

Phir naksh holi no words to explain at all...

Jaise dey were about to come close things grew worse..

This rr ND his nautanki..

Bechari ak no one is believing her..

Waiting for the big twist

ND Wat will happen between naksh

I didn't like in the last a bit

Bechari ka dil alwaye its breaking

But hope like she got gayu love now all relations get strongee

ND she know the true value of family ND bonding

Do update soon

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: _nakshi_
I like it 50...50...
Shivu masti overall through out the part was solsooo cute..
Dj ND vish were melting towards him...
Shivu enjoying with his mom dad ND making fun hahah...
Den dj ke sang holi..
Phir naksh holi no words to explain at all...
Jaise dey were about to come close things grew worse..
This rr ND his nautanki..
Bechari ak no one is believing her..
Waiting for the big twist
ND Wat will happen between naksh
I didn't like in the last a bit
Bechari ka dil alwaye its breaking
But hope like she got gayu love now all relations get strongee
ND she know the true value of family ND bonding
Do update soon

actually i really liked ur view soo much.. ur every bit is true.. i loveeeddd it.. thanku thanku so much dear for reading this ff nd ur lovly comments loved it totally..

awww shivu is key maker between all.. hamari pyari si baby ho toh hame uspe pyar aayega for sure thats i waana show.. aur jo family scene hain woh bhi. romance bhi..

i can understand no one will like this last part of ff yeh twist aur baki u will read in next part bas aacha lage jo bhi ho.. i will give my 100%..

i will do update soon next part

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Posted: 8 years ago

#223

pyar hamko bhi hain pyar tumko bhi hain toh yeh kya silsile ho gyeee bewafa hum nhi bewafa tum nhi toh yeh kaise gile ho gye chalte chalteee

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Posted: 8 years ago

#224

part-24

ak was crying nd broke.. shivu hug to her..

ak-mera bacha i m feeling really bad baby.. yaha bhut gutan ho rahi. koi mera sath bhi nahi deta..

sh-main hu na amma.. aap ro mat mujhe bhi rona aa jata hain bhut..

ak-main kya karu shivu... she was crying alottt... shivu was caressing her hair..

ak-aap mere sath hamesha rahoge na..

sh-haa amma.. dost bhut gande hain unhone apko data main unko bhut datuga.. sshhh aap chup ho jao.. aao.. he took to ak on bed nd put her head on his lap.. ak was getting peace..

gy3 nd bm came nd sees to ak.. ak was getting sleep.. shivu was caressing her hair... dey passed smile nd went..

after some time.. in middle of nyt aks sleep broke..

she realized that door is open nd shivu got sleep..

ak-mujhe nind aa gai.. sar kitna gum raha tha mera.. mujhe yaha se jana tha.. she sees that nk was not here..

isne na mujhe tang karne ka koi moka nhi chodni... she put shivus head on pillow cover to him also..

she went outside.. sees from upstairs in hull everyone were worried so much.. gy3 rashmi bm were crying..

she runned in hull.. everyone sees to her..

ak-kya hua..

gy-bahu.. hug to ak.. munna abhi tak ghar nhi aaya.. police gai hain usse kojne.. ak was numb.. vis sees to her..

ak-kya.. a tears rolled in her eyes.. par woh gye kaha mujhe nind aa gai..

gy-tum dono ke bicha kuch hua kya.. dj rr was busy in phone...

ak-essa kuch woh nk ko maine bola i waa.. ttim

bm-roj toh aa jata tha pata bhi nhi kaha hain simla bhi nhi gya.. pata kar liya.. phone bhi band aa raha uska.. mera toh dimag kam hi nhi kar raha.. rat ke 3 baj gye hain..

ak-par woh gye kaha.. maa... hug to her.. thinking kahi meri bat usse buri toh.. maine toh gusse main esse hi bol diya ki leave me. mera irada usse hurt karne ka nhi tha.. ek tih mujhe chot deta hain phir yeh tension.

dj-na jane ke hogya hain bas nak pe dam karna hain is ladne ne.. aaj tak koi khushi na di yeh hi bacha tha.. police keh rahi na pata hain.

gy-main kaise rahugi munna ke bina.. kojiye na.. sat on sofa... pata nhi ghar ko kiski najar lag gai hain munna..

dj sees to ak with angry face..

dj-khushi toh thi hi na par esse log ke kadam pade..

main aau hu.. chal rr uske dost ke yaha.. dey went..

gy-bichare ne kuch khaya bhi nhi piya bhi nhi.. ak went in stairs nd starts crying...

ak-main kya itni buri hu.. nk tumne mujhe pyar kiya par turst nhi kiya.. mujhe akle bhi nhi rehne dete aur paresan bhi karte ho.. mera nhi toh kam se kam apni maa ka toh soch lete.. i really hate u nk..

after two hours.. dj nd rr came.. ak sees to both with a hope..

dj-pata nhi kaha gya jee..

rr-sare dost se pucha maa par kisi ke sath uski bat tak nhi hui...

bm-kaha hain yeh... ak starts sweating now.. y he is not coming... after some hours.. rashmi took tea..

gy-mera man karega kya pine ko.. mera beta nhi aaya.. main kya karu haye ram... than rr got a call..

rr-kya accident... par.. cut d phone.. maa bauji.. police ko ek case mila bridge main ek car giri hain.. ak starts shivering so much.. she was crying..

ak-accident..

dj-ke.. woh munna ki nnn..

gy-haa.. nhi.. mera munna ki nhi hogi..

rr-par unhone car ko dekhne ke liye bulaya hain.. ki woh car.. nk ki... everyone were numb.. held dj hand.. bauji mujhe jana to padega hi hmm..

ak-nk tum mujhe dard do chalega par maa ko hawww... rr was going on door he sees to nk nd was shocked..

rr-nkkk.. everyone sees to him nd took a deep breath..

kaha the mere bhai i m soo happy.. hug to him.. bauji.. gy3 got happy nd dj was getting anger..

he was coming near of nk but ak running near of nk nd gave a tight slap to him.. held his coller..

everyone watched to her..

ak-kya samjhate ho haa khud ko.. crying meri jan nikal di.. are tum mujhe pyar karo na karo meri value ho na ho trust ho na ho.. pyar ki mujhe aadat bhi nhi hai par maa unka kya.. mujhe nhi maa ko jo pain diya uska kya haa.. tum kya sochte ho jab man kiya chale gye jab man kiya aa gye.. meri jindagi majak hain..

sirf tumhare iss ego ke karan maine itne sal bhukta maine duniya se najar nhi milai. tum mujhe chod kyo nhi dete mera dard tum hi ho.. jab i need u tum hote hi nhi abhi sabne mujhe hi socha hoga ki main galt hu..

nk tumne mujhe sabse jayada pain diya hain i really hate u hate u..

nk was watching to her.. everyone were silent..

nk-ak plz side do mujhe.. ak went aside..

than nk went near of rr... he was seeing to him from anger..

rr-kya hua nk.

nk gave a tight slap to him.. rr was shocked dj nd all were alsooo..

rr-nk tumhari itni himat..

dj-ek toh sabne paresan karna upar se rr pe itna gussa.. nk yeh ke hain... from anger.. itna toh yad rakhta yeh tera bada bhai hain..

nk-bada my foot...

isne jo harkat ki hain na woh bhut choti hain.. isse badi saza milegi isse..

bindiya got anger..

bi-ek toh apne sari rat inko paresan kiya.. apka kya hak hain inko chune ka bhi.

nk-hak haa.. pucho mat mujhse kya hain..

mujhe is gande insan ki sakal bhi nhi dekhni

dj-bas nk bas.. kitna kuch keh liya chup reh bhagwan ke liye chup reh mujhe aur gussa na dila..

nk-gussa.. sari jindagi apne gussa hi toh kiya hain.. mere upar ophir ak ke upar phir mere bete ke upar..

rr-nk aage mat bado kiya kya h maine essa..

nk-kiya ya kya nhi kiya yeh bolo.. i hate u rr..

bhaiya nhi tum nhi mere.. tumne dj ke bauji ki company ke 70%share khud ke nam kar liye na.. he was numb dj too..

dj-ke.. mere bauji ki woh toh..

nk-haa bauji usse apne isse samalne ko di thi isse pata tha ki aap itna trust karte hai ispe ki aankh utha ke puchege bhi nhi.. par chii apke is bete ne usko apne nam pe kar liya.. kuch nhi diya apko.. kuch bhi nhi..

dj sat on sofa in shocked..

rr-nhi bauji nhi..

nk-nhi paper hain mere pass.. ak was ryt so ryt tumne kaise kiya yeh haa.. aur toh aur jo ak ne boli na woh ladki woh sach main iski biwi hain.. bindiya sat on floor..

everyone were soo much shocked..

dj-ke.. had tears..

nk-ab kya fayda... kya..

rr eyes were down..

nk-isse saram hi nhi aai.. bindiya bhabhi se aapke samne aacha banne ke liye shadi ki.. tum kya soche ki ak jo bolegi aur chup jayegi... par nhi bhale us time woh door band tha par main waha gya sach pata lagane... agal bagal walo se pucha toh unhone bataya us ladki ke bare main... tab pata chala ki usse tumhara kuch rista toh jarur hain.. phir house honor se mila main tab pata chala ki woh kaha rehti hain tumne usse kisi aur ghar main shift kar diya.. main usse mila tab usne mujhe bataya ki tum uski clg ki frd ho.. bindiya tumhe pasand nhi toh tum usse shadi kar li..

milte ho.. throwed photos nd paper of marriage...

yeh rahi tumahari gandi harkat ki photo.. bindiya sees to nd broke completely..

rr-bauji yeh sab nk iski biwi ki tarah jhoot bol raha.. sach sach.. maa sach binidiya.. koi toh suno.. bauji yeh nk cheap.. he slapped to him..

dj-bas bas..

nk-waah.. kya andaj hain na.. ak sees to nk..

ab boliye kisi ke pass words hain ak ko kuch galt bolne ko.. tell.. kuch bhi boliye kuch bhi... sach kehte hain log ki sachai main bhut taqat hoti hain.. went near of ak.. ak i m sry kal kuch nhi kaha kyoki mujhe pata tha rr ke kilaf kuch bhi boluga bina proof ke na toh koi nhi manega.. she had tears.. maine toh ussi waqt tumpe trust kar liya tha jab tumne sach kaha tha par sayad god chahte hi nhi ki main kuch karu tumhare liye.. room main yahi kehna tha mujhe ki tum jo kaha woh sachi hoga but main yeh sab proof ke sath kahuga thaki tumhara sar ucha kar saku.. ak main khud ko bhool sakta hu tumhe kaise bhulugammyeh sase tumhari hain meri jindagi tumhari hain ek bar kuch bhi muh se nikal jaye toh manuga nhi kaise soch liya.. sayad woh trust hamare riste main khabhi tha hi nahi par dont worry...

bauji went near of dj.. aap khabhi apko bhi nhi dikha saka ki kitna man karta hu apka aur aap kya hain mere. gave some paper.. meri property bauji maine toh holi se pehle sign ki thi.. jiske 50%share apke aur 50%share maa ke hain.. thaki apko khabhi bhi paise ki jarurat ho toh aap le sake.. dj fullfilled with emotions..

bm gy3 also.. vis too..

par haa aap na ak ko samaj paye bauji us waqt ak ne mujhe realize karwaya ki pyar show kaise karte hai.. usne mujhe meri maa ke karib kiya aap bataiye agar humse galti hui aur meri bache ko ak ko meri jarurat thi kisi aur ladki se shadi karke kya main sachi karta nhi na.. mante h na itni pyari bahu ko kya kya nhi kaha bechari ko ek pita ka bhi pyar nhi mila kyo uncle. went near of vis..

baap hain na ek nhi do nhi pure 21 sal pala ak ko aaj paraya kar diya.. everyone were shocked dj too.. ak was crying badly.

bechari ko sage papa tak se pyar nhi mila.. kya diya maine usse ek khushi bhi nhi.. sach i m not at all gud husband are pati galt ho sath na de.. pita ko toh dena chahiye woh kyo bhagi yeh chodiye par ek bar apko ehsas bhi nhi hua woh jina bhi h ya nhi ek nhi do jan thi na.. pita ka kya farz nibhaya apke haa uski maa se dur rakha... jab woh sad thi tab bhi dur rakha bechari ke aansu sukh gye..

are ek janwar ko bhi apne bachi se moh hota hain..

ak i dont give u any love.. maine tumhe koi trust pyar kuch bhi toh nhi diya kuch bhi nhi..

nk held her hand..

ak-nkk..

nk-bas ak.. i m really sry tumse shadi karne ke liye.. ak sees to nk from shocked..

ak-woo..

nk-mqine kuch nhi kiya kal bhi thoda tumhe aaj bhi.. par nhi tum apne bache ke sath khush ho.. mai tumhe khush rakh hi nhi sakta hu... bas haan.. i know ab kya karna hain.. rishta na is ghar se na tumse nibha paya main.. yeh paper hai.. gave toh her..

ak-read it.. numb.. divorce..

nk-smile with crying.. haa yes.. i signed it.. sayad mujhse dur rehke u will be vry happy. khas keh pata tumse duniya main sabse jayada pyar karta hu.. par tumhe kisi ka pyar nhi de paya. papa ka bhi nhi.. i m really sry..

ak-nk.

nk-bas ak.. bhut himat jhutai hain. bhut u can go.. main tumhe koi kami nhi hone dena chahta hu.. kal i showed sab tumhare piche kaise pade the..

par tumhare liye tumhe chod sakta hu.. ak. nhi khas keh pata ki i loo..

laugh.. nhi main hi tumhare layak nhi hu.. khush rehna jaha bhi rahogi..

touched his cheeks... apne dil se chua mujhe. dard ka ehsas nhi par haa khushi rahegi ki hamesha ki gussa hi sachi par kuch hak dikhaya mere upar..

gy-munna... touched to nk..

ak was watching to nk from lotss of love..

nk-maa aap sabse kehna ki ak se nafrat na kare bas jab woh jaye na ek bar bauji usse dil se aasirwad de aur uncle usse beti bulaye..

gy-munna tu yeh sab..

nk-tension mat lijiye i m fine.. mujhe nhi hoga kuch i m fine.. hmm... he went..

in room...

ak sat on her knees nd starts crying loudly.. she touched her sindur... paper was wet due to her tears..

gy3 was about to go near of ak but vis sat in his kness..

vis-beta sab thik ho jayega.. he was crying. ak hug to him..

ak-abba.. abba nkkk... she has mixed emotions crying happiness.. both..

nk watching to shivu..

he kissed to him.. i love u i really love my betu.. khas papa sath football kelte apke sath fight karte apko apki girlfriend patate laugh nd cry.. but koi bat nhi..

he went to take bath... he came out nd got ready...

ak came der nd sees to nk..

ak had tears.. nk was searching henky..

ak gave to him..

nk-meri aadat mat bigado jaogi toh bhut yad aayegi..

ak-nhi dungi tih bhi aayegi na..

nk-kya fark padta hain yad aaye ya nhi.

leave.

ak-nk.. plz meri bat..

nk-ak plz mujhe essa mat kaho jo sun na saku plz. leave outside..

more part coming soon

Edited by nakshkidiwani - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago

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ak took bath nd went in hull.. nk was sadly sat in table alone.. gy3 gave breakfast to nk.. ak took it nd served to nk.. he was eating without seeing anything..

ak served sweet to nk... nk sees her hand nd sees to ak... she passed smile..

nk-maa aap kyo nhi.. mer habit kyo bigad rahe aap.. he outside...

ak-amma.. hug to gy3. yeh kuch sunne ko hi ready nhi.. aaj inki pyar ko dekh sakti hu mehsus kar rahi hu... nk was outside thinking about this incident...

now ak watched to him but he went in car... leave...

after somtimes ak was trying nks cell... he didnt attend..

ak-kaha hain. ohoo... he took it.. hloo.. aawaj nhi aa rahi hloo... disco... cut d phone yeh toh disco main hain kya..

than nk was in bar area.. he took a small drink.. not much.. sees a couple..

nk-girlfrd ya wife..

boy-my life... my gf..

nk-nice but gf hi rakhna best frd only wife bqna liya na toh roj jhagda.. tum iska pyar samjhati ho..

gi-i love him more than my life..

nk-esse hi trust rakhna rishta bajbut rahega.. yoo party..

bo-r u fine sir..

nk-yup i m soo happy jisse pyar karta hu khushi di usse i m soo happy na..

now dey leave.. nk take a galss of drink but someone held his hand.. he sees to her..

nk-hey lene do na mujhe.. but she took it..

hlooo miss nkk g... she was in red gown opened hair lill makeup with red lipstick..

nk-maine apko kahi dekha hain..

yes sayad maine bhi..

nk-ak..

ak-are aap pehchan gye mujhe.. she was ak.. hiii... sayad hum frd hain the..

nk-laugh the.. disco main mile the lade bhi the..

ak-lets starts again.. yeh drink.. broke to glass.. nk got anger..

nk-y u broke haa yeh dil jaisa h tut ke bikhar gya uski aawaj nhi aai..

ak-iski aai.. par drink karna harmful hain kyo..

nk-so wat hain toh..

ak-nhi karne dungi karege toh dono karege.

nk-plz yeh sab drama mujhse nhi hoga.. went away... suddenly all powwr went.. one spotlight went on aks face.. she took nks guitar nd start singing..

chura liya hain tumko dil ko najar nhi churana sanam.. (went near nd surrounding) badal ke meri tum jindgani kahi bagal na jana sanam..

le liya dil.. (put nks hand on her chest)

le liya dil haa haye mera dil haye dil lekar mujhko na behlana chura liya(dey sees in their eyes).. nk was going away but ak held to him..

bahar banke aau khabhi tumhari duniya main gujar n jaye yeh din kahi tamana main tum mere ho haa tum mere ho aaj tum itna wada karte jana chura liya..

she had tears in her eyes.. chura liya h tumne jo dil ko najar nhi chura sanam hmm hmm hmm..

stooped nd start lill crying..

i love nk. nk heard it nd got soo much happiness.. main mar jaugi tumhare bina. g nhi paugi main.. i really love u.. i love u.. apna lo mujhe ppz apna lo na chote se dil main choti si jagah lungi.. puri bat manugi.. alg nhi hona ka bolugi i really love u i really love..

nk-ak.. stupid hug me.. she hug to nk.. i love u too.. ak main bhi nhi g sakta tumhare bina i love u.. dey hug to each like their is no tomorrow.. dey make a cute couple.. everyone clapping..

time is stooped now.. dey were one from heart. it is a most wanted scene..

after sometime.. dey realize everyone were watching to both..

ak-chale.. dey went in corner bar area... ak was stood nk hug to her from back... he grabbed to her tighter so much..

his hand wer on her nack.. he kissed on her cheeks ak felt it..

nk-kaise aai mere liye yaha..

ak-bauji ne bheja kaha apne nk ko mana lo.. mere bete ko ghar le aao.. main aa gai.. pehle wali best frd banke..

nk-aacha g his lips were touching to aks cheeks.. soo... main gussa rehta phir..

ak-mujhe kitna pap lagta pata hain tumne mere man ko dil ko jit liya.. us time sayad mera ego aa gya tha jo tumhe samaj nhi pai.. ab samaj gai hu ki tum mere liye puri duniya se lad sakte ho.

nk-soo i m luncky essi wife ke liye..

ak-no me.. i m lucky..

nk-main hu na..

ak-main..

nk-ak apart from her.. see bat jo bhi ho par tum best ho oki mere andar brain thoda kam hain..

ak-are kam hain par essa toh nhi ki hain hi nhi.. hain thabhi toh pyar kiya na.. laugh..

nk-gandi i expected tum meri tarif karogi..

ak-kari toh that u r best..

nk-aacha now hamara bacha bhi hain oki..

ak-soo sachi batana roj meri lipstick ko dekhte the na..

nk-wat u noticed.. how..

ak-esse hi. pata chal jata hain... touched nks head with her head..

nk-aacha..

ak-thanku mere abba se milane ke liye..

nk-coming close aur kuch.

ak-nhii toh.. nk was coming near of ak.. touched her lipstick with his lipe but she going away..

nk-wat happened.. tum mere pass aai main toh nhi aaya kuch galt kiya kya.

ak-blush nhi par yaha sab kula kula..

nk-toh ghar jake du.. car kaisi rahegi..

ak-dattt..

nk-sach main tumhe yaha amm 10 kisses de sakta hu.. ghar jake rashte main time waste hoga..

ak-golgappe... laugh.. esse hi hain tumhari cheeks chalo... in car nk sat in driving seat ak was besides..

nk-oo god i want energy... give me..

ak-nkk..

nk-plz..

ak-ufff... she kissed to him on cheeks..

nk-how boring it is.. ak was coming near of nk than one men shout.. ak went apart..

men-majnu car nikal lambi line hain..

nk-kya timing hain uff.. he starts car.. nk grabbed aks hand..

ak yeh sach hain na ki main tumhara hu aur tum meri.. mujhe yakin nhi ho raha..

ak-mujhe bhi nk.. jab tum mere liye mujhe chod sakte ho jisse sabse jayada pyar karte ho toh kya main tumhare liye hamare pyar ke liye tumhe apna nhi sakti kehte h na ek pal hi khafi hain pyar jagane ke liye wahi pal tumne mujhe diya..

nk-ghar aa gya... dey went outside..

in house everyone was waiting for naksh..

dj nd vis hug to nk.

nk-bauji uncle..

dj-munna sari jindagi tere se naraj raha par jab gurur tuta aandha visvas tuta toh yakin hua ki tu kitna aacha hain..

vis-haa beta tumhne hame yakin dilaya ki beti aur damad kya hain.. hum sabne tumhe dil se apnaya hain ak ko bhi.. i m soo happy chah ke bhi essa ladka nhi koj pata uske liye.. hug to naksh.. i love u..

nk-i m soo happy..

dj-hum bhi beta bhut bhut khush is ghar ko aankgan ko yaha ka kilona mila.. tree mila.. mera bacha shivu ke rup main tera bachapan lot aaya hain.. took to shivu..

sh-yaiee sab happy hapoy hain aur main bhi.. nk took to shivu..

nk-main bhi happy happy hu..

gy-aao beta mitha banaye itne din bad yaha ki khushi aai hain... with sadness..

dj-ab koi bhi kisi ke karan dukhi na howega woh is ghar main na hain ab khush rahege sab..

nk-bauji.. woh.. ak held nks hand nd said noo..

dj-ke..

nk-i love u hug to him... now ak nd gy3 were making kheer...

ak-maa kaju kaha hain..

gy-ruk main deti hu.. ak was making kheer than she took bowl.. someone held her hand.. amma..

nk hug to her.. ak sees to him..

ak-tum.. nk hug to her from back..

nk-i know sweet kqisa hota hain.. batau.. kisses on her nqck..

ak-nkk.. aahhh..

nk-ek kiss bas plz.. came close of ak.. he was about to kiss than dj shout..

munna.. aahh haa.. ak laugh..

ak-uii.

nk-aata hu bauji..

ak-dekha rat ka bhi wait nhi ho raha na..

nk-huh badle lunga chun chun ke oki..

ak-uuu goo. nk laugh to sees her toungue..

pyar haa..

nk-kissed to her lipe nd leave ak was shocked..

qk-oo god...

nk-muahhh pyar yad rakhna...

batuga aaiye toh sachi room main..

end..

precap-ak wore short nighty nk was just numb sees her hotness... dey returned simla also

Edited by nakshkidiwani - 8 years ago

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_nakshi_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#226

THe best part of this part is ak got her huby papa and a loving family...

Its a highly emotional packed part...

though some r not proper but over all a fantastic parttt...

The way nk unfold the truth wa simple awesome...

Ak proposing nk was

their hug kiss..

finally vish became a good father...

he accepted ak

which is very good...

Now actually the real story begins...

Abhi tho relations jhode inhe majbut hona baaki hain

waiting how u make dem intersting...

Do update soon...

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: _nakshi_
THe best part of this part is ak got her huby papa and a loving family...
Its a highly emotional packed part...
though some r not proper but over all a fantastic parttt...
The way nk unfold the truth wa simple awesome...
Ak proposing nk was
their hug kiss..
finally vish became a good father...
he accepted ak
which is very good...
Now actually the real story begins...
Abhi tho relations jhode inhe majbut hona baaki hain
waiting how u make dem intersting...
Do update soon...

omg omg wat a comment meri toh dil khush khush ho gai ekdom😉just admiring it soo much ..

haa i waana write justice aur maine try bhi kiya sab kuch likhne ko.. family bond aks side nks too..

haa she got finally loviee thanku thanku so much dear for reading this ff nd ur lovly comments loved it totally..

fantastic comments..

haa u said true ki realtion ko abhi baki hain majbut hona.

i will do update soon next part

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Posted: 8 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: sameera_naksh
Nycc Part Dear...!!!!

thanku so much sameera for ur valuable comments... :)

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#229

ee mere humsafar ee meri jane ja.. band hain hum do badan ek jaaa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#230

part-25

nk went in hull.. dj nd vis were talking..

nk-kya hua bauji..

dj-hum soch rahe the ki tumhe hum yaha ke office main wahi jagah de jo rr ne..

nk-ab aap waise hi mujhe treat karege kyo bauji.. dekha na aadha aadhura visvas kitna khatranak hota hain.. nhi bauji mere liye apke dil main ek alg jaagah hogi..

vis-hum kitne attitude main the.. now i can say i m soo lucky.. wen u came in my house i had no care for ak but now i can understand a bond of love.. family ki love..

nk-mujhe itna pata hain ki bauji bhale hi main hi kyo na hu par aap hamesha har paper ko read karke apne business ko dhayan denge..

dj-wada ab tu yaha rahwega toh.

nk-pqr bauji pritu ka school nd mera kam.. ek bar toh mujhe jana hoga na..

dj-na maine keh diya na jawega toh na bas... koi behes na howegi..

than shivu came with angry face..

vis-mera bacha.. my baby come here.. took to him on his lap..

sh-aap mujhe esse kyo baitha liya..

vi-esse hi ap sabke sath kel rahe bas mere sath hi nhi kelte kyo..

sh-aapne mujhse bat hi nhi ki... dada..

vi-dada.

dj-dada na nana keh chora..

sh-uiii nana.. means no no..

dj nd vis laugh..

dj-na beta.. nana apni maa ke papa ne bole hain..

sh-meri amma ka koi hai hi nhi..

vis had tears..

vis-na beta hum apke amma ke papa hain.. woh gum gai thi na mili nhi aaj mili apke sath..

nk-haa beta haan.. aap bas apne nanag ke sath aur dada g ke sath enjoy karo haa..

sh-main abhi aata hu.. leave..

dj-isne ke ho gya..

now ak came outside from kitchen.. someone held to her..he grabbed to her.. he was nk..

ak-aahhh dara dete ho..

nk-aacha dara deta hu bhoot jo hu.. ak mujhe raha nhi ja raha.. plzz aao na room main.. thoda baiththe hain phir bat karte hain... mithi mithi..

ak-itne din wait kiya par ab thodi der wait nhi ho raha kya.. nk g apki kheer ban gai hain..

nk-i want my sweet plz plzzz... he was coming close than shivu came nd shout..

sh-amma.. nk apart from her..

he sees to nk from anger..

nk-kya hua mere dosttt..

sh-huh..

nk-wattt..

sh-aap bad ho apne meri amma ko data woh ro rahi thi i hate u meri amma ko kuch mat bolna datna bhi nhi.. nk laugh..

nk-aacha nhi karuga bas pyar karuga oki.. but he went.. isse kya ho gya itna gussa..

ak-nk usne mujhe rote hue bhut dekha hai taklif main agar paresan hoti hu us insan se woh nafrat si karne lagta hain..

nk-ak held her hand main tumhe bhut pyar karta hu.. shivu se bhi.

ak-main aati hu.. she went near of shivu..

gussa ho dost se.. u know mqine unko bhut data chilaya bhi..

sh-really..

ak-laugh haa.. qpki amma kya weak hain.. bhut strong hain.. badala liya unko rulaya bhi bhut..

sh-hihi.. maine bhi data.

ak-haw ab woh ro rahe pata hain gusse ke mqre ghar bhi nhi aaye the kal rat ko..i think ab aur gussa nhi karna chahiye na..

sh-haa agar aap sad nhi ho toh main bhi gussa nhi karuga..

ak-nhi beta woh apke dost hain haina aap sry bolo... esse gussa gussa nhi karte hmm.. baby i love u hug to him..

sh-i love u tooo..

he went near of nk..

sh-niche aao na..

nk-kyo..

sh-kissed to him sry... aap bure ho but amma ne bhi apko data apne bhi barabar ho gai.

ak-baby aap bas yeh dhayan rakho ki ab apke liye apke dost bhi bhut kuch hain.. apne amma se ziddi kari shadi karne ko haa yeh apko itneee aache lage phir kyo tension dete ho.. amma aur hamare bich ki hamari hain hmm.. aap sabke sath aache se rehna hmm..

sh-oki... he went.

nk-thanku..

ak-kyo..

nk-pritu ko mannane ke liye..

ak-hmm par ab dono papa beta ko apni bond khud banani hain.. main kuch nhi kar sakti..

nk-kar sakti ho bauji zid kar rahe rahi rehne ko as of now possible nhi na.. plz unko understand karao ki pritu ki school aur company esse suddenly..

ak-kya kare.. nk main try karugi par pakka nhi keh sakti.. nk kissed to ak on cheeks.. she was shocked.. kahi bhi..

nk-thanku apko bol diya apne kar diya meri madam g..

ak-oki sir g.. than nk was on table.. dj vis came rashmi nanu bm too.. ak served dinner to dj..

vis-beta nk ab thode din ak ko mere sath bhi rehne ke liye bhejna..

dj-are hum toh reh le tu yqhi reh le na..

nk-aur mera kya.. everyone laughs.. ak blushed nd made face.

ak-main toh sabki hu.. abba main aaugi rehne time leke.

vis-ab toh hame wqit rahega..

ak-bauji aap khaiye na abba aap bhi... than dj eat kheer..

dj-waah mastt banai hain... bhut aachi hain.. itni mastt kheer hai bata ke lewegi bahu..

ak-bauji mujhe aaj jane dijiye na simla... plz hum rahege main wada karti hu par abhi shivu ka school.. main apne liye yeh sab nhi keh rahi bauji yeh sab unke liye hain jo office main kam karte hain..

woh nk ka wait kar rahe sayad kam karte hue woh sab bhi ek family ban gye hain..

dj-think a while.. oki... thik hai. par haa hum bhi apne bete bahu ke sath rehwege..

gy-bindiya ko unke bauji le gye... everyone feeling sad...

dj-khas us time soch liya hota aaj yeh sab na hota..

vis-purani bat ko kya sochna hain..

dj-hmmm... are mahra shivu kaha hain..

vis nd dj went near if shivu nd starts playing..

nk-ak chalo na in isara..

gy-are ak jao sone main kar lungi..

b-haa aaram kar.. dey went..

ak-nk plz shivu ko usko mere bina nind nhi aati..

nk - smile oki...

ak-thanku... bauji woh shivu.. qap chalo hum ja rahe sone..

vis-are aaj aap hamare sath solo.. plz phir main aur apke dada khub bat karege..

sh-par..

d-haa karege na..

sh-oki... aap jao main inke sath so lunga..

ak-really aap tang nhi karoge na..

nk-ak woh keh toh raha so jayega than y u asking bar bar..

ak-par..

nk-samjho na.. shivu aap aachese khub keli karo hmm... gudnyt.. took to ak.. kitna aacha moka mila hain mera beta kitna hosiyar hain aur aap..

ak-par.. nk gave naughty look.. she smiled..

dey went in room...

ak was arranging bed than nk hug to her..

ak-nkkk yeh sab..

nk-wat happened..

ak-nk woh..

nk-nk starts kissing on her nack.. but she was not ready fully..

ak-nk woh..

nk-wat happened.. akkk maine itne din tak wait kiya tumhe sacha pyar dene ke liye... aur tum aaj meri ho dekhna mera pyar..

ak was lill uncomfortable..

nk-noticed it.. kya hua ak.. esse lal.. went away.. laugh.. ohoo main bhi na pura pagal hu.. behek jata hu dont worry tum jab chahogi tab sab hoga hmm.. pehle samjhana nd all than kuch kuch oki..

ak-sry nk... woh itne sal main akle rahi aadat nhi thi na mujhe.. socha bhi nhi ki esse tum meri life main aa jaoge aur itna pyar.. aachanak se kuch jayada mil jata hain toh thoda sa dar jati hu bas.. starts crying. but nk hug to her..

nk-hayee meri senty kitni pagli ho rotu rotu.. awww.. ro kyo rahi.. maine tumse pyar kiya itne karib ho see.. air bhi nhi pass hogi see. grabbed tight to her.. aahh..

ak-nkk.. tum itna pyar kyo karte ho rona aati na..

nk-aww oki kal na tumhe tissue gift karuga romance karuga tum aansu bahana oki..

ak-datt hit to him. i love u..

nk-nd i really love u tooo.. soo jate hain hmm.. shivu ko sula sakti hoo..

he went in bathroom...

ak opened to cupboard...

sees nighty which nanu gives..

she blushed... think a while..

ak-pehle kitni short dress pehnti thi aaj kitni saram aa rahi but nk.. usne mere emotion ko samjha.. kya usse kuch nhi dungi... she wore that nighty nd closed to power..

more part coming soon..

Edited by nakshkidiwani - 8 years ago