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Posted: 8 years ago
Samiksha, Happy diwali! Thanks for the lovely updates. Steps to tia exposure, but I guess gauri's acceptance, pinky being acknowledged and annika's re-entry are some time off. When Annika is in trouble, will she call Shivaay again?
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Posted: 8 years ago
Excellent updates dear finally tia fiasco will end but I'm eagerly waiting for annika's past to unfold... n Soumya poor girl she has to witness all tia nonsense things... I loved prinku n shivaay convo it's really full of care emotion n love...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey Samiksha..!
First Of All, A Very Happy Diwali To You and Your Family.
⭐️
Now coming to this fiction,
I have seen it around but have had an absolutely busy month so couldn't make it here to comment ..!

But, what absolutely surprises me is the speed at which you update...!!!😲Given that I m absolutely slow both at reading and writing..!😕

How do you even manage!!!??

Anyways, Bookmarking This Story, Will Get To Reading It Soon..!!😃

I m pretty sure I will Love It!😳

Happy Festivities⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago
First of all, wishing you a very Happy Diwali and a prosperous year ahead. 🥳
The Diwali update was a total bomb!😆

Loved reading how Shivaay wanted to spend as much time with Anika as he could. And when Anika said "aavein bhi call kar sakti hoon" ahaha that was the best thing ever!!! And of course how can I forget the hug!!!

Wish the phone call lasted a bit longer but its not in the nature of Anika and Shivaay to talk hours on the phone anyway, the scene represented them very truthfully and exactly how I would imagine it if they were actually acting out the scene.

Sorry if my comments are more directed towards Shivika, I am just too much in love with the way you portray them!

However, equally enjoyed reading the other aspects of the story as well.

I just can't wait for Shivaay to say "MARRY ME!"

I feel like it wont be too long away looking at the way he is so affected and attracted by Anika.

I don't know if it's fair to say this every time or not, but do update soon!!!!!

-LOTS OF LOVE ❤️



Edited by _ishqbaaaz_ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Rainzz

A very very Happy Deepawali to you.🥳🥳

May you have a prosperous and safe Deepawali.😛😛

When I finsh reading all the parts you post, I feel an urge to read more.
Isliye instead of writing in the end, I am writing this in the starting. Please update soon. I know, I am behaving like a greedy person. But, I can't help it *facepalm*.
I have said this before too and I am telling you now also: You have weaved your story in a very good way. Each and every character has their own significance... their own role... even Niel and Sanvi.
Shivaay and Annika meet was lovely. As much as Annika is an enigma for Shivaay, Shivaay is also an enigma for Annika whose actions she can't understand. And, I am loving this.
But that site changed Shivaay. And he behaved badly with Annika. When Annika's past is going to unfold. I am waiting for that like anything. I want to see(read) Shivaay's reaction.
Seems like Mission Tia Bhaanda Phod is gaining pace. Happily Dancing thinking about her future Oh My Maata.
This Pinky and Priyanka, I am loving.
Honestly, I never liked Priyanka in the show. She was rather an invisible person for me. But here, she is smart. And it's good and refreshing too. Secondly, Pinky is fabulous. Her dislike for Tia, her love for Rudra and her words of wisdom for Shivaay are lovely. I am looking forward to more Shivaay and Pinky scenes.
When Shivaay came to know that Gauri made that food, I felt he is going to talk to Gauri but that did not happened. But, Prinku and Shivaay were good too. Apart from that, I wanted to ask : Earlier Shivaay was against Gauri and Om marriage and now he is saying that he has no say in that matter. What exactly does he want ?

P.S.: Hey Bhagwaan. I wrote this much long comment. The comment was appearing long when I was writing it but when I posted it, it is appearing super-long to me. Now, I don't know what I have written in excitement.



I hope you enjoyed the festivities and had a great time.
I hope you do know I love you for all that you said here Poorvika. I have said it before I will say it again when you ask for an update my head feels a lot bigger so no you are not greedy. It is overwhelming to know that you still want to read the story. It is very relieving to know that you enjoy the characters so much even the unfamiliar ones Neil and Sanvi.

Shivay and Anika are strangely similar and this uniqueness probably pulls them towards each other. I too want to write their realization of each other's situation as best as I can. Let's see how it goes there is some time to it though. The other thing I really want to pen down well is Tia's OMM!

I actually like the actors who played Pinky and Priyanka. If she had been explored better I am sure she would have grown up on us. So far Pinky's dislike for Tia goes, what I wanted to portray here were two things a mother's instinct and secondly a mother's desire to stay relevant in their children's life. Instinctively mothers do tend to understand whats best for there babies, Pinky in the show is an absolute retard int hat department. She knows that Tia cannot be the person who would value her in future. If she cant value her today future is far-fetched.

Shivay has not mellowed down or changed towards Gauri at all, that is why he showed indifference, but he knows that if Gauri is Om choice there is little that can be done here. It is Tej who was adamant for dissolution of marriage, not SHivay. He was still trying to make Om see reason. Even when Priyanka talks to Shivay about Gauri he did say that though his acceptance or rejection was immaterial and he cannot himself either. So it is more of a deadlock here between Om and SHivay.

I loved loved loved your not so long comment. It was not at all long at least not to me.
Thank you Poorvika for reading this FF with such interest.
❤️


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Apu_915

Wishing you a very happy & safe Diwali 🥳

Thank you so much hope you had a great time
Amazing Updates as always. Loved all of them ❤️

Gracias!😳
Finally Tia's game is going to be over

Yes finally I was able to start the grand fiasco😳. It has just started I hope it would end with greater bang. 😆
Loved the Shivika scene in the office & Rumya scene too. Bechari Anika gathering a lot of courage she called Shivaay & was royally ignored. Waiting to see their reaction when they come to know each other's present situations!
I am actually writing that part of the story first where they come face to face with each other's situation.

Loving the way each couple is evolving & the story is progressing 🤗

Aww thank you, I am glad you enjoyed it. 😳
I truly love the Pinky here, she's straightforward, understanding & gives positive vibes 😳
I love the strong-headed and bold Prinku too. All the characters you have weaved in here are so strong ,have their own specialities & have a realistic touch to them which I totally adore!

Thank you so so so much for such kind words. It gives me immense joy to see you guys enjoying this story. This is the first time I have tried writing anything. I have never written anything but official correspondences and of course my exam papers. I had never thought this would be so appreciated. 😳
Can't wait to read Tia's Grand OMM. Update Soonish 😃
Thanks for the PM :)

I will try to Update as soon as I can connect the dots and fill in the blanks. 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: aditi27

Such an amazing story line. Love how each character is finding their footing especially shivaay anika and saumya and rudra. Om is still slightly mysterious to me.

Do continue soon can't wait for all the realisations to dawn..

I am glad you found the story line amazing. Om and Gauri are going to step up next. Om is myterious and mystical.
I will continue as soon as I can.
Thank you so much, Aditi for writing back to me.
❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Thank you so much😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Thank you so much. Even though you write very few words but they do mean a lot to me and I always look forward to them.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: abhilashasharma

Thanks for the patient answers. Don't take me wrong. I am impressed with the plot of the story and the honest efforts u r putting into. I just want that to reach the readers exactly in the way it is. Since u have a positive mindset, I am glad to put forward my doubts/questions/comments.


Dear Abhilasha/ Readers.
I am not at all offended by your questions, as a matter of fact, none of you have ever written anything offensive to me in fact if anything you all have been so kind and generous to me. I cannot ask for more.
Those were valid questions, I am sure many others must have had them too. So thank you for speaking them out. I am glad you find my mindset positive.

Please feel free to not only ask but also criticise the absurdities in the plot, or in the writing. Comment here or PM me all work fine.
You are putting in your time to read this, that means a lot to me.
Thank you
much love
Samiksha😊

Edited by samiksha1993 - 8 years ago

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