SaIna SS : ab maan bhi jao na. Part 7 page 38 updated - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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You know guys this is my first attempt to write something on if
And em very excited and happy to see the response
And credit goes to two of my luvly friends who encouraged me to write Manisha aka braveheartdoc and Mansi aka vampire2468

So i really want to dedicate this part to these two luvly girls..
These two girls are the one who made this possible so i really want to thank you guys
And will always want your support and encouragement to write..

And most imp i want to make this story as a ss if you guys would love to read...


Luv
Nida❤️
Edited by NIDA.ISHRAFAN - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 1

Sameer munna and pandit are sitting together in school's canteen talking with each other and discussing about his birthday

Munna: sameer birthday ka kia plan hai (what is your plan for birthday)

Pandit: han btana yr sameer birthday pr kia krne wala hai bhai ( yes tell na what you'll be doing on your birthday)

Sameer: birthday party ka arrangement kia hai nanu ne aur dekhna naina ayegi party mai.
(Nanu has done all the arrangements and i know naina will come)

Pandit: tum itne yaqeen se kese keh skte ho k naina ayegi (how can you be soo sure)

Sameer: mai janta hun wo ayegi ( i know she will come)

Pandit: par sameer acha chal dekh lete hai naina ati hai ya nahi (but sameer ok we'll see if she comes or not)

Sameer: dekh lena vo ayegi acha chalo bell hogaye hai class mai chalte hai (you can see by yourself now lets go in the class)

Later that day

On the other side naina and shefali are sitting in shefali's house

Shefali: kia hua naina tu abhi is time kia baat hai bolna(what happened you here right everything fine)

Naina: yr shefali mjhe sameer ki birthday party mai jana hai..( i want to go for sameer's birthday)

Shefali: oye hoye tau humari juliet apne romeo ki birthday mai jana chahti hai tau ye baat hai ( so our juliet wants to go to her romeo's birthday)

Naina: chup kar aur btayegi kia kro (stop it and tell me what to do)

Shefali: tau pareshani kia hai chali jaa(but whats the prob)

Naina: magr ghar pe sab( if anyone ask...)

Shefali: ik kaam kr sab ko bol de suman ki birthday mai jaa rahe hun( do one thing tell everyone that you are going for suman's birthday)

Naina: jhoot bolu na re baba ye mujhse nahi hoga( lie no no i cant lie)

Naina's VO: hahaha ab ap soch rahe hai mai aur jhoot par kia kre ab sameer ki birthday mai jana jo tha

Shefali: kia soch rahe hai keh dena k suman ki birthday mai jana hai kyun k sach btayegi tau koi tujhe jane nahi dega aur tu jana chahti hau na( what are you thinking you want to go na and if you will tell the truth they wont let you go and you want to go na for his birthday)

Naina: han jana tau chahti hun pr jhoot( i do wanna go but lie)

Shefali: itna mat soch naina ab pyaar kia tau darna kia ( dont be scared if you have fallen in love)

Naina: acha chal ab mai chalti hun bohot dair hogaye hai
(Ok bye its quite late now)

Shefali: bye naina

Chachiji's house

Chachaji: aray naina tum agaye chalo acha kia sahi time pe aye ho chalo ao tum bhi khana kha lo (naina you are back good come eat with us)

Chachiji: bhagwan jhoot na bulaye aja naina maine baingan ki sabzi banaye hai( come i have prepared brinjal today)

Naina: ji (yes)

At the dining table while eating

Naina: chachaji kal meri dost ka birthday hai mai jao (uncle tomorrow is my friends birthday can i go)

Preeti: kis ka birthday hai naina (whose birthday it is?)

Naina: vo ... vo han vo suman ka birthday hai

Preeti: suman kon swati ki padosi ki beti( swati's neighbour daughter)

Naina: nahi .. han wahi hai..( no actually yes she is the one)

Preeti:achaa mai bhi chalu (oh can i also come)

Naina: tum... vo .. mai ye keh rahe the preeti
(Actually what i was saying was)

Naina SF:(shefali ki bachi kaha phansa dia)

chachiji:bhagwan jhoot na bulwaye bhool gaye preeti hume kal shopping pe jana hai(have you forgotten we have to go for shopping tomorrow)

Preeti: aray han mai tau bhool gaye(oops i forgot)

Chachaji:naina tum chali jao.. tum chali jaogi na ya mai arjun ko bolu (ok u go or should i send arjun with you)

Naina: mai chali jaogi( i will go by myself)

Naina SF: (bach gaye..)

Next morning

As it was sunday pooja and preeti were fast asleep naina woke up first and got ready. She was still sitting on the study table what to gift sameer on his birthday when chachiji entered

Chachiji: bhagwan jhoot na bulaye tum uth gaye naina( you are awake)

Naina: ji vo bus abhi uthi(just woke up)

Chachiji: acha tune kuch socha hai suman ko kia degi usk janam din pe
(Have u thought what you will gift suman on her birthday)

Naina: kon suman oh acha suman nahi chachiji(who suman oh suman no chachi)

Chachiji: theher mai deti hun tohfa(wait let me give you a gift)

And chachi bought a yellow hair pin with a big sunflower on it and gave it to naina saying
Chachiji: bhagwan jhoot na bulaye ye de dena apni saheli ko bohot khush hojayegi(give this to your friend she will be very happy).

Naina looking at the hairpin said:vese usk baal lambe hai aur bohot sundar bhi but us par ye pin suit nahi karega..
(His hairs are long and pretty but this pin wont suit)

Chachiji: aray ye clip har larki pe suit krega tu zyada soch mat aur nashta krne aja (this clip will suit dont worry and come for breakfast)

Later that day in the evening
Naina got ready to go for sameer birthday and her father said..

Rakesh: chalo naina mai chor deta hun(come naina let me drop you)

Naina: papa vo

Chachaji: aray bhai sahab ise jane de mjhe apse kaam hai (let her go i have some work with you) and said looking towards naina tum jao theek hai beta
(Naina you go)
Naina: ji chachaji..

Naina rushes out of her house to go before some else stops her...


Precap
Sameer's birthday party and prologue scene.




Edited by NIDA.ISHRAFAN - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Update part 1 above
All joota and chappals r allowed
Please hit like and comment😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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thanks for pm dear...nice part... naina lies for go ti sameer 's party... sameer must be waiting for her...waiting for next part.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice start Nida 👏
Loved Naina and Shefali convo...really cute👏
And Chachiji and her brinjal 😆

Thanks a lot for dedication to me...means a lot 😃

Keep rocking dear😃

Thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very nice start 👍🏼
Will love to read further 😊
Edited by Anmol333 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: isratnaina

thanks for pm dear...nice part... naina lies for go ti sameer 's party... sameer must be waiting for her...waiting for next part.


Yep
She lied..
Will update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Nice start Nida 👏

Loved Naina and Shefali convo...really cute👏
And Chachiji and her brinjal 😆

Thanks a lot for dedication to me...means a lot 😃

Keep rocking dear😃

Thanks for the pm😊


Thanku...
N well u deserve it
U give me da much needed courage to write
So thanku..😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anmol333

Very nice start 👍🏼

Will love to read further 😊


Thanks anmol dear😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome one
I think u shud change d title from OS to TS or SS, considering d number if parts u hv planned..
N plzz send it's link to me or Anmol333 so dat we can add it in d index

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