With This Taveez (5) ch 38 and NOTE pg 141

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Cartoon.Buff

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Posted: 8 years ago

#581

Happy for the Rathods! The family is reunited after so long. I am glad Tara did not give in and took Poonam to their Bapusa.

Maan and Geet are adorable together! Eagerly waiting for them to come together. Kiran was being good too this time.

Teji and Sonakshi Bose? Interesting! They have a daughter?! Teji is actually a loser then!

Thanks for the PM! Update soon please.

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pop77

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Posted: 8 years ago

#582

Part34..

I think family member try to kill Poonam..She recognize her dad..he also care for his two daughter..Chandan wants to poona getting better,,

Avi when Maan & Geet confess their love..Raj & Kiran knows that they love each other..

What is relation between Teji & Ms Boss..

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priyanka5020

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Posted: 8 years ago

#583

chapter 32

amazing update

loved maaneet moments in the morning

maan is not besura but to irritate geet, he always sings besura

kiran is very happy with maaneet story progress

bechari geet ko maan ka saath uska breakfast karna pada but uske sasurji uske liya aloo paratha le aaye

aisa sasural sabko mile

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crazydream

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Part 27

Maan aur Geet ka romance over texts. They are exactly behaving like a couple. Maan behaving like a teenager. Kiran happy to see him like that but confused who made him like that.

Its difficult for Dev to come to a decision right now. One side is his family and other side is his love. He is torn between the two and seeing Tara so emotionally broken is hard for him.

Thank God Teji was not so stupid as we thought. Infact he can judge other's feeling very well. Geet hairan ho gayi.

But I loved Teji's theory. So So true.

And Bingo he realised they are in love and Geet hi friends ka jaap le kar baithi hai.

And yayee we can see a possessive Maan once again.

I liked the way Geet running into her lover's arm. I could the imagine the winds blowing the music playing. LOL

Password for Part 28. Sorry for late comment. Had gone out of station for 10 days.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#585

Wonderful update 👍🏼

So daman hai poonam ye haal keliye n now wants to harm chandan 😡

Geet liking maan's care n feeling secured when he is around 😉

Geet told thanks to Maan n he couldn't confess his feelings he told her she is family

Poonam n her dad part was so emotional she recognized her bapusa

Teji saw the child with sonakshi was resembling him😳

Really teasing teaser 😉

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dqno1

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: sidlik
Res for the comment🤗

Indeed a beautiful
And Firstly I want to say Hatt Of Avi and I liked the way you say and warn other... I am so sorry If I ever hurt you with my comments
I love to see other couples with Maaneet...
In life there are so many couples no one and it's your story and you can write whatever you thought... I don't like the Person who complaint when Maaneet is not together and why you bring someone else... Etc Etc... I am cutting the long story short...
I love whatever you write
I am curious to know Teji and Shona story... What happen in the past so they have a daughter
Hmm great going and I feel bad for him...

I love the way you write the recognition part of Poonam when she heard her father voice
Poor girl suffered alot
Now we know who killed Poonam and that Daman just hate him so much...
Are they are after Dev and Chandan too... Poor guys hope their life will be better soon.
In my opinion they killed two birds with single stone... Will wait for next, what they will do now.

Now coming to Maaneet part it's beautiful written, Maan taking care of Geet and poor her she is in Dilemma...She is craving for love
And Kiran part is too Good...
"Don't talk to Maan, Geet" me saying, after all he tease her in front of his mother but Nakul Saves her...Ha Ha Ha

I am waiting for Rasika Entry and what will Maan do, as he was thinking to propose her in romantic way and here Pari and his Mother are coming...She planned dirty plan

Will wait for next part and it's awesome Avi
Love it so much

Take Care
Tons of Love ❤️

dhamki ki koi asar bhi nahi hoti hai 😆 par phir bhi karti hu
habit of being an elder sister 😆
Thanks Suhaira. 😃

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Risingsun626

Thanks for pm n pw. Lovely update but without song. I become somewhere habituated of it. Yours' last mine first. Short but sincere conclusion of teji about his life. Sometime we get less time to think about our past n to find out ours fault so that we dont repeat them. But when this past start to disturb the present n future we need to rush n handle it. Happy that teji took the first step to rectify the past n hope he will get happiness with interest.
The bonding poonam n tara has with their father is out of explaination. Chandan claims to love poonam but he was not anywhere in her memory even in faded form but poonam recognise the arms of her real protector who had protected her even before she took birth. Thats why i always said that the biggest compititor for a lover/husband is one n only his father in law. Go n try to achieve his place in your wife's heart you will fail badly. Am i wrong here??
Sweetness n crazyness together named as maaneet. The hesitation in hearts is going to be payfull for them as rasika is planning something big. Hope they confess before it n face her together. Kiran aunty is such a darling.
Daman n nandini are new villains in story aur abhi brij bhi toh baki h. Hehehe. I did not forget him.
Waiting for next.

Your comments are always so touching for me to read.
Even if they don't face Rasika together, will it matter?
True love always wins
at least in my story 😃

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dqno1

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Posted: 8 years ago

#588

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
<font color="#0066ff">thanks 4 da pm n perfectupdate! superbly written! regardingur note - I love that ur stories have more than one love story and many characters! Feeling 4 Poonam! she has had tough life! She recognizesher dad! he apologizes to her! she now is back with her family! Like how Maan takes care of Geet! lovely hug! Maan gng 2 propose2 Geet! cannotwait! he is unawarethat Rasika is coming there! Maan teases Geet in front of his mom! Geet embarrassed! Teji meets Sonakshi n realises he has a daughter! update soon</font>

Thank you
about your response I never have a doubt 😃

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dqno1

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: crazymaneetian
Chapter 73

Can't find its link page!! Anyways thiswas a great read...mystery seems to deepne as pari and rasika will enter their lives with dirty games, the mysteryof poonam's kidnapping is deepening...what will tara's dd decide...?...arrey wah maan aur teji dost ban gaye and of all the people maan is using geet's name to make Teji agree...Teji was ready to move on but now there is sona from the past...nice weaving in of all the stories

chapter 73?

kaisse? 😆

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dqno1

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC
Am loving it.. Chahe Maan Geet ho Poonam Chandan ho Dev Tara ho ya Teji Sona😉❤️
Teji still stalks sona.. and thinks she moved on but the reality is otherwise.. waiting for their story😉
Daman is such a manhoos insan.. now we know who is behind Poonam and Tara.. all is money game.. now planning to destroy Khanna guys.. they will not leave him I'm sure😎
Haaye MG romance.. is me tou aap master hain😳
Geet in dilemma.. her overthinking mind stopping her.. and Maan he is adorable lol.. mummy ke samne bhi teasing😆😳
Waiting For more..😃

thankoo Sheen 🤗