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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#121

thanks 4 da pm n amazing update! superbly written! Brij takes care of Maan! Maan cannot fprget the past! Brij tells Maan 2 move on which seems impossible! Maan doesn't let Geet enter the class as she is late! Geet upset n cribs! Maan hears her talks n feels guilty! Geet wasn't at fault as she was stopped by the seniors! update soon

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@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#122

because of Dev Maan again scolded Geet for coning late in class and he told her to get out of class...

she is crying...Geet's every word reminds him of Rythm...

good update...

thanx for pm...

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Risingsun626

@Risingsun626

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#123

Thanks for pm. Painful but beautiful update. The bonding of maan n brij sets high goals for friendship. How much friends do care n can relate with ours pain, all showed here in friendship of maan n brij.

Geet nature n behaviour resemble to rythm n whenever she come in front of maan, she reminds him of rythm. Looks like brij somewhere knew it thats why he is so protective for her.

Dev entry as assumed is not pleasant n create misunderstanding between maaneet. At this point again maan lost in memory of rythm.

its very sad to watch maan in so much pain n depression.hope he will get some happy moments to cherish before he die.

Waiting for next.

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: Jade0001
This is so unfair you send me a PM for part 2
but I never received one for Part 1 or Prologue
I'm bookmarking this thread and will read it from start over the weekend

I am sorry you are not in my buddy list. I once send you the req you didn't accepted back then and I cancelled it. So, you don't get pm of my work. But i have started a moment to self advertise my work lol😃... Whenever I post a update of my work I send the similar pm to the member who are not in my frn list and I saw your name and I send it to you.

I will be glad to hear your review on this fan fiction of mine.

With Regards

Ila

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Aarathi krishnan

@Aarathi85

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#125

Beautuful update...so nice narration...keep it up...waiting for next one

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Nefret19

@Nefret19

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#126

Its a beautiful update dear. The bond between Brij & Maan is so blessed. Its rare to find such genuine friends who will care for you so sincerely and do anything for in all circumstances. I am now super curous about Rythmn and how come Geet resembles her? What is the story of Rythmn and Geet? Rythmn is not related to Brij? But Geet is...then how come the resemblance? What happened to Rythmn? I feel very sad for Maan...

And I feel even more sad for Geet. I know she wants to be independent but she should tell her brothers about what is happening in college. About the ragging and all. And that idiotic Monika & Dev! I feeli like cutting them into tiny pieces...I hate ragging yaar...So whoever it is who does that I will hate them to the core...So sorry dear...And poor Geet got again scolded by Maan and was asked to leave class. Why should she suffer for those idiots mistake. I hope Maan talks with Geet and finds out what is happening with her na. So that he can help her. If not what will those idiots Monika and Dev do with her? Or other seniors...Gosh! And I also hope Geet tells her family about this and they also do something about it. Hating that Dev, Monika & seniors. And I am scared for Geet. I do hope that Maan protects her in all instances. Pls pls pls...

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umaa

@uluvmg

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#127

wonderful update...maan woke up but felt sad to see his friend was to help him... maan was only remembering rhytm's words but not remembering geet ...sad that geet was again ragging by dev to bring coffee for him for which she was late & was punished by her prof.maan... but when maan was listening geet's blabbering he again remembered rhytm's word about to listen people & then react... hope he should started to understand people specially geet so geet might have someone's support & geet should told about so called raggers to maan & or her bro... nice topic regarding ragging in colleges...excited for next...thanks for pm...!!

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Shaun

@Jade0001

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: IlaTanwar

I am sorry you are not in my buddy list. I once send you the req you didn't accepted back then and I cancelled it. So, you don't get pm of my work. But i have started a moment to self advertise my work lol😃... Whenever I post a update of my work I send the similar pm to the member who are not in my frn list and I saw your name and I send it to you.

I will be glad to hear your review on this fan fiction of mine.

With Regards
Ila