Fan fiction for the week 12th-19th sep - Page 167

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Kahanii Sujal aur Kashish kiiii....(Part 18)

Recap: Kashish comes to know about the truth and rushes to the hospital and hurts herself badly

Veena encounters Kashish and runs towards her..

Veena: Kashish!! Kashish!! Kya hua?? Doctor... Nurse... Jaldi se aao.. Hey Bhagwaan ye sab kya hota jaa raha hai??

When Tushaar hears Veena calling Kashish -- he realises that he only told Kashish about Sujal's death..

Kashish: Aunty Sujal Suj.. ko k..k..kya k..k..kaise?? aap.. m..mujh.. n..n..nn..ahi bataya..

Isse pehle ki Veena kuch keh paati Kashish behosh ho jaaati hai..

The doctor takes kashish to the hospital room and provides her with the reqd medication..

Veena (thinking): Kashish ko kisne bataya?? maine to nahi.. unhone ne bhi nahi bataya hoga..

Tushaar comes..

Tusshar: Aunty wo mera paas Sujal ka phone..

Veena looks at the phone..

Tusshar: Kashish ka phone aaya tha..

Veena: Kab?

Tusshar: abhi kuch der pehle.. maine hi usse sab kuch bataya tha sujal ke.... (he could not speak and swallows)

Veena: Kya tum nahi jaante ki Kashish hi wo ladki hai jisse Sujal ki engagement hone waali thi??

Tusshar: Kyaa??

Veena: Tumhari koi galti nahi hai beta.. Tum to iss bare me jaante hi nahi the..

Doctor comes out and Veena goes to talk to doctor about Kashish..

Tusshar feels himself responsible for everything that is happening to GAREWALS.. He leaves from there out of guilt..

CG comes and discovers about Kashish..

CG: Doctor kya hua kashish ko? ab wo theek to hai na?

Doctor: Yes she is absolutely fine.. Out of shock she got unconcious.. Now she is fine.. But u have to take good care of her..

Veena n Cg r very upset.........

Veena: Ye sab kya ho gaya... abhi kuch hi der pehle itne khushiyan thi hamare paas aur ab mille to itne saare gumm...

she cries..

then Kahish shouts SUJALLLLLLLLL..............

Veena, CG, Rishi on hearing this runs in to see KASHISH..

Kashish: Auntyyy... Mujhe sujal se milna hai...

Veena: Chalo...

Kashish enters the place where sujal's body is lying and rajeev is sitting!!

Kashish walks towards Sujal.. Rajeev is watching her come towards Sujal..

Kashish makes a very sad face taking her chin downwards and she screams SUJALLLLLLLLL.......... Veena tries to control Kashish..
While Veena is trying to control her she looks at Rajeev n then at Veena in confusion..

Veena: Beta yee sujal ka bhai hai..

Kashish is shocked..

CG goes to the doctor and asks when they could take Sujal home? The doctor says that they can take him home..

CG MAKES A CALL THEN.. ITS Mr.Sinha

CG: Sinha saab..

Mr.Sinha: Arre CG kya hua?? Itni raat gaye phone.. Sab theek to hai na!!

CG (eyes filles with tears): Sinha jii wo Sujal.. Sujal ab hamare beech nahi raha..

Mr.Sinha: What??????? parr ye sab kab hua aur kaise?? aur kashish usse usse pata hai?????

CG: Haan Kashish bete ko sab pata chal gaya hai.. Wo yahin par hai..

Mr.Sinha: Wo theek to hai na!!

CG: Jiii wo bilkul theek hai..

Mr.Sinha comes to the hospital and is very much worried for Kashish.. He finds Kashish sitting there and crying and then he enters in to the hosp room..

Mr.Sinha: Kashish....

Kashish looks up..

Kashish: dad.... she runs and hugs him..
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Dad sujall..... dad mere saath aisa kyun hua dad.. ab main kaise rahoongi.. sujal meri zindagi tha dad..

Nahi KASHISH aise himmat nahi haarte bache.. Tu to mera bahadur bacha hai na.. Sab theek ho jayega..

While Mr.Sinha says this Kashish hugs him more
tightly and cries a lot..

Kashish betaa.. Kashish.. Kashishh ... Kashishhhhhhhhhhh.. Chup.. Ek dum chup.. Chup.. Bas .. bas ab aur nahi rona bache..

Rajeev is watching Kashish cry..

Mr.Sinha: Kashish beta aap yahi ruko main abhi aata hoon ok?

Kashish: hmmmmmm

Kashish turns back n goes n sits near sujal.. N starts to cry..

Rajeev is very uncomfortable seeing Kashish crying

Rajeev: Kashish.. sab theek ho jayega.. ab aap is tarah roengi to meri mumma ko bahut dukh hoga..

Kashish: Haan shayad tum theek keh rahe.. Aunty vaise hi bahut pareshaan hain aur main nahi chahti ki meri wajah se unki pareshaniyan aur badh jayein..

Rajeev just keeps on looking at her while she speaks..

Then Kashish starts getting kind of head ache..

Kashish: ohhh godd...

Rajeev: Kashish ... Kashish ...

Kashish: Achanak se bahut tez sar me dard ho raha..

Rajeev: Kashish app yehi ruko main abhi doctor ko bulake laata hoon..

The doctor comes n then he asks Rajeev to get this medicine..

Rajeev brings the medicine..

Kashish is fine now..

Kashish: Thanks

Rajeev: No problem Kashish.. Thats perfectly ok with me..

Kashish: Aunty, Uncle aur Dad kahan hain?? Wo bahar kuch formalities puri kar rahe hain.. Abhi aate hi honge..

Veena comes..

Veena: Kashish beta hum abhi sujal ko ghar leke jayenge..

Kashish feels a bit sad..

Veena: Beta tum ghar chalo .. hum sab wahan thodi der me pahunch jayenge ..

Kashish: Nahi aunty mujhe bhi yahan ..

Veena: Nahi Kashish .. Tum jao .. Tumhari tabiyat bhi theek nahi hai .. Rajeev Kashish ko ghar leke chalo .. Hum aadhe ghante me pahunch jayenge ..

Rajeev: Jee mumma..

Rajeev: Chale Kashish..

Kashish (looks at Rajeev): Chalo..

Rajeev takes Kashish to his car.. They take their seats n then Rajeev starts to drive ..

Kashish is thinking of the moments she spend with Sujal while Rajeev is looking at her again n again..

Kashish thinks of the time when Sujal proposed her.. While thinking of that moments she wipes her tears..

Rajeev is also thinking of his moments with Sujal.. He thinks of the time of papers when Sujal used to be very well prepared for the exams and used to teach him so that he could also score well..

Then the car stops.. Rajeev has reached his home..
(Its sujal's house cuz veena n all will bring sujal's body naa )

Kashish is lost in her thoughts..

Rajeev: Kashish chalein??

Kashish: haaaan.. haan chalo..

When Kashish enters the house it reminds her of the time when her engagements with Sujal was fixed..

Similarly Rajeev also thinks of the time when he n sujal used to fight in the lobey..

hope u liked the part plz comments

Originally posted by: rajeevAC

hey kiran....thats da spirit!!👏 😆

yeh tou mere khilaaf sazish chal rahe hai😡😆

thanx 4 ur coments liking the twist in da story 😊

Kashish rox the part was very gud

rajeev1 abb yeh larkiii kahan sayy aagyii plz jaldiii say iss koo bahir nikalooo

all other stories r really gud plz contiue soon

Originally posted by: ambarinaaltaf

yaar ac i have made some aunties,chachies, daddies i have lfr as chacha alsi😉

samrene aunty😆

farha daddi

natz chachi

dina aunty

pinku chachi

juhi aunty

farhina di

kiran (kiran ko kiran hee kehthe hai warna yeh mujhe nahiin chordegi)😆

amna chachi

pari dadi ma

lfr chacha

naina dadi

those who r left tell me unka bhi kaam thamaam kardogi😉

chalo yaar aunty dadi se tou behter hai😆 aunty is okay fer me😆

Originally posted by: ambarinaaltaf

arre rajeev ac agar samrene aunty ne dekha tho bahut maaregi 😆

buss bachooo dekh liya tume maine😆

Originally posted by: rajeevAC

samrene aunty jii mere intensions theek hi hain.....aap tension mat lo 😆 & maine suna aap lullu (dadi) ke saath unite ho rahi ho??go on 😆

aur haan 1 public announcement bhi karni hai----
jise apni story pe comments na milne ki shikayat ho wo samrene aunty ko maare 😆 coz she is the Master-mind behind da trp thingi(hai na samrenety)----theek hai KIRAN 😃

lullu dadi....now i'll ask samrene 4 trp chart
& us girly pe reham karo kyun bechari ka katal karwane pe tuli ho...... ambarina ko jail bhejna hai kya?? 😆

vivvoooo......kya yaar 1 hi scene??aur likho.....m starving 😆

kash_sujaalllll......jaise tushar change kiya hai waise story change nahi kar sakti thi 😉 😉 chalo interestin part likho jaldi
& temme ur name

omg!!!!! tum log kahin mujay kekta tou nahe samajh rahe jo itni dushmani nikal rahe ho😆

Originally posted by: rmanu7382

So sab ka naamkaran ho chuka hai .....
good maza aaya ....
haan saare ke saare mujh se chote hain ....kya karoon ....

tum par-dadi ban jao😆

Originally posted by: rmanu7382

aab jaldi se mujhe comment chahiye 😊
all of u plz continue ur stories....
Kiran ...sachi main ur so young and u have such a sharp mind that u can even leave mai's creative heads behind !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😊
Wishing all of u Good luck ....
dear Bachoon ........... 😉
wasie sab ki umr kya hai ....hey hey .....aunties....chahcies...dadies......hey hey ......

im only a young sweet sixteen aunty😆

Originally posted by: rajeev1

samrene....bus bahut huwa ac aur ambrina ki hukumat.....ao in bachiyon ko sikhayein keh hum kaun hain......inko pitayi ki zaroorat hai.....to aaj se AUNTY team ek taraf aur bacha party ek taraf........ho jaye muqabala......huhuhahahahaha 😛 😆 😆



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haan haan akhir inhe bhi tou pata chale ke aunty power kia hota hai😆