ArShi SS: Reversed Ch.16 B updated, page 22, 12/11 - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting and intriguing storyline. Role reversal is incredible. Enjoyed this
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -cynicalmess-

Arnav as claustrophobic!!!.you are breaking stereotypes here dear..And Khushi,she is a enigma for me as of now.

Great going.
Ps- Lucky you that you got to watch THMS...Thr side of india where i live in is still waiting for its release.


Thank you! Human beings are vulnerable, man or woman, ASR or no ASR. And the whole image of masculinity actually is suffocating sometimes, especially for men themselves. So, I thought why not! ASR could have claustrophobia, instead of diabetes. 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: poojasidd123

So so interesting! The poor man fainted after banging the walls for hours. Lol. Please don't be upset on me for this reaction. I can't help laughing reading situation described. So this reminded me of the scene where khushi was trapped in that warehouse.
Khushi has now realized that implicating and living out a plan is far more critical than planning it.


Bang on! Pooja. It was a reversal of the warehouse scene. Even ASR's dialogues here echo Khushi's angry tirade when she handed ASR the resignation letter (Hum theek hai, apke wajah se nahi, apke bwawajud bhi theek hai!) Remember?? and thank you for your support. As always!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: brishti84

Ok confession: I find drabbles to be annoying because each chapter' just wets your appetite without an entree or dessert! 😵

Anyways, I like that Arnav is threatening with a lawsuit and standing up for himself but clearly has no idea who he is dealing with. And he should be happy about getting to sleep on a couch given what his alternate ego does in a different universe 😆 So is their marriage going to be a platonic relationship? Only asking because they've slept together (based on Khushi's comment about him being good in bed) and that could be very difficult at times since both are also emotionally involved. Six months is a looong time so let's see who cracks first 😉


Hi Brishti! Actually this one is not a drabble anymore. I couldn't keep it short enough to be a drabble and can't seem to write long enough chapters to include ummm.. dessert! But I will try for at least munch ons in the coming chapters.
And about their relationship, let's see how the story shapes up. Thank You!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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When Khushi woke to the first morning of her married life, getting out of the bed was a chore that took herculean force. And it left her drained. Her general aversion to mornings and human interaction crippled her. Each morning of her life, as far as she could remember, she had asked herself the same question, to what end?' And answered it with 'today's to do list'. It seemed non-sensical when one is having an existential crisis. A cup of strong brewed coffee works much better.

She saw him then, sleeping uncomfortably on a couch that doesn't have enough room for his frame. She made a mental note to replace the couch with a bigger one. His arm thrown across his closed eyes in annoyance as the morning played peek-a-boo with her soft grey curtains. She had a vision of herself drawing the curtains to let him sleep in for a while longer. Steal few minutes of peace, for him. Because she knew sleep is the only cocoon, against existence.

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He woke from a fitful sleep with distant clanking of coffee mugs and stainless steel spoons. The freshly brewed coffee further disoriented his senses. Where is he? Anjali doesn't like coffee? Who is making coffee? May be today they will have coffee instead of the indispensable morning tea.

Khushi walked in before he could dwell on his confusions. Oh!

"Coffee?" She kept his mug on the table before he could form a reply.

"This is not going to be a routine. But today I have some boundaries to set before we go on with our lives. First, outside the four walls of my apartment, we are a happily married couple. And I already made it clear where you stand in this relationship inside this house. Second, we have taken leave for two days. Third, no one, I repeat no one is going to be privy to the knowledge of a six months contract that stands between us. And last, you will leave this house after six months and we will no longer be husband and wife. This was the last thing because I don't have to remind you about our nuptial agreement, I hope?

"Six months? Small mercies do exist in your manual of ruining lives. Doesn't it?"

"And the boundaries are non-negotiable." She continued without acknowledging his remark.

"Khushi! Just tell me why?"

"Because in the matter of ruining lives your name comes first in the list. And you are a deceitful piece of shit who needs to be put in his place." She said as if quoting statistics in a presentation.

"Khushi! Enough. I am leaving this house. I have had enough. If you are so full of yourself to even tell me the reason for this mockery of a marriage I do not care for your reasons and neither your threats. I am walking out of this."

"Okay! But before you go say good bye to everything you have ever achieved in your pathetic years you call a life."

"Well! You can try and stop me but Khushi you know as well as I do, you can't change lives according to how you please. You are not God."

"Well your God is dead and he left this world to the devils. And you know what they call me! And excuse me, I have to make a call."

"Hello, Dr. Gardner. How are you?... Yes I am good, I am good... I know it's been hard for you, flying in and out of the country. ... Yes I know but I think we can arrange something else for Anjal..."

"Khushi, stop! Khushi please!"

"Hold on a sec, Dr." She turned to face Arnav

"I won't leave and I agree to all your terms, boundaries whatever you call it. Just.. just don't do this." The defeat in his voice made her wish she didn't have to do this. Didn't have to do anything they have done to each other.

Khushi went back to her phone without sparing a second glance to Arnav.

"Yes. Mr. Gardner. I am sorry. Actually we did try to arrange something else for Anjali but you see no one else is capable for a surgery as complex as this. Besides you are the only one I trust. It's just that we have to delay the surgery for six months. Anjali is not in a state to go through it right now... Yes actually a tragedy has befallen her... family ... No, nothing major just family dispute. I hope you know what to do... Thank you so much Dr. I owe you one."

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Arnav wondered if God has really abandoned his creation and left it to the devils. Because there seems to be no respite from life.

Edited by luv_panipuri - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86
khushi is a devil ..i mean she-devil
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: luv_panipuri


Thank you! Human beings are vulnerable, man or woman, ASR or no ASR. And the whole image of masculinity actually is suffocating sometimes, especially for men themselves. So, I thought why not! ASR could have claustrophobia, instead of diabetes. 😉


I have to agree with the suffocating part.the whole thing is overrated at least to me.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Khushi is truely heartless here or rather that's what she projects herself to be.And Arnav seems like has already fallen prey to it.Makes me really wonder if he is actually in love with her at this point of time then what made him fall for her!!!.
Waiting for further updates.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Khushi will order a bigger couch. She does have some heart there.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: luv_panipuri



Hi Brishti! Actually this one is not a drabble anymore. I couldn't keep it short enough to be a drabble and can't seem to write long enough chapters to include ummm.. dessert! But I will try for at least munch ons in the coming chapters.
And about their relationship, let's see how the story shapes up. Thank You!!


I was just ranting and bringing the inner Khushi out in me 😆 No need to make any changes in the amount of content you provide. I'll still read this even if it's half the current size 😃 And you post so frequently that it makes up for the shorter length.
Edited by brishti84 - 8 years ago

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