ENTWINED DESTINIES ..Chap16:Pg68 updated on 22/06 - Page 26

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Posted: 8 years ago
Res ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Unres ๐Ÿ˜›
Ami well written ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Romance karana koyi meri bhai sa seekhana chayha ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Full of romance wala update ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Sk not control himself when ms talking with man don't know what will he do kabir after what forceful engagement
I'm happy u separated mehrya romance and kabir entence into two parts ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
For beautiful update ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Continue soon ami ๐Ÿ˜‰
And don't forget I'm in bombers gang and I'm not stopping bugging you๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
I know u have holidays now so update next one asap ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Edited by Nandu0123 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Well written Ami..โญ๏ธ.
Shaurya is madly in love with her
but at the same time tryig to control her life๐Ÿ˜›
which MS isn't liking๐Ÿ˜†
It's really hard to handle someone like shaurya khanna ..๐Ÿ˜ณ
Hope you get lot's of free time soon ...so that we get long chapters ๐Ÿ˜›
if possible make that rig part as kabir's dream ๐Ÿ˜ก

continue soon ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Edited by Shamrouz - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks Ami for this update.๐Ÿ˜› It was short but nice. In this chapter we can see how both of them came to know each other and MS started to accept him as her future husband. SK also expressed his love completely towards her. The relationship has grown. But it will be interesting to know how SK will react to Kabir proposal and ring ceremony with MS. He had been not even able tolerate a friend who was just talked with her then how will he react๐Ÿ˜† to this life threatening situation.
Continue soon. ๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Manjulaiju

Thanks Ami for this update.๐Ÿ˜› It was short but nice. In this chapter we can see how both of them came to know each other and MS started to accept him as her future husband. SK also expressed his love completely towards her. The relationship has grown. But it will be interesting to know how SK will react to Kabir proposal and ring ceremony with MS. He had been not even able tolerate a friend who was just talked with her then how will he react๐Ÿ˜† to this life threatening situation.

Continue soon. ๐Ÿ˜›


@Manjulaiju...thankyuu so much dear...yeah Mehrya relationship is growing...they are so in love...but yep Kabir can stir up other emotions...the insecurities...the complexities etc...let's see what's happening when they both meet...you are right SK don't even want a male to look at her let alone talk to her...he'll burn badly when he comes to know about kabir...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb Update Ami..
Beautifully written..

Bhai tu kitna utabla hei ๐Ÿ˜†

Mehrya ..cutie pie ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Ami..kya tum please Kabir ka patta cut nehi kar sakti ๐Ÿ˜”
Yah phir uska scene kam kardo ๐Ÿ˜•

Aab aage kya kya hoga??Bhai ke upar Mount Everest gir jayega jab ussey Kabir ka pata lagega ๐Ÿ˜†

Waiting for the next update..please continue soon ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 8 years ago
Great update Ami ! Shourya is really possessive of Mehek and a bit insecure. He drove Mehek crazy when he threatened her friend just because she laughed with him and was funny when he said he would love for her to howl at each girl that ever flirts with him.Really sweet chapter finally Mehek is showing her love for Shourya and he is insanely in love with her . Will be really interesting to see his reaction to Kabirs shocking ambush of a proposal .Can't wait to read what happens next thanks so much for updateing Ami ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Originally posted by: Heli84

Superb Update Ami..

Beautifully written..

Bhai tu kitna utabla hei ๐Ÿ˜†

Mehrya ..cutie pie ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Ami..kya tum please Kabir ka patta cut nehi kar sakti ๐Ÿ˜”
Yah phir uska scene kam kardo ๐Ÿ˜•

Aab aage kya kya hoga??Bhai ke upar Mount Everest gir jayega jab ussey Kabir ka pata lagega ๐Ÿ˜†

Waiting for the next update..please continue soon ๐Ÿ˜Š



@Heli...Thankyuu so much...
Mehrya are so in luv here...Well Kabir is another main chara here. Actually I was about to bring him to be there in the Dehradun trip ...but that would have complicated things ...so let see what's in the store...
Whatever Kabir is planning...SK is not at all gonna lyk it
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Heli84

Superb Update Ami..

Beautifully written..

Bhai tu kitna utabla hei ๐Ÿ˜†

Mehrya ..cutie pie ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Ami..kya tum please Kabir ka patta cut nehi kar sakti ๐Ÿ˜”
Yah phir uska scene kam kardo ๐Ÿ˜•

Aab aage kya kya hoga??Bhai ke upar Mount Everest gir jayega jab ussey Kabir ka pata lagega ๐Ÿ˜†

Waiting for the next update..please continue soon ๐Ÿ˜Š

@Heli...Thankyuu so much...
Mehrya is so in luv here...Kabir is gonna be there in the next chapters ...whatever he is gonna do...SK is not gonna lyk it ...so lessee what's in the store for us...lol...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Houstonmom

Great update Ami ! Shourya is really possessive of Mehek and a bit insecure. He drove Mehek crazy when he threatened her friend just because she laughed with him and was funny when he said he would love for her to howl at each girl that ever flirts with him.Really sweet chapter finally Mehek is showing her love for Shourya and he is insanely in love with her . Will be really interesting to see his reaction to Kabirs shocking ambush of a proposal .Can't wait to read what happens next thanks so much for updateing Ami ๐Ÿ˜Š


@Houstonmom...Thankyuu so much yaar...this means a lot...
Shaurya is extremely possessive here..so his face off with Kabir is not at all gonna be smooth...Shaurya is crazy abt her and Kabir is no less...but yet to know what's he gonna do when he finds out that Mehek is totally in luv with Shaurya...so let see Shaurya's shady character gonna be a problem for Mehek or hw is she gonna handle him...lol
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Houstonmom

Great update Ami ! Shourya is really possessive of Mehek and a bit insecure. He drove Mehek crazy when he threatened her friend just because she laughed with him and was funny when he said he would love for her to howl at each girl that ever flirts with him.Really sweet chapter finally Mehek is showing her love for Shourya and he is insanely in love with her . Will be really interesting to see his reaction to Kabirs shocking ambush of a proposal .Can't wait to read what happens next thanks so much for updateing Ami ๐Ÿ˜Š


@Houstonmom...Thankyuu so much...this means a lot...
Shaurya is extremely possessive about Mehek in this and so his face off with Kabir is not at all gonna be smooth. Shaurya is crazy abt her and Kabir is no less...but what's Kabir gonna do when he comes to know that Mehek is totally in luv with SK...and moreover how is Mehek gonna handle her caveman...lol

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