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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: hira2010

Read and comment n blog last part ka pm nahi mila


ya i get know
i check later

sorry dear šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 8 years ago

please comment previous parts dear
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anu5

Nice update dear !!

Liked it!!
It was Maan's dream about the ghost . He imagined Manisha as ghost and Manisha's endurance and affection for him scared the hell out of him that poor Maan had to dreamt Manisha as ghost. Nice twist and ending dear .
Thanks for the pm !
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thanks dear

and most welcome
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Jayeeta_06

awesome update...ā­ļøā­ļøā­ļø...so Maan was dreaming all along...šŸ˜Ž...He dreamed of Manisha coming close to him by entering in Geet's body and calling him hottie...šŸ˜‰...He was about to kiss him...🤣...hearing this Geet laughed like anything making Maan angry...šŸ˜›šŸ˜†...loved it...ā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø...thank u 4 pm...😃...


ab bechare maan ka mjak bna diya geet ne

aur maan and kiss
show mein toh mauka mila nhi
socha yhi dedu
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: custodian75

Thanks for posting in blog.

Who is after maan and Geet. Geet I s starting to behave weirdly. Maan knows something is wrong but not what.


now dear

check inbox

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Posted: 8 years ago

thanks for liking OS of bhoot aaya series

and sorry for not posting ON IF(here)
because i get same like and comment like series 1šŸ˜‰

thank you very much my regular readers


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Posted: 8 years ago
Password send to all who comment on previous parts

if any one left who comment

so please comment here

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Posted: 8 years ago
Small Epilogue
for fun, on demand of regular readers

next day , in office, maan doing work , someone enter in his cabin, he already so tensed from night and geet not leave any chance to irritate him... someone placed hand on his eyes...
btao mein kaun
.
with little changed voice
.
he try to stand, but someone pressed his shoulder with elbow...'

remove your hand nowww

.
uff hotie
.
maan mummer hotie

nooo

.
manisha take step back due to his sudden scream...
.
kya huya hottie
.
maan : you get out
.
Manisha : asa kyun hotie
tumne hi toh aaj bulaya tha mujhe
.
wo story sunani thi

.
hotie please sit and let me read the story for you.

manisha start explaining story , and he getting shock ... how he knows about that...
.
manisha : in last hotie we kissed each other
.
maan so lost , no idea when manisha come closer and kissed on his cheek...

mja aayenga na
.
maan pushed him and run out from cabin to geet cabin...
**********
geet you know what
my dream going true
.
geet : aapka mere alawa bhi koi khawab hai

bad idea

Maan : wo raat wala
.
geet : oh manisha
.
so is baar kiss huya kya
.
she laughed again to see his irritated and shocked expression...šŸ˜†

maan : you tell him
.
geet : na
maine aapke baare me kuch nhi bataya
just give idea
and manisha itni khush ho gyi
apne hot - hot boss ke liye

.
Maan : you

i kill you

.
geet : maan bhoot aaya
she winked šŸ˜‰

Edited by priya_21 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
poor maan.. geet ne toh maze le lio
bechara maan phas gya.
and Manisha. he is so funny..

loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
thanks 4 an amusing story! great epilogue! Geet told Manisha! Manisha corners Maan! Poor Maan! Geet had fun at his expense! lovely end!

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