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Posted: 18 years ago
im sosososososososososososososososososososososososososo
sorryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy i will update tonite 4sure
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Posted: 18 years ago
NEW PART 29
(thy gang throw party for kirti n shubhanker n sapna found out abt kirti n shubhanker marriage )

NEXT DAY
(angad was planning n grand bachelors party n didnt want the girls to find abt this party but is tht possiable i dont think so
when angad was telling atul his plan ,,,angi was in changeing rooom listening it .....later she told her plan to rids n
n sapna n they deside to drop on boys party uninvited .......)

AT NIGHT IN ANGAD'S HOUSE
(they party was so grand alll the guys were wearing black cloths n looking hot!! ....the setup was like a disco type n
there was a huge bar in corner n all the boys were drinking n enjoying .unaware tht girls were watching them )

(soon lights went off then a spot light went on a girl who was standing on stage n few more girl came from behind her
n tht girl was non other then SIMRAN she was wear small cloths tht dancers wear )

Pankhudiya Yeh Gulab Ki Si Hai
Haaye
Mastiyaan Yeh Sharaab Ki Si Hai )… (2)

Log Meri Aada Pe Marte Hain
Jaan Mujhpe Nisar Karte Hain

(she came n start dancing with angad)

To Aaja… (2)
To Aaja Saath Jee Le
Honth Rasile Tere Honth Rasile
Hothh Rasile Tere Honth Rasile
Dil Kehta Hai Mera Yeh Ras Pe Le
Hothh Rasile Tere

Wah Wah Wah Kya Sawaad Loot Gaye Re Dil Ke Nawaab

Lajawab

(she danced n flired with the boys also while danceing )


Tera Jalwa Bala Ka Hai Jalwa
Meri Adayein Sab Se Nirali
Dil Ko Hila Ke Rakne Wali
Deewane Hai Tere Sare Chail Chabile

( Honth Rasile Tere
Honth Rasile Tere Hothh Rasile )… (2)

Dil Kehta Hai Yeh Ras Pe Le
Hothh Rasile Tere
Honth Rasile Tere Hothh Rasile

Meri Baaton Mein Phool Jhadtein Hain
Dil Mere Ishq Mein Bigate Hain


(she was danceing with armaan n flirting also armi just stood there n rids who was watching hit felt like knocking tht girl down)


Teri Chahat Mein Jo Machlete Hain
Ban Ke Parwane Wohi Jalte Hain

Mein Hoon Bijuriya Baki Bijuriya
Kisse Milau Katil Nazariya
Jo Teri Chahat Ki Chahat Mein

(the way tht girl was flirting n touching armaan made rids made n she sew a box of wines next to her ..she
took it out n start drinking in order to cool her self down ..then angi who was hidding next to her sew this)

angi:rids wht r doin
rid:n.n.nothing di (drunk)
angi:rids this is wine
rid:n tht is armaan ....my armaan
angi:i know but
rid:no if no but just ...just ..just whtevr ..im not gone leave him (she tried to get up but angi somehow manged to make her sit)

rid;di let me go
angi:no rids (rids sew tht girl was cameing close to armi)diii angad is gone kiss her (she knew this would make angi leave her)

angi:WHAT (angi got up n sew tht angad was not kissing her n she felt very uncomfortable becaouse everyone was looking
at her ...angi turned around to look at rids but she was not there )

angad:angi n sapna wht r u doin here
angi:umm actully wo kya howa ka (then angi told them everything )
armi:angi ....where is riddima
angi:OMG she drunk .where she could have gone
armi:wht..camon we have to find her

angad:gud job angi
angi:shut i will fix u later for this party first we have to find rids

(all of them went looking 4 rids angad n angi ,atul n sapna n armaan went different ways looking for rids )

(armaan was walking on road looking for rids when he noticed a road show happening nearby he went there n saw rids there danceing with few ppl)

armi:riddima wht the hell r u doin
rid:wht if u can i can dance also
(She was fooling around and the guys messed around with her.
Armaaan pushed through the crowd and grabbed her away but she shook his hand away and went back to dancing
this time Armaan literally dragged her away. )

armi:pata nahi yeh angi kaha rehgayee (then he saw rids slipping away again) Hey ruko!

He rushed after her.

rids: (peeking from behind a bush) Armaaaaaaaaaaan

armi : waha kya karahee ho? jaldi se yaha aajao warna...
rid: pakar sakte ho to pakarlo

She runs away from there and Armaan tries to obstruct her but she escapes by ducking under him.
It happens quick so he doesn't get time to stop her.

armi: God! yeh larki mujhe paagal kardegee
rids;armaaaaaaan
armi:riddima roko

(Both of them continue the cat and mouse game for a while,
when both of them end up at a booth, which makes them stop.
rids stops because she's in wonders after seeing the sign and
Armaan stops because finally he caught her. )

armi:bohat hogaya riddima.Ab chalo (grabs her hand)

rid:ha chalo (she's delusional and begins walking towards
the booth rather than with Angad. She manages to pull him with her)

armi:yaha nahi

(riddima drages armi back to tht roadshow n got on the stage n took the mic )
rid:hello
Commentator: Hey ladies and gentlemen I think we've got a new entry
rid:hheehe
commentro:Yeh bataye ke aap log yaha kis liye aaye?
armi:woo hum
rid:pushed him aside and took the mike) Wo kya hai ke hum yaha celebrate karne aaye hai
Commentator: Really? kya

rid: actually me kuch aap logo ke saat share karna chahtee hu
(armi got worry not knowing wht will rids do )
rid:ab hum dono Armaan or riddima nahi rahe balke...

(Armaan pinched rids to be quiet but she ignored it and kept smiling like a clown.)
rids:balke ab hum Mr. and Mrs. dumbledore hogaye hai
com:dum wht???
rid:Yes. hum dono ne shaadi karli. And here's my shweetie hubby (pulled his cheeks ) Mr Dumbledore.
(laughed like a crack head)

commentor:Well guys here's the newly wedded couple Mr. and Mrs. Dum... what was it? oh yes Mr and Mrs. Dumbledore

(Everyone cheeered and applauded as an embarrassed
Armaan dragged an over excited rids off the stage before she
showed herself up even further. He couldn't belive she did tht)


(Once they were out again, he held his head with frustration
and sat down on a step, whilst ridds kept twirling around in circles.)

(She looked innocent and her face was sparkling. she looked like a fairy who was
dancing around in her fairy dust. He was so mesmerized by looking at her that he never
realised rids coming towards him.)

rids:Armaaaaaaaaaaaaan ((she sprinkled water over him)
armi:(startled) riddima! (got up to chase her)


(She began running away and escaped him many times when he grabbed her hand and twisted
it behind her. Then he brought her closer to him and then the laughter finished when they
had become really close. Both stared into each other's eyes. Both had mutual feelings about wanting
to melt into each other's arms but there was a part of them which told them to maintain the distance.)

(Soon rids again got out of his grip and ran away, feeling shy )

armi:riddima roko
rid: he, he, pakar sako to pakro
armi:Dekho agar tum nahi aaohgee to me jaaraha hu
rid:acha? mujhe chore ke chale jaohge?
arni:Ab tum aana hee nahi chahtee to...
rid:theek hai
armi: Me mazaak nahi karaha hu
rid:jese tumharee marzi

( pretends to turn around and leave when he sensed rids coming behind him.)
rid:armaaaan apna haath do

(He smiled and turned around to put his hand out. As soon as
he did that she clicked a pair of handcuffs on him with one side on her hand)

armi:yeh kya kiya?
rid;tum mujhe chore ke kahi nahi jaa sakte
armi:riddima tum
rid:heheh armaan wo mari line hay hahahhahahaha

angi:Oh thank god! Armaan tumhe riddima milgayee. Itnee dair kaha the tum log?
rids: Hey diii (drooling over Armaan ) Tum mere pati se milee?
angi:wht ..rids came to me abhi armaan ko tumhare pati baney may time ha

rids:Here meet my husband my shweetie muchy Mr. Dumbledore.
angi,angad,atul,sapna:DUMBLEDORE??????(all of them stard laughing seeing them laugh rids also start laughing n armi felt like
the floor to open n suck him in )

angad:ok bas guys but iska kya (he said pointing towards handcuffs )
arni:ise baad me dekhenge, filhaal meree madad karo

(thy finaly manage to drag rids back to angad house )

rid:lalallalllalm armaan (huging his from his neck he felt gud rids being close to him but she was drunk )

angi;chalo rids mujhe chaabhi dedo

rid:Kounsee chabhi?
armi:In handcuffs kee. Come on now be a good girl
rid: chaabhi chaheeye? (shows him the key)
armi:ha (attempts to grab it)
rid;chaabhi chaheeye? (still playing around with it)
armi:riddima camon
rid:Theek hai yeh lo (throws it in the fountain)
angi:riddy yeh kya kiya
rid:hhehehehe
angad:wht r we gone do now ..rids cant go home like this n we have to do somthing abt these handcuffs
angi:ok i willl call dad n we staying at sapna house n we all can stay her tonite n tom we will do somthing abt the cuffs
angad:gud idea..camon let go our future bedrooom
angi:angad!!!!cant u ever stop ur flirting
angad:ok ...armaan u can take rids to my room n me n atul will manage here sapna n angi n take the guest room

armi:yaar me n rids in one rooom
angad:wht can we do u both r handcuffed together n dont act i know tumare dil may laddo phoot rahe ha

angi:helllo both of u should behave up there u guys r not married yet
angad:cameon they r gone jet married in a week
angi:shut up angad this is alll becouse of u
angad:me oh really i didnt ask u to spy on us (armi got bored of there fights n went upstires )

(armi carried rids to the room n rids was still messing around with his hair n shirt n he put he gently on the bed)

armi:ok riddma gud nite go to sleep
rid:where ru goin armaan
armi:im here just go toslep
rid:no u also sleep here (then she pulled him down n rolled on top of him )
armi:r.r.ridima yeh k.kya karahi ho
rid:tumse pyar (she start kissing his neck to his face )
armi:r.riddima (he just wanted to hold her n make her his but they were not married plus she was drunk )
(riddma was abt to kiss his lip but she passedout n felled asleeep ..armi got up n look at her ..armi hair n shirt
messed ...he shaked rids abit)

armi:riddima ..riddima soogi kya ....abhi hi sona tha hello u there (then he also fell asleep )

ok guys im really really really really reallu realy really really really really really reallu realy sorryyyyyyyyyyyy i know its has been hell long when i llast update but im really sorry
plz comment 😳


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Posted: 18 years ago
yippe.... [:D/]
awsum part...
ridz drunk... 😆 😆
nd wen armaan said (riddhima riddhima so agyi kya... abhi he sona tha hello u there)
2 funny...
😆 😆
just gr8.. 😳
luv ur ff... 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey
lovely and so funny Mr Dumbledore. that was really funny name i wanted riddz to be awake at night
but plz continue really soon
swansea
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Posted: 18 years ago
hi hun it ws an awesum part em dyin 2 read d next part
pls update d next part asap

luv sonia
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey.awesome part, just loved it. do update soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
OK DAT WAS HILRIOUS! 😆 bt i i loved it! thank u sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much 4 d pm maha di!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😃 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
it was great.

do con't soon.

you do not have to say sorry to us.
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Posted: 18 years ago
It was great
please continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
maha u r da best it was an amazin part asusal but dis tym plzz continue soon n dont keep us w8in plzzz 👏

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