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neil got a call .
neil: kya?..konsa hospital?..i'm coming..
he said walking out of his cabin...
...he rushed to hospital..colllided with a staff member..
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Both neela ,avni ,nanno, ali were seated in there garden . avni came to neela's place for lunch.
Though dayawanti was behind the bars, she succeed in brainwashing amol against avni. Amol was blinded by his grandmom's words. He just wanted to take revenge from avni and neil.
When there were in garden avni walking back towards house when she heard neela scream her name..
Neela: AVNI..
She turned back .but neela pushed her and before avni could understand neela fell down and blood was oozing out..
Avni: MAAA...
Ali quickly turned to see who it was and saw aman speeding away in a car..
Ali: aman?
Avni looked at him..
Avni: ma..ma aakhnein kholo ..
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They rushed her to hospital..
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Neil: OT kaha hai?
Staff: uss taraf sir.
Neil ran in that direction ...and saw avni from back..she was standing in front of the OT...
Ali and nanno were seated ...ali was consoling nanno...neil went to avni and placed a hand on her shoulder...
Avni turned back...
She broke into tears..
Avni: neil..ma...ma..amam..ma..
Neil: shhh...ma theek hojayenge...
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Doctor came out .avni rushed towards the doctor first followed by neil
Avni: doc..woh theek hai na.?..ma theek ho jayenge na?
Doc: dhekiye ..bullet heart ki bahut nazdeek tha.. unki condition abhi bahut hi critical hai...abhi hum kuch nahi kehsakte...
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"AVNI...AVNI...bacha khaha ho...khana khalo..
Avni remembered neela running after her with blind fold on..playing in the garden...She remembered neela waking up all night long ..nursing her when she was suffering from high fever..those days when she had her board exams ...bringing her hot tea during nights when she was studying...she was there with her when she cried waking up after horrible nightmares...she took avni in her arms...and put her to sleep...
Her neela ma became her friend. She remembered how she fed her with her hands saying the stories with she knew aren't ture... toh issne bola Mr.red " ...neela stpped as avni cut her saying " ma ..mai 15 saal ki huto which neela replied " toh kahani toh kahani hai na?
She remembered how everytime she was upset how her neela ma tickled her ..made her laugh..
How her neela ma scolded her ...getting teary eyed and nursing the wound on her knee when she fell down while learning scooty...
"AVNI...dheere bacha chot lag jayegi..."
"avni...kya banau tumhare liye?..."
"ohoo..toh ye hai tumhara pehla crush avni?"
"avni...mirchi lagi kya?...pani lau?"
"avni..kaha ja rahi ho?.. maine kaha na...ye chapter hone tak tum kahi nahi jasakti..baito aur padho.."
"oho...meri beti sari mein kitni pyaari lag rahi hai...nazar na lage kisi ki"
she pushed her to save her...and got shot...
ma ..mai aapko nahi kho sakti ...meri ma ko ek aur bar nahi kho sakti...please mujeh chodke mat jao...' she thought..
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6 hrs later..
8:30PM...
Even shweta and prakash reached there...
Neil: avni
She looked up..
He offered a cup of coffee...
She nodded no..
Neil: please ..peelo..
He sat beside her and made her drink coffee...
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Avni: neel..
Neel turned towards her...she looked very serious..
Avni: mai tumse kuch maang sakti hu?
Neil kneeled down infront of her..
Avni: amol ko saza milni chahiye...
Neil cupped her face..he knew how broken she was right now...she called aman amol...that itself shows .
Avni:neil ..woh mujeh marna chahta tha..par ma ko...ma beech mein aagayi...aaj agar mai phir se meri ma ko kho ne ki stage mein hu...uss..uska zimedar sirf amol hai...sirf amol..
And more tears make their way down her cheeks..
Avni: nahi chahiye mujeh...aisa bhai..jo mujhse meri ma ko chenle...nahi chahiye mujeh
Neil hugged her..
Neil: avni...I promise u. ..amol ko uske kiye ka saza zaroor milega..
Avni: aur who bhi ma ko hosh aane se pehle..
Neil nodded ...placed a kiss on her forehead...told shweta to takecare of her..and left the place...
Edited by _SANJU - 9 years ago
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