ArShi SS: Reversed Ch.16 B updated, page 22, 12/11 - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
#51
Damn, she married him to save her company. And arnav it seems has definitely been used by shyam, without him being aware of it. I am reversing the roles here and so trying to make guesses that way. Both of them has loved each other, arnav more so. Arnav was khushi's dirty secret. What made her keep the affair a secret? Makes me wonder if arnav also wanted this to be kept hidden. So, he will be the chairman of the firm. Is he aware of the decisions of the board?
I am loving this drabble form of the story. That line by Neruda from his poem is so beautiful.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Arilip

Loving khushi on the upper hand😊

Thank You 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: brishti84

Ok so feelings are mutual but more so from Arnav's side since he's in love whereas Khushi may have been on her way if this didn't happen. It seems as if Shyam is using Arnav without the latter's knowledge. I want to know where exactly Arnav fits in his ploy and how close those two are.

So how does Arnav's family feel about his sudden marriage? Initially I had thought that it'd be a secret arrangement but Khushi asking him to discuss with his family hints otherwise. Does he live with her now?

Very much enjoying this different take of yours.


Thank you so much for your detailed review. Part seven is coming right up. I think that will answer half of your questions. The next chapter is about Arnav's confrontation with the family. Hope you like it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ArshiS.Raizada

Oh I see you already wrote few parts. I didn't notice. So they had some sort of relationship and now Khushi forced him to marry her because this way she wants to keep the firm in her hands. It's really interesting.

I am hooked to the story. I am having so much fun writing this story. Hence the quick updates. Do check it once in a while if you find this worth reading. At this rate I am afraid updates will pop up every day 😛
Edited by luv_panipuri - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -cynicalmess-

Loving this one.

Not just the characters but even the story looks layered.bring it on.


Thank you. I hope you will enjoy the next parts equally.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: poojasidd123

Damn, she married him to save her company. And arnav it seems has definitely been used by shyam, without him being aware of it. I am reversing the roles here and so trying to make guesses that way. Both of them has loved each other, arnav more so. Arnav was khushi's dirty secret. What made her keep the affair a secret? Makes me wonder if arnav also wanted this to be kept hidden. So, he will be the chairman of the firm. Is he aware of the decisions of the board?
I am loving this drabble form of the story. That line by Neruda from his poem is so beautiful.


Hi Pooja! All your questions will be answered in the right time. Stay tuned. Thank you so much for your support as always. And yes, I am updating this one pretty quick since it got me hooked. Also I have removed the drabble tag because I am not being able to keep the word limit to 100. So it is not a drabble anymore. It is now a short story with really short chapters. And, if you are still here, chapter 7 is coming right up. Do let me know what you think. And the sentence I highlighted from your comment, that's the key 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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His Di had asked him if he were joking when he said he was going to get married the next day. His Amma had hit him and asked him never to show his face again in the family. When he said he is going to live with his bride. His father had told him they want nothing to do with him anymore. He may get out of their lives and never come back. He had felt as if he had turned into a cockroach overnight. Despicable, useless and hence without a family.

They married in court with two witnesses who he knew were paid by the bride.

"I don't like circus in the name of wedding. So we got married when we wanted to... sans the circus" Khushi's statement had outraged the few invitees whose names made it to the wedding reception list. Who's who of town blessed the couple, gracefully twirling their champagne flutes and asked veiled uncomfortable questions.

His bride had been successful in planning a circus in the name of wedding, after all.

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Note: The line about cockroach is a reference from Kafka's Metamorphosis.

Edited by luv_panipuri - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#58
You updated already.. I just completed reading last update.not that i am complaining.
Feeling bad for Arnav,the same way i had felt bad for Khushi in the original.Reading all these updates make me want to know how it would have in those 'some times' where Khushi too loved Arnav.
So are we getting a pov from Khushi's side regarding Arnav???.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Arnav has been bashed by his family. Shit. We have got so used to reading stories about khushi being bashed and ostracized by family, that it kind of feels a bit more sorrowful to read about arnav, a man having to face that. I pity him. But in a weird way, enjoying this too😎 The last line was hilarious.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow you update fast! Totally spoiling us here...

Not surprised by the way Arnav's family reacted. Question is how will it be once some time has passed. Time always heals some wounds. Let's see how close Arnav and Anjali are. Hopefully she'll pressure him for answers. Of course he won't reveal anything but hopefully she'll realize that not all is well. I was so disappointed by how Payal behaved on the show with regards to Khushi.

Now why a six month contract? What has Khushi planned to do in these months? In the show Anjali's pregnancy dictated the duration but I haven't noticed any such restriction here (unless I missed it).

Can't wait to read about their married life. Is he sleeping by the pool here too? 😆 (I shouldn't laugh...his situation sucks)
Edited by brishti84 - 8 years ago

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