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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: manesha1997
Superb dear.
Plz translate hindi words to english next time.
Thanks for the pm.

OK I will give the translation from next time,thank you for the comment dear

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: labi
This is really beautiful and emotional story.Really loved it.
Two individuals irrespective of class differences became friends and later fell in love, but weren't able to confess their feelings because of life's cruel ways.
Life is too short.I am glad that Khushi left her diary for Arnav where she penned down her feelings and imaginations.At least he came to know she too loved him.
His favourite lines from her poetry showed how he changed her perception of life and filled it with love and how she yearns for that love because she knew that it won't reach its destination.Really heartbreaking! And his reply to her poetry showed his longing for her.

He fulfilled her last wish of publishing herpoetries and even made a hospital in her memory.Loved everything about this story.

PS - I think you have written this story for Dev and Sonakshi because I have read Dev's name in the story twice.Thank you for writing this with Arnav and Khushi.🤗

Aww Thank You so much dear for such a detailed comment🤗You explained my story very beautifully in short and I am glad that you liked it ❤️And Thank You for pointing out my blunder Lol

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: tina_1234
Nice shot

Thank you dear for the comment❤️

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: SpriyaS
Sad ending. Try to give english translation also.
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Thank You so much for your comment dear and from next time I will make sure to give English translations

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nisha_mehta

@nisha_mehta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Beautiful story...

Very well written.

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: nisha_mehta
Beautiful story...
Very well written.
Thank you for the pm

Thank you so much for the appreciation dear and I am glad that you liked it

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Nicky saluja

@Nickysweet

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Posted: 8 years ago

#47

it was wonderful story.. loved it.. but i dont like ending..i thought some miracle happened and khushi come nback.. its really sad ending and i dont like sad end