NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 34~Chapter 39(2 PARTS)SEP 17th - Page 110

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Posted: 8 years ago

Sandhipuja in Sovabajar Rajbari!!
Edited by lghosh - 8 years ago
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Anindita made this plate ready specially for KS! Not even I partook a spoon of it, her precise instructions, it should be served to him and only to him! KS loved it Anindita!! He will send you a bouquet of 'adaabs'! 😆 By the way, I was eyeing the chutney!! 😉😃 Looks Khatta meetha, just like me! 🤣
Cauliflower Khichudi, Eggplant and potato fries and chutney!! 😛



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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: neepobithi



Azeez as Little Red Riding Hood 🤣🤣
But Lashy don't you think "crossing through the peanut farm" sounds even better?



Author Sahiba, First of all whenever you say basket and Azeez together in the same sentence you should know what risk you are taking and who should be added to the sentence unless you mean the big bad wolf as you know who!! 😉🤣 I am sure it is not so!! So change your storyline, please!! And today is MahaNavami, the inauguration of the reconstructed basket is to be performed 'dhoom-dham aur zor-shor se'!! Boyhood was counting every moment of this with bated breath! 😉😆

And Anindita if Red Riding BoyHood crossed the peanut farm the welcome would have been very different from a big bad meanie wolf!! 😉🤣 Little Red Riding BoyHood would have permanently opted to stay on the farm! 😆 Can't do that to his GirlHood Begum Sahiba!! 😉🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
Good morning baisas and subho navmi😊
Happy Sarswati puja😛
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali




Chapter 39.


Archer


The Story goes...

What a fantastic chapter
Served to us on a platter
Making us wonder how the author has managed
To have all the best inputs so arranged..
The chapter has all the qualities of a rhapsody
Well tuned like an orchestrated melody
It reaches the crescendo with the surprise she throws
About the mysterious owner of the grey arrows..

She goes to pay homage to her jiji at the temple
But is slandered by the priests who call themselves noble
She leaves the place with a heavy heart
Unaware of him watching her from the very start
She stops near the arena, where the kunwar appears
Throwing a challenge to him for a fight with swords and spears
In addition to the ill treatment she faced earlier badly
The prince later mocks at her so very cowardly..

To her utter surprise he carefully avoids
Kunwar's challenges with the spears and also the swords
He decides finally to 'play' with the archery
Deliberately loses to the man noted for his treachery
Though the prince gloats over his victory with splendor
He still isn't happy that it is not over a tough contender
She frets over the results seeing him defeated in the game
Similarly we, like her, do wish the same.

Thereafter the story describes her emotions
In such beautiful words that deserve our admiration..
They have to share the bed in the make shift room designed
She is restless with unanswered questions looming in her mind
And expects him to come and join her any moment,
But with the mixed feelings she tries to overcome.
She slowly gets into conversation with him at ease
Asking him about the reason avoiding fight with the prince.

What an intimate dialogue between the two in the night's silence!
He says, "...you think I'd stand back and watch in silence
While another man ill-treated the lady I'd sworn to care for ever?"
She in turn, " ..it gave me no pleasure watching you lose to that man!." .Never!
The rest of the passage is a testimony of the author's skill
In painting the picture of the delightful two with an artist's quill!
Next day dawns with a shocking surprise in the Archery arena
Four grey arrows have found their mark in style like a ballerina!

What a suspense filled end the chapter gives us
But those who know him can very well guess
Inspired by her "It gave me no pleasure in watching you lose.."
He ventured out in the dark just to make her amused.
The chapter shows the couple , with each other's help
Understand each other and take their first step
The chapter is like a feast served with grandeur
Hope the upcoming chapters will also be the same for sure!


Karkuzhali.

,


All the Sahibas swooning to the 'Hmmm' of rich baritone,
Each Chapter AMK has outdone himself and outshone,
Heera merging as intelligent as ever, with her maturity,
getting comfy and chatty with her husband in security!
The author has painted her magnum opus in colorful magic,
The readers are hooked forever be it romance or be it tragic!
This is the book of the future for all as a good read,
In the market of Historical Romance, it will always lead!
Aunty pens her 'Story Goes' with her rhyming Magical Touch,
Each chapter, the Readers, devour both and relish this as much!


Aunty what a fantastic "Story goes..."!! 👏 At par excellence, as usual! 😃 Loved it!
Edited by lghosh - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Totally agree. HBAS needs to be published and a movie would justify to the world the euphoria that we felt as long as it's made in the same written spirit with no changes. Lashy your sweat & toil should not just remain in this forum hidden away. BTW Surya was my pick for AMK for the movie.
Naam petra inbam indha vaiyakamum perattum !
( let the world receive the same happiness we did)


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lghosh

Anindita made this plate ready specially for KS! Not even I partook a spoon of it, her precise instructions, it should be served to him and only to him! KS loved it Anindita!! He will send you a bouquet of 'adaabs'! 😆 By the way, I was eyeing the chutney!! 😉😃 Looks Khatta meetha, just like me! 🤣

Cauliflower Khichudi, Eggplant and potato fries and chutney!! 😛




😆

Looks so yummy and delicious 😛 Anindita. ..

Sandhipuja pictures are wonderful lana di
Thank you for sharing 🤗

Mitu di 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lana di some pics r not visible...
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Originally posted by: lghosh

Anindita made this plate ready specially for KS! Not even I partook a spoon of it, her precise instructions, it should be served to him and only to him! KS loved it Anindita!! He will send you a bouquet of 'adaabs'! 😆 By the way, I was eyeing the chutney!! 😉😃 Looks Khatta meetha, just like me! 🤣

Cauliflower Khichudi, Eggplant and potato fries and chutney!! 😛




Yum yum...❤️

Happy navmi to all .
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy


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Apaaa now I feel like I've finished eating my feast!


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