ArShi SS: Reversed Ch.16 B updated, page 22, 12/11 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ArshiS.Raizada

Wow, that was almost a tiny OS yet so interesting. Are you going to continue it?

Hi! Thank you. It was a tiny os but I guess it is going to stretch into a drabble from now on.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Deeksha...

Very intriguting and you grab all our interest with it.

So please don't stop updating.

Hi! Thank you. I am hoping not to stop. But it is going to be a drabble.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: brishti84

Omg you have to continue this! I've imagined this kind of scenario and been waiting for a talented writer to put it into words. I want Khushi in the empowered position with a more vulnerable Arnav. So please continue this!

I don't know how much of talent I have in me but I will try to reach the mark. Thank you.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Rewind a year!

He didn't want to be here. His success, that seemed like happiness, now suffocated him. He loosened the tie around his neck. He didn't want to be here. His promising future scared him. He seemed to have lost his way. Oh dear God, what am I doing here?

She had been a pleasant distraction from his anxieties. He had noticed her rapidly moving lips first, their movement confident, a sharp contrast to his own anxious stance.. And her business suit clad figure androgynous, he had noted. He had looked up to her eyes, then, and found them looking right at him. The rest had been a blur. He still doesn't know how long his claustrophobic self had endured confinement.



"Who are you? Who sent you here? Did Mittal send you? Answer me!"

"How many times do I have to tell you? I am the new recruit. I interned at Lucknow branch for past two years. You can check with the administration. My name is Arnav Singh Raizada."

"Where is your appointment letter?"

"I... I.. lost it somehow. But I did show it to the receptionist. You can ask her."

"You are lying."

"Why would I lie? Ask your administration. I interned at the Lucknow office for past two years."

"We sure will Mr. Raizada. But till then you can't leave this building. Security!!"

"What? Are you going to lock me up? You can't do that."

"Yes I can Mr. Raizada. You have been in a confidential meeting where only my client and the lawyers representing them are allowed, in the pretext of being a lawyer from our firm. And you have no proof to claim yourself as one."

"I told you. I am the new recruit. I was directed to this room. Mr. Akash interviewed me and appointed me from the Lucknow office. You can't.. you can't lock me up. Pl.. please." Tremble in his voice had shamed him.

"Mr. Jha, please accompany Mr. Raizada to the third floor, clients meeting room? Make him comfortable. And yes, lock the door."


This will be a drabble, from the next part. I promise *Face palm*

Edited by luv_panipuri - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is so interesting. A meme would be like meanwhile in the parallel universe...
Really wonderful update. Thanks for listening to us and continuing to
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Drabble sounds even more interesting!.
Arnav Singh Raizada and tremble!!!.Khushi Gupta must be truely intimidating then.cant wait for next part.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Woohoo loving the role reversal 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yes another chapter so now we have a story 😃 Thank you for allowing us to pressure you into this 😆

I like this bitchy and obnoxious Khushi. I can't help but picture Arnav though. Old habits. I wonder if they had an office here though cause I get that vibe somehow. Can't wait to find out what exactly Arnav did or Khushi assumes he did for it all to go downhill.
Edited by brishti84 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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That's pretty good.
I always want to imagine rondhu arnav here in this scene and I got it.
Thanks Himakshi (I hope I can call you that)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you everyone! I really appreciate the support and the enthusiasm. You guys keep this story going. Cheers. And here is the next part.

Part 3

"Fine. You win."

"You wish to say something, Arnav? Don't be so close-fisted with your words."

"I am ready to marry you. Just don't.. don't stop Anjali's treatment. I will do anything."

He is vulnerable when it comes to his sister and she doesn't have any qualms taking full advantage of it.

"Anything?"

"Ye..yes."

"Okay. Let your family know. Tomorrow we marry."

"Tomorrow?"

"Yes."

"I.. I... okay. I will talk to my family."

"And after the wedding, we live at my place."

"What? Is this a joke to you? Cheh Mahine ki shaadi and now this?"

"I thought you said anything. For your Anjali?"

"Why are you doing this, Khushi?"

"Oh! Didn't I tell you? I couldn't get over how good you are in bed ."

Edited by luv_panipuri - 8 years ago

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