LIOC: MG FF Part 25 Updated on Pg 122 on 4-4-2018

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IlaTanwar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#491

Hii

I have been obliged to those who read and comment on my story. I will be more obliged if the silent readers of my ff will comment their views on my story. It's really motivating to see the comments of the people who read it... I have lost some of the reader but those who stick and motivates I am really happy and Thankful to them.

Now, Before posting the next part I want to post the Pictures of the Few character who are as important as Maan, Geet, Jai, Gautam, and Shikha. I am thankful to RoopaAmrutha who took time from her busy schedule and helped in finding the faces for my characters for Jairaj, Tejaswini, Kabir, Malini, Dadima, Samarth and Lalita.

P.S. Keep Commenting Guys...

Thank You

With Regards

ILA

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#492

Characters

Geet's Adoptive Family-

1. Kabir Deshmukh-

He is a retire Police Officer. He was once a dedicated police officer but His father died and to handle the buisness he took voluntarily retirement from the police. He is best friend of Jairaj and known him from college days. He can do anything for his friend. He loves his daughter a lot and his son too. Very possessive about Geet.

2. Malini Deshmukh-

She is a housewife and wife of Kabir she met him in college and fell in love. She once craved for child but can't have so, she adopted Geet. She regrets being like that in past knowing that her friend is craving for the child too. now, she is a very understanding lady. She guides her children very well.

Geet's Real Family-

1. ACP Jairaj Handa-

An Honest ACP but currently charge with the corruption case. Right now he is in jail. He is very strict to make the culprit to face their punishment. He loves his family and had put good moral in his son. He loves his wife a lot. He misses his friend a lot as he can't meet him now and wants to have a contact.

2. Tejaswini Handa-

She is the wife of Jairaj Handa met him during one of the case which was handled by Jairaj and Jairaj fell for her. She loves her husband a lot and her son too but the circumstances made her hate her son Gautam. Currently, fighting for his husband to prove him innocent.

Maan's Family-

1. Samarth Khurana-

He is a famous Buisnesss Tycoon in India. Had flourished his business in foreign too. He hates Maan's profession as Maan is his only son and he wants his son to take over the business empire of his so that he can relax. Due to which he seldom taunts his son and causes the rift. but he is the man of principles and never have took advantage of his status. A complete honest business man. He believe in equality and never behave insolent and rude towards his employees.

2. Lalita Khurana-

She is the ice breaker between her husband and son. She understands the feeling of her son and his love towards the country and his job. But alos understand her husbands mind why he always end up hurting him. She supports Maan too but she is the only person who can make maan understand the reason too but she wants to let his son fulfill the dream.

2. Savitri Devi Khurana-

She is Maan's Dadima. Loves her grandson a lot. She also runs the NGO for young girls. She is very supportive and always take side of her grandson in front of her son.

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Hi guys i hope you like this update too. Please guys comment and tell me how you feel about this story in 4-3 lines i will be highly obliged. specially the persons who likes my story too... Please comment i like people who give reviews even if you dont like anything you can tell me that too...

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ILA

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Vibhuti Shah

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Posted: 8 years ago

#493

Lovely cs

Waiting for an update

Thanks for the pm

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#494

Originally posted by: nehaa9
nice character sketch

Read the story too...

It's in mid that i have updated Part 1 to 18 are posted before this...

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#495

Originally posted by: shah10
Lovely cs
Waiting for an update
Thanks for the pm

Part 1 to 18 are updated before it.

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nehaa9

@nehaa9

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#496

all parts are superb

maan inspector and geet lawyer interesting

now geet is having suspects

tejeswani warns gautam

intersting story

waiting for next part

cont soon dear

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#497

Originally posted by: nehaa9
all parts are superb
maan inspector and geet lawyer interesting
now geet is having suspects
tejeswani warns gautam
intersting story
waiting for next part
cont soon dear

Thnx dear will post it soon

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

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Posted: 8 years ago

#498

Awesome cs a bit too late to update don't u think

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#499

Originally posted by: nakh5683
Awesome cs a bit too late to update don't u think

I wasn't getting the faces for these characters that's why I was late and fortunately roopa helped me... When I conversed recently

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#500

great cs..
and the starts of the story.. followed by the line👍🏼
the fusion of inspector maan & lawyer geet is indeed interesting to read :)
all the best for this venture😉
tnx fr pm !!