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pri12

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Posted: 8 years ago

#321

Awsome Awsome...Loved the last line One all Mr Khanna 🤣

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Arisha

@lol_rofl

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#322

Hahaha their sweet revenge will never end.😆

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Nandhu_Arshi

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+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#323

I'm so in love with this!!

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Gurveen

@Gurveen

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#324

Amazing updates
Neil and Avni trying to settle the scores
Update soon

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shalu121

@shalu121

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#325

ur an amazing writer,,,

i am loving it
thank u for fast updte
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Zenab

@Duskyylilac

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#326

Oh God 🤣
Their revenge game is on and they are very cute
Neil was embarrassed and last line Avni 1 Mr Khanna
Fabulous
I'm in love with your RS Sanju 😊

Edited by Zenab78 - 8 years ago

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996203

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Posted: 8 years ago

#327

sorry for not replying individually ...

just saw the +1 post alert...😆😳

thankyou for the comments guys...and thankyou for liking the stories...

❤️

sanju😊

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996203

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Posted: 8 years ago

#328

#6c

neil came down stairs to find everyone(khannas,neela,nanno,ali,rhea) gathered in the hall...

neil: wow...wat a surprise..aaj sab saath mein dinner karenge?

they smiled at him

he found something fishy...he looked around...avni is missing...

and suddenly music starts...

Ullu-le...

and everyone start dancing ...actually imitating neil's dance...

Jaana naa ho jahaan wahin jaata hai

Dil ullu ka pattha hai

Phooti taqdeer kyun aazmaata hai

Dil ullu ka pattha hai

ali comes towards him jumping crazily...

Ullu-le Ullu-le

neil jerks him away...

and avni comes out recording this also...😛

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RaindropsNRoses

@RaindropsNRoses

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#329

Sweet one..😊
But why. So short

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996203

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#330

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avni:AHHH..

she screams again...and neil falls down the bed...

Neil:Kya hua?..kya hua?...gun kaha hai meri?...humla hua hai kya?

he speaks out in one breath...looking at the ceiling..

avni throws a pillow at him...and then he looks at her..

avni: idiot...

neil: kya hua avni..

avni: my water broke...😡

neil:kya?..nahi nahi baby..aaj nahi hoga...false alaram hai ye..😳..

avni:😲ARGG...😡

she trows another pillow at him...

Avni:hospital bag lao...

she goes out of the room...

neil: what?..KYA?...sach mein?..😲

'get the bag NEIL...quick...'he heard her scream..

his eyes widened...and he ran and came down...

Prakash was in driving seat...

shweta:kuch nahi .theek ho tum bacha..

avni sees neil..

avni: neil..bag kaha hai?

he looks down at his hands...

avni:😳😡

neil: one min...

avni had another contraction...

shweta makes her sit in the car...

neil quickly comes out with the bag...get's into the back seat...

shweta calls and informs neela..

prakash starts the car..and drives out quickly..

doctor: she is just 3cm now...admit kartein hai...u'll have to wait..

avni was breathing in and out loudly..

avni:HMMPP...UFFF...HUMMMPP..UFFF..

neil: it's okay it's ok...breath in ..breathout...

he said caressing her hair..

...

neela came there...

shweta: neela ji..

they came in to see avneil

neil: baby breath in ...breath out...

avni: shut upp...HUMMMPPP..

nurse came in...u'll have to exercise a bit madam..she showed the ball

avni's eyes widened seeing the ball...

and she started panting hard...

doctor:6 cm

avni sighed

neil: AVNI...hojayega...hojayega...

avni: neil...agar mai moti hojaungi toh phir bhi mujh se pyaar karoge na?

neill: kya baby?

avni:

neil: ofcoursee...haa...

doc: 9 cm...

avni looked at neil...

neil:PUSH AVNI...PUSH...

he said holding her hand...and she hit him..with that hand

Avni:ARRRGGG

avni: neil ye sab tumhare wajeh se ho raha hai...

neil: maine kya kiya baby?

avni: AHHH...UFFF..HMMM...

avni:kya kiya?...ha?...kya kiya?..yaad nahi hai tumne kya kiya?

neil:

avni:AHHH

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neil:AHHH

everyone came into the room...

avni came out of the washroom...

Avni;neil..neil kya hua?

shweta: kya hua tilllu...?

he opens his eyes to find all of them staring at him...

neil:avni...avni meri akeli ki galti nahi hai...i'm sorry..

avni:😕neil tum kya kehrahe ho..

prakash: neil beta..tum theek ho na?...doc ko bulau?

neil didn;t listen a word..

he's looking at avni ..

neil:9cm hai na...bas 1cm..hojayega..don't worry..

avni didn't understand a word..😕

prakash and shweta looked at each other...😲

she held his face and shouted...

avni:NEIL...NEIL...calm down...kuch nahi hua hai...

he stops and looks at her...her tummy was flat ...

neil:Bacha?

avni:NEIL?

avni makes him drink some water...

shweta: oho tillu..theek ho na tum?

neil looks aroound...

neil:Sapna tha...

he sighs in relief...

another quick and short one..

tell me how is it?😳

Edited by _SANJU - 8 years ago

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