OBEROI MANSION: A HOUSE OF FAILED MARRIAGES [Part 5-Page 18][29/10/17]

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Very well written :) waiting to read more. .

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: docs
Very well written :) waiting to read more. .

Thank you so much dear. 😳😳

I am updating in a few minutes. 😃😃

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Gurveen

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Nice update
Hadn't Shakti ignored pinky in the past, she wouldn't be bitter towards Anika??
Maybe she didn't want the history to repeat that too with her own son Shivay
update soon please

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AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Ya...it was right...pinky was never given any respect in that house by her husband...that's why she became like this

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bworm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Nicely done. Liked your interpretation of shankys relationship

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samiksha1993

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

the idea of Cinderella marrying a prince is too endearing and romantic. The reality is far removed and heartbreaking. You have really really brought it out well. I love what you have written.

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samiksha1993

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Rainzz

Hey Samiksha😛,
Thanks a lot for commenting. 😳😳
I am really happy to know that you liked the title. 😃😃
About writing in few words, the problem is that I am unable to increase the length of the parts, no matter how much I try.😕😕

That is actually so good. I am just the reverse I dont know why I have that need to keep on saying things that have already been told so many times. It very good if one can write without beating about bush and still not be official or formal.
I knew my capability so I chose to keep them drabbles instead of one - shots.😆😆

One shots or drabbles call it whatever, they are perfect and convey your thoughts well. Your job as a communicator is done here.
I have started writing the next update. Hopefully, I will update tomorrow... or today (if I am able to complete that😉😉).

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PenguinBaby

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

That was really nice! But it's sad to see Pinky doing the same with Annika, for not accepting her the way she is. We would think that out of all the Oberois, Pinky would be the most sympathetic towards her DIL, but alas.

Great part! Update the next soon :)

-Sanu

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Rohini

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Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Very nicely written. The first two shots you have beautifully narrated the reasons for the failures...

I am wondering about the three junior Oberoi brothers... they are still going through the relationships... are these shots set in future where these three brothers also failed ?

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