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pri12

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Posted: 8 years ago

#211

Awsome...Read all parts in one go...plz update soon

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sosweetsumi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#212

oh god what had she found

please update soon.

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1070625

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Posted: 8 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: zyrah17
Nice update
countinue soon dear

Thanks 😊

Sure😳

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1070625

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Posted: 8 years ago

#214

Originally posted by: Nohsin10
Awesome update
What's wrong with Annika? Why is she crying?
O god I'm so excited to know everything
Thanks for updating

Thanks Nohsin

About Anika's crying you will get to know in next update..

Your welcome ❤️😳

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1070625

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Posted: 8 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: ehmmbhluvr
nyc one...would luv to read more..😊

Thanks dear.. Yeah you will definitely get more😊

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1070625

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Posted: 8 years ago

#216

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
awesome update yar
loved it...
I really don't mind mahi being part of this story...regarding seperation I really don't want that...
I think it's up to you...its your story and it should go according to your imagination

Thanks ❤️

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1070625

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Posted: 8 years ago

#217

i read it all in one go
i love this ... it's moving faster than the show at least

pinky should really be punished for everything she did to annika...poor annika , the things she has to go through and the fact that she doesn't remember her past so heart breaking

so shivaay is the sweetest man EVER ...his answers were perfect and reassuring
i like the fact that annika doesn't strike me as mahan in ur story
u know ... she seems to feel grudge towards pinky for what she's doing & she's totally right in doing so

loved it but the last one was too short for my poor heart😆😆😆
continue soon please

about the note u wrote before 8 chapter : i would love for mahi to be there IF & ONLY IF he's not the creepy guy who loves Annikaa & if he's (u know kind of like he's in the show with less crying0

about seperation ... i love the anguish when it's a MU BUT NOT THE SEPERATION THAT BECOMES SHIVAAY'S FAULT😆

i had read enough and seen enough of shivaay being blamed so personaly i don't mind Anika making a mistake causing Seperation or pinky creating a MU (i am bad that way😈)

but i will trust u to write ur story on ur own terms and the way u thought of it in the first place
Don't worry about comments and likes (they're becoming like trps😆😆)
my suggestion is ... keep writing this story as long as u r still in love with it ... & when u just can't take it anymore, end it

but please don't leave the story middle way ... it breaks fans hearts (read me)😆😆

Thanks❤️

Yes it's moving faster than show but updates are too much slow..

I am really sorry for that.. Tomorrow is my exam after that I am free for sometime and I will try my best to update it regularly😳

Pinky there is no place for should dear it's must..

she must be punished

Yes About Anika not remembering her past is heartbreaking.. .. she doesn't know her past just because of that anyone will come and say I am your mother.. but then it turned out to be a lie.. it's so heart wrenching to even think about it but Anika has faced it...

Yes Shivaay is the sweetest man ever except before his marriage with Anika😳 and I really hope you will like him in next updates too

Yes Anika will not be Mahan in this story I think in this story..I am bored with this.. How can someone be so much Mahan, always sacrificing with out any reason in daily soaps.. it gets on my nerves

Yes She feels grudge towards Pinky... I mean any normal people will do after seeing her reactions and listening to her talks..

About last update yeah that was too short I know but I was so much late and next chapter will be longer than this because they are going to be the most important and turning point of this story so I wrote this one and updated this because Pinky's time is near and that should be explained in detail😆

About Mahi I will think about him when I will be writing next update😳

About Separation.. you will get to know in further updates

About being Shivaay being wrong even I have read so much about this 😳 I assure you it will not happen here.. Mistakes are common yaar.. if you are human then it's must you do mistakes otherwise how you will learn what is right and what is wrong?

Thanks so much dear

Sure but they matter yaar.. I will try my best to not look at them and continue my work but the truth is if they can motivate then they can also be the reason of demotivation..

I can assure you I will not leave any story of mine in middle no matter what happens

Thanks once again dear..

P.S. May I know your name?

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1070625

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Posted: 8 years ago

#218

Originally posted by: CrzyPulviophile
OMG
you writers just knows how to kill us with that Chakku named cliffhangers.
I'm now intrigued about Anika's PS visit and what happened there though

😳😳

You will get to know about that in next update..😆

Thanks dear😊

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1070625

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Posted: 8 years ago

#219

Originally posted by: KashiTessa
Yaar the last line got my attention, her eyes showed hate, pain. Disgust and much more.
Confused what had happened in Police Station.
Waiting for next update

Yes last line is important...

You will get to know about that in next update..

Will try to update soon..

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1070625

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Posted: 8 years ago

#220

Originally posted by: lourel24
Loved it. I would love to read shivika separation but what was last line about. Whole family was there. N anika felt those emotions not for one but for all as. Why?? Or am I mistaken.

Thanks dear..

You will get to know about that in next update..

About Anika's emotions..

Last lines were something like this

She entered into the mansion.. everyone was sitting in the hall doing there works but Shivaay was pacing the hall with worry written all over his face.. he looks at her as soon as she enters

.. her eyes showing pain, hate, disgust and much more..

About whom they were and why they were you will get to know in next...

I think you will get the clue if you reread this lines...

Wait for further updates everything will be clear to you..

If not then feel free to ask...