Not all Roses Ss Sukor up pg54

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AISHA GUPTA

@-Euphemia-

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#91

aww..i felt for suraj and chakor both..I actually did..

the reason I enjoy this story is because characterisation is somewhat relatable

I can actually imagine chakor like that..

when you wrote the teenage version I actually imagined younger suraj...this was soo something he would do..

I hope this story is longer and we get some happy sukor moments as well...thanks for the fast update!!!

waitng...

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nemo316

@nemo316

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#92

Wow! amazing update.

Their conversation was so emotional. It's good that Chakor revealed her vulnerabilities, and that Suraj got to know how much she's been through all these years.

I felt sorry for Suraj today, he's realized his mistake and is feeling guilty, but there is little he can do to correct it. It's good that he's started to mend his relation with Baghya.

Avi and Suraj's scenes are so cute, I loved how he made her feel excited about the sangeet dress. He knows how to convince her of her mum's orders, he and Chakor compliment each other in parenting skills .

Eagerly waiting for the next update.

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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#93

Amazing update👏

Felt sad for chakor for she had to bear all alone😭

Loved suraj avya bond😊

Suraj is changing for better

waiting for next

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Sania_suraj

@Sania_suraj

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#94

Hi anjali

This part was awesone..

Luved suraj avi part..

So sad for chakor..suraj has to pay for his deeds..

Suraj scolds imli for avi was fabulous..

Waiting for ur next update..

Update soon..

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Riddhima

@Khushi_Dillse

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#95

Hey buddy...

First I must ask for apology from you... Coz Maine Pehla Kaise nahi padha...this is beautiful story... Love, attraction, guilt, hate, starnth everything in one story...I'll take one and half hours to read...i hate hate hate imli more than anything but I hate Suraj too what kind of man he is...first he slept with a girl and then she was pregnant he run away from his responsibility...for whom his so called love... Now he is in guilt...and ask for apology oohh come on...what a small word na kuch bhi Karo kaho and say sorryyy that's it...but he is genuinely asking for apology...

I love chakor here she is so strong personality...every girl wants like her...she is like Phoenix ries from the ashes bravo...her little angel avi is such darling...i love sukor scene and Suraj avi scene...bhagya and chakors friendship is so pure...no matter what bhagya always support her...

You are wonderful writer what I'm saying I love your writing...

Ajeeb galiyaan hai zindgi ke shehar ki...,

Jahaa se main roz guzarti hoon..!!

Ek taraf nafrat ke to ek taraf Mohobbat ke makaan hai...!!

Or sadak sach ki nazariyo ke khaddo se bhari hai...!!