Old Complaints, New Promises - RiKara OS (Changed #8)

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Pixiepixel11

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Amazing update loved it so much.
Superb.

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kashishsr

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
Awww that was really cute...
Totally loved it

Thank you for reading and commenting. First comment so gold star to you😊.

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kashishsr

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: ...deepzz...
This is lovely and can totally relate to at present omkara in the show
Please do continue.
I guess gauri is omkara's princess and baby is aadya😆

Yes, Omkara is really trying to make up for his mistakes on the show and I'm glad you're finding it relatable to his characterisation here.

The identities of baby and princess will be disclosed in the next update.

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kashishsr

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm
Lovely update
Loooved that he made clear that he would be the best father he could be
Let's see if gauri will be able to forgive him
Update soon

Omkara still has a struggle ahead to regain his wife's trust and he's not going to take the risk of ever letting his daughter down.

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kashishsr

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: aaradhaya1688
Wow loved it
This was just so beautiful

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kashishsr

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: AfrinHrid
cute update

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kashishsr

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: soumyagahoi
Lovely update,... Loving this kara papa avtaar ... Update soon :)

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kashishsr

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Ishqfeel
Lovely Yaar... waiting for the next part...

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kashishsr

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: akhilash
Mast update. Thanks. 👏👏

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kashishsr

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Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: fariah25
Aawww ! I always say Kashish and will still say that Writing is totally YOUR thing ! You speak volumes through what you write...👍🏼
I was smiling all the way reading this but my teeth couldn't help but show up at the mention of papakara getting pale thinking of his daughter with boys...😃 Dads are dads ! Loveliest beings on earth ! Howmuchever you talk of princes and princesses and kings and queens and fairytales and love stories... nothing can beat the dad and his darling duo ! The sweetest and the purest form of love ! #daddy'sdarling ❤️
I'm so in love with your Husbandkara and Papakara ! They're goals !
RiKarians are very lucky to have great writers by their side !😳
Here's driving you to write more and more and more and more ! 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
Will be waiting for the next one !😊

Abhi toh I wish chemistry was my thing😆 - Pharmacy student who spends all her free time writing😕.

I fully believe Omkara has the potential to be an amazing father so that's what I've tried to portray here and I'm so glad you're enjoying it.

Our RiKara fandom is full of amazing writers - phoot, phoot ke talent barah hai RiKarians mein😉, and your poetry is no less. Amazing with words you are.😊

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment.😊

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