Shivika SS: HOME || Sacred pg 9 15/7 *Buddy Me for PMs* - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
Awesome update.
Last line got my attention and I was laughing reading it.
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
hehe shivaay and OM shocked.
haha this is hilarious
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Last part was so funny but entertaing too😛😆
Amazing update😛
Waiting for the next😊
Edited by Akshitagaur18 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: KashiTessa

Awesome update.
Last line got my attention and I was laughing reading it.
Waiting for next update


😆 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
awesome story dear
loved itt soo much
thanks a lot for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Finally catched up with all of them... 😆
I realy love your writing style, just so lovely to read! 😳 Very clearly written. Also loving the concept of expressing their inner thoughts and POV individually and making it easier to read by changing their color... I have a keen eye for detail and all these things make me love a story more ⭐️😆
The kiss scene was amazing and so was Shivkara one... love how you connected it with that old IB episode, and Om's words came true ❤️
Another thing I super loved was this:


"I couldn't see me billu like this hurt and guilty. I couldn't see tears in his beautiful colour changing eyes. They were clear green now. Innocence."


The way his eyes color changes whenever he goes through a different emotion and she could sense it. 😳 Aww!

Really loving the story! Continue soonish dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: Aishuuu.

<font size="2">Finally catched up with all of them...😆
I realy love your writing style, just so lovely to read!😳Very clearly written. Also loving the concept of expressing their inner thoughts and POV individually and making it easier to read by changing their color... I have a keen eye for detail and all these things make me love a story more⭐️😆
The kiss scene was amazing and so was Shivkara one... love how you connected it with that old IB episode, and Om's words came true❤️
Another thing I super loved was this:</font>
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<font size="3">"I couldn't see me billu like this hurt and guilty. I couldn't see tears in his beautiful colour changing eyes. They were clear green now. Innocence."</font>

<font size="2">
The way his eyes color changes whenever he goes through a different emotion and she could sense it.😳Aww!

Really loving the story! Continue soonish dear</font></font>



I'm obsessed will billu boy and his eyes. Thank you so much for this long beautiful comment!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Lovely. ..loved them.
It's fun..the o bros snd o bahus.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
I read it for the first time. Brilliant storyline. Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Res for all the chapters Maria. 😳
Unresed. 😃
This story really is a stress buster! 😉 And the best part is NO REDEMPTION FOR PINKY. 😉 Yiiippiiieee!!! Shivika r not there in Oberoi Mansion anymore n Shivay also dropped Oberoi from his name now. Billu ji n Paanika r now living at their own new home n all the youngsters (Rikara n Rumya) r totally welcomed to stay there. 😃 Ani started her own restaurant with Shivay's help n Shivay started his own business. 😃 OmRu helped Shivika to settle all the things in their new home. Even Jhanvi n Daadi paid their visits to Shivika. 😃 So Shivay still now suffers from his heart ailment. 😭 And again now Ani missed her step down the stair n fell down n fractured her foot, n it scared Shivay so much that it almost gave him another heart attack! 😭 And now Rikara is there to help them. 😃 And finally Shivay realized that he loves Anika n confessed it to Om. [:D/] And at the end AniRi n ShivKara's scream! 😆 I wonder that ShivKara opened the door n saw the scene of Anika putting ointment at a towel clad Gauri's back, n they all screamed! 😆 Can't wait to read further. 😉 Plzz update soon n thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.
Edited by iam_aheli_98 - 9 years ago

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